on May 05, 2011 03:15 pm
Finally got around to giving some feedback. See? I don't forget.
I could see this happening. It's not exactly the happy ending I love :P but it was done well. I imagine that Ginny could get caught up in love and forget Draco's true nature--though I don't know if his true nature would be to kill the family of his wife . . . not after being married to her. I suppose it could though. I always have a hard time wrapping my head around insane, hardened Draco. It generally takes me an entire story to do so and this was short, but I think that worked for the piece.
It's typical of Draco to realize what he had when it's too late. You had some good lines in here too.
Name: SS Felton
on Feb 20, 2011 01:17 pm
It was nice. Was the Death Eater who killed her, Draco?
on Jul 11, 2010 04:22 pm
That story was touching.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
on Jul 10, 2010 10:20 pm
Wow. I had not seen her death coming. This was so beautiful.
Author's Response: I'm surprised that you didn't see it coming. I was sure the summary was too telling. That just goes to show you that you shouldn't judge your own work. I'm glad you liked it.
on Jul 09, 2010 07:38 am
Author's Response: I know. Thanks for the review.
on Jul 09, 2010 02:12 am
wow. that was so good. it made me cry a bit. short but very moving. i'd like to see the middle of ginny and draco's reaction and how draco's doing after her death.
Author's Response: Read Outweighed, that will have the only additional insight to this little story. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it.
on Jun 19, 2007 12:43 am
Oh, that was really good. I do wish that the conclusion had been extended a little bit more, but only a little bit. I actually like how it is short. Anyway, I really liked this story, thanks for posting it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Name: Scarlett Rayne
on Jan 15, 2007 10:52 am
I think that a one-shot from Ron's POV would be great!!
Name: Scarlett Rayne
on Jan 07, 2007 08:57 am
Wow! This is good!! I want more. No, I want the story that this should have been the sequel to. lol. In all seriousness I think it's great!
Author's Response: I actually am working on both a follow up story and the prequal to this one. Though, you'll find at the end of it and edited version of this one. There were somethings that needed to be different. What do you think of a one shot from Ron's point of veiw? Thank you so much for your wonderful compliment and I'm very glad you liked it.
on Jan 02, 2007 02:06 pm
I could see Ginny throwing herself inbetween them like that. *sigh* I like the balance of the rose at the beginning and at the end. If I understood, they lied to her parents about him being an order member, is that right? What happened to Ron? As always, with a one shot, I want more. (That is a compliment really.)
Author's Response: Ron is currently writing a journal entry about the battle, what led up to it and what happened after it.
Author's Response: As you can imagine he's having a bit of trouble with it in these emotional times.
on Dec 22, 2006 08:10 pm
Extremely short, but very well written and I guess the point of it is being short and vage, like urging us to imagine the rest..good thinking! Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you for seeing that. I think the most important part of a story is imagining what's going on. I'd hoped that little hints of what things should look like would help people see it in their own unique way as opposed to the way I see it, which would have included a tedious and lengthy description of the wrinkle on the bottom left corner of the paper. Anywho there is the possibility of a follow up story from Ron's perspective and of course the big lengthy story. All my stories are based on dreams so for me they are all in shocking detail which can cause problems when writing, when you experience everything at once, what do you write first?
Name: nun outfits are cool
on Nov 09, 2006 12:18 pm
aaw, this is sad.
vair well written, and all that.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. ^^
on Nov 06, 2006 03:44 pm
Wow. I loved it. I'm not really a fan of angst but this hit the spot for me. I love romantic sad fics though. I really like it but I'm confused at who killed Ginny a little. Was it Ron? And who at the end realized that love should have outweighed ambition? Anyway, thanks. It was a good story. Short, but good.
Author's Response: Although it was late in coming, I've gone back and made some changes that should have cleared things up a bit.