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I could visualize it well :-)
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I love this alternate reality fairy tale! (The original Grimm's fairy tales, as you may know, could be incredibly sinister and frightening.) So much of this is mysterious, but I think we get enough to understand what's happened to her already as much as we need to. I love the writing style! Looking forward to more. :)
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What an intriguing start! Your writing reminds me of a Robin McKinley novel, which I think is very fitting considering the fairytale inspiration. I've only read one Robin McKinley novel, though, so, to be more accurate, maybe I should say your writing reminds me of her writing in the novel Spindle's End.
I always love seeing alternate universes and how authors tackle this pairing in a non-canon world. I think this is a great start! Thanks for sharing!
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My curiosity is aroused! I'd love to read more :-)
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Very intriguing so far! Your style of writing seems great for storytelling! Keep up the good work; looking forward to reading more.
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