I cannot believe that I JUST NOW read this story, after following religiously(and each time thirsting for more) CIC.
I love this story! Yes! I do! Sorry for being so incoherent, it's just- WOW, that was soooo good! *giggles like mad*
I'm off to read the sequel! :D

this story is so beastly good its insane. haha. great job!

the best and worst thing about this story is you can't just read one chapter, when you get to the end you have to keep reading. that's really amazing, not everybody holds attention to the end like that.

This story was amazing, a few noticeable errors commonly created by spell checkers.
no complaints, love the shipping, and the ending.
myself i never could picture harry straight... but thats just me, i suppose.
loved the story,
Charlee J Toombs

When writing a review for a chapter in this story, I come to realise that within the chapter, almost every chapter, there is a total mood shift. By that, I mean how Draco and Ginny are getting along and everything's going well and then by the end they're at each other's throats, with little chance that either can understand each other's point of view. I don't know how you manage it and make it all seem plausible, but you do. It's fun to read, that's for sure.

I was going to comment on Ginny's devious streak - making Draco believe she's angry at her to hear him confess his feelings for her. The Twins' mischievousness has definitely rubbed off on Ginny.
I like how realistic the argument in this chapter between Draco and Ginny is. The misunderstandings and frustrations due to them are palpable and it's totally understandable how Draco is reluctant to believe Vincent is aiming to destroy the unicorns and also why Ginny believes Draco is being uncomprehendingly stubborn in this regard. 'Tis great, engaging writing.

“That’s because you haven’t seen her at all,”
What a wonderful line! I think it's my favourite, so far. It sums up Draco's growing respect and admiration for Ginny and hints at his growing feelings for her. Lovely.

I like how Ginny can sense dark magic; it brings a whole new dimension to the story and her character, adding another reason why she is so determined to ban Dark Magic across Europe.

I read this whole story in one sitting!
It sucked me in and I couldn't get out!
Brilliantly written and a all round wonderful story.
LOVED IT!

the story was good.at was too emotional.it should have a sequel.do write it.but..ginny is 2 small 4 draco...

this is a very fitting chapter and your summary justifies it now. I'm gonna keep reading this even if my eyes fall out :D

For all your whinnying about your inability to write fluff and endings, I think you did an admirable job of both. This story was definitely interesting. It was strange because the feeling of it, the kind of stuff you dealt with was, kind of, what I've read a million times before. But then your way of pulling it off made it, without a doubt, original. And the unicorns was certainly an individual idea.

By the way, I loved Darien and Vincent. It's always hard to create believable, interesting original characters, and you did a wonderful job. I especially liked the way I could feel Darien's air how he came in a the tone of the room immediately darkened. You were consistent with that and it made him, with only half the reader’s conscious mind noticing, a much more frightening demeanor and made his twist less anticipated.

I’m interested to see your future stories. Keep writing, and good luck

Draco sure did anger me to the 9th dregree of hell. How could he use her papers how ... what an ass and yet I still love him in this story. :(

Author's Response: Exactly! He is still a bit on the treacherous side, in that he'll do whatever it takes to achieve his goal, especially when the temperamental little Ginny essentially delcares war on him/his goals when he really didn't do *that much* wrong. But, he kind of redeems himself, not in that he realizes that he was wrong, but that he realizes what he lost due to his treacherous ways... but then Ginny bent a little, and he bent a little, and voila! Happily ever after!

I really enjoyed this story.  Great characters, really exciting plot, beautifully written descriptions (I especially love the way you described the Manor in Bulgaria).  Neville as a dark wizard I wasn't so sure of, probably more because the name "Longbottom" sounds so very unscary, rather than because he seemed OOC.  I actually liked the motivation you gave him for being resentful and turning to the other side.  Great job, going off to read your other stuff now!


Author's Response: Thank you!  And you are absolutely right about Neville being OOC, because I love him like woah and know that he's Gryffindor to the core and would never become like that... But he's the only one that really fit the 'invisible' type that I needed for the story... I felt bad about abusing poor Neville this way, but it had to be done!

I liked it pretty much - good pace and a developed story! (some typing mistakes - but never mind) But haven't you said : Note the second: There will not be a sequel to this story. Sorry if you were hoping. Hey and now I see: the is a sequel What made you write it?

Author's Response: Well, the most random answer you could possibly ever expect... I was actually watching a really bad episode of Charmed this summer, and it gave me a bit on an idea, and that idea lead to another one and another one, and eventually, I had a whole D/G fic plotted out in my head... but then it just seemed to fit with my Ginny and Draco from VI, so I created a sequel!  I think I just became attached to this 'universe' and didn't want to let them go.