Name: Caroline reviewed
Molly smiles on Aug 19, 2005 11:26 am
It's a stunning and simply beautiful story :)
We love it, and don't hate it. Sweetheart, keep on writing!
Name: Someone reviewed
Molly smiles on Jul 30, 2005 08:16 am
It was so sad it made me cry... It's a really good story, just a bit hard to imagine Malfoy so tender... Keep writing! You're really good!
Name: Moranar reviewed
Molly smiles on Jul 23, 2005 09:01 am
Read. Liked. Crappy with reviews. Still wanted to let you know.
Name: katherine reviewed
Molly smiles on Jul 07, 2005 01:37 am
It was a lovely story, and well written. Thanks for putting it 'out there' so to speak, so that we can have the pleasure of reading it.
Name: Judith Durkin reviewed
Molly smiles on Apr 15, 2005 11:59 pm
This story is amazing. it is straight from the heart and absolutly beautiful. It may not have the best story line ever, but it made me cry and I love it. It takes me straight home. You are amazing.
Author's Response: wow, thank you.
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Molly smiles on Apr 04, 2005 06:59 pm
I was incredibly moved by this story. I'm not a fan of song fics, but this had all of the other elements I find so essential in a story. It set a tone, told a story, and had a lot of heart. I loved the characters. They were well developed, and I really felt them. I also LOVED the way they spoke of Ginny as still being very much present even though she had died. Which is the way it is when someone essential to you has passed away. They don't disappear. Thanks!
Author's Response: thankyou for this wonderful review!
Name: rosiecheeks reviewed
Molly smiles on Feb 20, 2005 07:07 pm
frist of all the story wasn't that bad. It's was great in a sad type of way. keep writing
Author's Response: thank you, yeah its a pretty sad story
Name: KENDRA reviewed
Molly smiles on Feb 13, 2005 10:34 pm
That was beautifful!
Author's Response: thank you!
Name: Rachel reviewed
Molly smiles on Feb 03, 2005 05:58 pm
I am amazed at your use of very discriptive words. If you didnt say that you were very young I would have thought of you to be much older. The way you discribe Draco and Molly's relationship and personality were well written and very believeable. The story seem well written and well planned.
And now that my critique on the story is done let me swtich to my emotional and teen side of me to say this: OMG! I loved it! I totally cried and the story was so sweet! It felt so real to me and it was great! I surre hope that you wirte some more! This was great! Great Job!
Author's Response: YESSS! thankyou for the very nice review, i feel all warm and fuzzy inside!
Name: Band_Geek reviewed
Molly smiles on Feb 03, 2005 08:47 am
That was so good! I really liked it. I almost cried. It was very good.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Clarkie reviewed
Molly smiles on Dec 14, 2004 10:40 am
You've written a story. That makes you an author. Even if it were a horrible story (which it is not) you would still be an author. I like this story, it's sweet and simple and charming. Some of the imagery seems somehow rather idealistic, but it works.
All in all rather good. I hope you deign to write somemore for us. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you, I meant I'm not an author like JKR, Like I'm not on her level.
Name: Ash reviewed
Molly smiles on Oct 29, 2004 12:10 pm
Hi! I like your story!
Author's Response: Thankyou
Name: Liz reviewed
Molly smiles on Oct 14, 2004 06:09 pm
That was beautifull, it made me cry, it made my heart ache. You are a master at writing believable emotion, that is a rare gift, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thankyou, I'm really glad you liked it, for now on I'm putting a warning label on my stories that says *WARNING: May cause extreme leakage in the eyes, suggested remedies: A box of Kleenex.
Name: luthien ringgerl reviewed
Molly smiles on Oct 03, 2004 04:07 am
VERY VERY VERY GOOD
Author's Response: Thankyou
Name: Nita G Isenhour reviewed
Molly smiles on Oct 02, 2004 04:09 am
Good job here. Sad, but sometimes life just is. You said a couple times in your replies that you're 'just a kid', don't let that stop your writing!
Author's Response: Yes well, because im young i have a short attention span, so it makes writing a decent length story close to impossible. I'm very suprised i completed this one.
Name: mary reviewed
Molly smiles on Oct 01, 2004 12:08 pm
that was such a beautiful piece, the writing was amazing, it made me cry. I liked howyou potrayed the father daughter bond, it was very interesting
Author's Response: THANKYOU SO MUCH ALL YOU GUYS! I can't beleive all the responses my story got, i had no idea i could actually bring out that much emotion in people, I'm only a kid so it's like wow i suck compared to these people. Anyway thank you so much everyone who read it it means alot to me that you liked my story.
Name: Jawy reviewed
Molly smiles on Oct 01, 2004 07:12 am
I thought this story was really bittersweet. Though it did occur to me that Molly was quite mature for a six-year-old, but it was fine otherwise. Hope you write more!
Author's Response: Thanx Jawy i just thought I'd tell you how much i LOVE your story On Fire, its really great.
Name: Anonymous reviewed
Molly smiles on Oct 01, 2004 12:43 am
You've got tons of great potential as an author. I look forward to reading more of your fiction and hope to see some angsty D/G. While the cliche may be something I don't like as much, I found your story very sweet. Can't wait for a new fic from you, maybe something we'd never expect?
Author's Response: Thankyou, but i have to say this just to warn everyone, i suck at romance, seriously i'm pathetic. I'm better at sad and weird stuff. But its worth a shot, right?
Name: Brooke reviewed
Molly smiles on Oct 01, 2004 12:13 am
I enjoyed it a lot. So much so that I downloaded the song! The lyrics were perfect for it. Well done!
Author's Response: Thankyou. I must admit i listen to this song an unhealthy amount of times. It's rather sad, actually.
Name: Disty reviewed
Molly smiles on Sep 30, 2004 08:09 pm
This story is great. It's so sad, and so touching. By the end of the story I was totally trying not to cry. It was really really touching (I already said that) :P
Author's Response: Thankyou, and I'm touched that you think my story is Touching.
Name: tina reviewed
Molly smiles on Sep 30, 2004 07:36 pm
i liked it, it was sad and everything but it was so bittersweet and i needed something like that. it was really good. keep writing!!!! maybe not so sad next time???
Author's Response: Yes, I know it was sad, but this was basicly a story i needed to get out of my system. I'll try to think of something happy next time, but to quote my 2nd fave song "It's not always rainbows and butterflies, its compromise"