WOW!?!? That was awesome. It's nice to read confused and insatiable Draco every now and then... and the wooing part was the best... especially the pictures in her icebox!?!?
I looooooooved this. <333I really liked how you detailed the progression of their relationship, and I'm glad you explained why Draco got all 'uninterested' that first time, because I had my own excuses all ready if you weren't going to provide one. :)) Though now that I know the truth, I WEEP for all the time they lost, WEEP.
I loved Draco's attempt to woo her, and how silly they both were for getting their wires crossed so utterly. Sue me, I love that kind of thing, particularly when it's done well, which it was here. But really, they should have gone through their entire relationship totally mute, and maybe then they wouldn't have misunderstood one another so often. Heehee.
Though there are many such parts, I think my favorite bit was this:
"Oh, I don't know, then you'd have to take them off me," said Draco, swinging the baby up to his shoulder and patting him vigorously.
First, I like Draco's very Draco response. <g> Secondly, the idea of him cluelessly trying to burp this poor child just made me go into a fit of giggles.Okay, my love for the story proclaimed and all the rest of it said, I found a couple of typos (see, I can be helpful):
better able to take him to shreds calmly
I think you probably mean tear him to shreds...
she reared up and whispered, "Marrying me."
Don't think you need to conjugate 'marry' ... though I'm sure Draco and Ginny will give it their fullest attention. Bwahahahaha. ;)
*very happy satisfied sigh* I knew it would turn out wonderful and smutty. I had faith in you! Draco is sweet with his attempts to woo her (silly Blaise I might add), but it was effective nonetheless. I loved the ending - he really has loved her forever and she was just too stupid to see it. I just glad that they managed to get their act together and get on with the smutty goodness. Thank you for the fantastic cheer - I so needed that today.
Mynuet, you have done it again! I love all your stories, and this one is every bit as good as all the others. I know you're gonna think I'm annoying for saying this, but can we PLEEEEEEEAAAAASSSEE have the Cabana Boy Draco Series sequel? Pretty please? It was the first ever story i read on this site, and reading this story reminded me of it.
Loved it!! How adorable is Draco when he's trying to get his own way and Gin isn't playing fair??
Just what I needed to cheer me up. I've been immersed in work, house, and self-pity. Lovely D/G smut, angst and true love ... thank you.
Amazing as always. I loved this one, I wanted them to get together and then Draco goes and gets all romantic and she finally gets it. Yea! Keep up the great work.