Name: b1elliot reviewed
Part Eight on Aug 04, 2015 02:20 pm
Another intense chapter. Love it! Thanks!
Name: Boogum reviewed
Part Eight on Jan 29, 2011 08:24 pm
I know Draco is being a git and all, but I can't help but feel for him. I hope something will work out for them.
Name: Dementors_Kiss reviewed
Part Eight on Feb 17, 2010 04:39 am
Another great chapter.
Malfoy is such as ass, but he's hot, and has impeccably good taste in clothes and whatnot. I find myself strangely attracted to his foppishness.
I love when Ginny said he was the most girly boy she's ever met. I don't think that was in this chapter, but it was immensely funny.
Name: Ceridwen reviewed
Part Eight on Aug 24, 2009 05:51 am
Time without meetings... We should have forseen that, right? I pity Draco really much by now, this Hogwarts teacher job must have become just AWFUL for him. On the other hand, you described that part very well. I can just picture the whole situation and feel with him. *sighs*
It was fun to read about Ron, Hermione, Harry and Ginny discussing what Draco might be "up to" - reminded me greatly of "The Half blood prince". ;)
And the bad word in the library... that's so frighteningly realistic! I can definitely understand Hermione at that point. I wouldn't try to be friendly anymore if I were her (or Ron, or Harry... but they're suspicious about Draco anyway, aren't they?). Oh, what a frustrated dork he was. I like his flaws just as much as his positive traits. Though his stubborness with muggle-borns is REALLY prejudiced.
I was kind of satisfied when Ginny pulled away and gave him a tongue-lashing. Then the ignoring period... pretty reasonable however, with that, er, sleep-walking of Ginny's and Draco's behaviour (towards his pupils), a bit odd.
So, then she finally told someone! Zoë... well, didn't go to bad, and I actually loved reading the part where they giggled. Must have been a relief for Ginny. And I've liked Zoë's character for the whole story. =)
There was some hope at last... really complicated everything, the accident in Potions was certainly hard for her (ah, mentioning that, I don't think it's too bad if you don't know much about that Actinonin - it's the wizarding world after all, haha, and I wouldn't ever be able to correct you either because my knowledge is probably far worse than yours *laughs*).
Then the questions about their future... it still lets the fic be suspenseful, and I didn't have a clue what was going to happen to them.
That's it to say for this chapter.
Name: Myst reviewed
Part Eight on Sep 11, 2006 08:50 pm
Positively soaked up this chapter without even realizing it. Getting intense =)
Name: Sunia reviewed
Part Eight on Feb 11, 2006 12:12 pm
Good chapter and by the way I found this online:
Actinonin
Description: Antibiotic that demonstrates anti-tumor activity. Also unique antibacterial agent. Inhibitor of leucine aminopeptidase.
Chemical Formula: C19H35N3O5
Chemical Name: : 3-((1-((2-[Hydroxymethyl]-1-pyrrolidinyl)carbonyl)-2-methylpropyl)carbamoyl)octanohydroxamic acid
Molecular Weight: M.W. 385.5
Solubility: Soluble in Ethanol
CAS Number: CAS [13434-13-4]
Product Status: Currently on Back Order
Appearance: White to Off-White Powder
Purity: >98%
Handling: Store in Tightly Sealed Vial.
Storage: Room Temperature.
Name: Owl reviewed
Part Eight on Feb 01, 2006 08:22 pm
Very good character development