Name: inuyasha's love slave reviewed
1 on May 30, 2006 09:33 am
great!
Name: toothy reviewed
1 on May 06, 2006 05:26 pm
Wow! That was pretty good! Sweet to ^^
Name: Wierdo reviewed
1 on Mar 30, 2006 03:12 pm
it is very well written, yet i do not like the story of Ginny and Malfoy. Keeping this in mind, I can't stop myself from reading. As i have said, it is very well-written, but she likes Malfoy. I HATE that. Harry is best for her.
Name: Pickles reviewed
1 on Mar 27, 2006 10:06 am
awesome....you write a lot like Rowling....very interesting...can't wait for the lemon
Name: Betz reviewed
12 on Mar 29, 2005 06:44 pm
Why do I get the feeling that Lord Morpheus had inhabited Dumbledore's body during that little interlude in his office, or at least Lord Morpheus and Dumbledore are some how connected. I thought when the sky was night Ginny was going to ahve another meeting with Morpheus. What was Ginny's wish? She never did voice it, but Lord Morpheus know what it was in her heart? Only one more chapter. Hope you ansswer all my questions or I'm emailing you a list of questions I want answered.
Name: Betz reviewed
11 on Mar 29, 2005 06:02 pm
That was an interesting turn of events...Milicent, Pansy...Luna. Is Millie and Luna having a thing? SOunds like it. So Draco's carcass isn't strung up from the hightest tower in the castle...interesting, what did they do? Put Ron in a full body bind and then cast an Obliviate on him? Nice explanation of events. Great story.
Name: Betz reviewed
10 on Mar 29, 2005 05:21 pm
Harry to the rescue again wouldn't you know. Do you think you could do a sub-chapter with the interrogation Moody gave Draco? I would have loved to ahve been a fly on the wall at that little bit of grilling/confession that happened. Well, at least Ginny made it clear before she passed out she wanted it and DDraco didn't rape her. Anyone got a tranquilizer gun for Poppy? See how she likes it. Well, can't wait to find out what Draco told Albus. Will Draco and Ginny have their own binding spell from this encounter? And what will Molly say when she finds out her daughter willingly bedded a Malfoy? And begged for it! Oh, can't wait to see what happens next. Off to read the next chapter. Brilliant, sheer brilliant storytelling.
Name: Betz reviewed
9 on Mar 29, 2005 04:51 pm
That was an utterly fabulous first time...hell anytime sex scene. Draco's confession of his feeling for Ginny was moving and this chapter just left me breathless. And with the end of th chapter, I was wondering if someone from the Burrow would come fetch Ginny, but it seems someone else beat the Weasley clan to the punch. And with a cliffe like that, I'm glad I waited until this fic was complete before reading as I don't think I could have handled the wait for the next chapter. (Deep breath) Okay, on to the next chapter and to learn of Draco and GInny's fate in the situation that is possibly worse that Ron, Harry and the rest of her brothers finding her naked with a naked Draco, kissing naked....did I mention naked?
Name: Betz reviewed
1 on Mar 29, 2005 02:03 pm
Aaaaaaaahhhhhhh, thank God for brothers like George. My breath is shuddering fromthat exchange in teh snow. SO intense, so heart-felt, so wonderul and electric. I wish I could immediately go on to read the next chapter, but I have to go pick my son up from preschool now, so I must sit and stew a while until I can jump back on the computer. ACK!
Name: Betz reviewed
7 on Mar 29, 2005 01:48 pm
Apple, forbidden knowledge...ah, the sweetness of knowing. And could somebody drag Molly out back and shoot her for me? Honestly, giving up her daughter like that like she's some...some thing, somemachine to be turned on, used and somehow produce the solutions to everyone's problems. "Yes, dear, go shag Harry. It'll be good for everyone if you do dear. Nevre mind you heart's not into it, jsut lay back, relax and think of something pleasant while Harry rends your hymen in two...I'll give you advice on bedding man afterwards and keep you ignorant of the facts...just be a good little instument for Harry to use." I can't believe the tone her mother is taking with her. For the greater good my ass! And if Harry has been to a house of ill repute, he certainly didn't learn anything there, since he has no idea how to seduce a woman. Or is he used to them just flopping on thier back while he thrusts his willie in and out a few times and the woman pretends to enjoyu it. Your story is royally pissing me off. GRRRRRR! Great fic, on to the next chapter.
Name: Betz reviewed
6 on Mar 29, 2005 01:11 pm
(Sigh...a sigh of longing) Oh, so close. They were both so close to admitting there was more than using each other behind thier motives. Now I'm wondering what is going on with Pansy and Draco and what the deal is between them. I'm sure more of that is to come in future chatpers. Wonder if GInny will remember to owl Luna about the scene in the shop and what Pansy was on about.
Name: Betz reviewed
5 on Mar 29, 2005 12:46 pm
Oh my! Ginny needs to be free and instinctually her body knew before her heart or mind did. Harry - wrong, Draco - right. Amazing how that first can be when it's right...or deliciously forbidden. Thank God Hermione has the knowledge to set Ginny free. Sex magic...potent stuff and awonderful plot device in most fics, certainly so in this one. On to the next chapter.
Name: Betz reviewed
1 on Mar 29, 2005 12:20 pm
GGrrrrrooooaaaannnn! Harry and Molly. I can't decide who is more clueless. Springing marriage on Ginny like that. "Oh dear, by the way, we've all decided for you that you're going to marry Harry. Isn't that wonderful?" No, not really when she had no choice in the matter. At least Harry could have played the part better by bringing a ring a proposing, pretending he didn't know she knew. What a great thick-headed pillock! Harry is anything but one smooth operator. I swear, must men be so clueless to romance? He should have brought a ring, some flowers and not just alcohol in hopes of losening her up. At least he brought something and the fruit/cheese basket. (Rolls eyes) I'm with George...don't do anythything unless you want to. And someone cast a binding charm on Fred so he's not around to shove those two together. Honestly! I feel so much empathy for Ginny - having once been on the end of my mother's plan to set me up with this guy that she harped on me to go out with. Disgust...that's what I feel disgust at the situation and empathy for Ginny. On to chapter 5.
Name: Betz reviewed
1 on Mar 29, 2005 11:37 am
Now I just want to cry for poor Ginny. Her future being determined by others, being forced into a marraige she's not sure she wanted in the first place, I have a cold numbness over the thought of someone arranging a marriage for me at such a young age. No wonder she felt something wrong when Harry kissed her and his weird vibes. Does Harry want to marry her of his own free will or has this only got something to do with winning the war and the special connection Ginny and Harry have with Riddle/Voldemort? I feel so sorry for GInny right now. On to read chapter 4.
Name: Betz reviewed
2 on Mar 29, 2005 10:45 am
Oh my, interesting exchange in the shop that summer. I still want to see a bit more of the interaction between Ginny and Harry out of curiosity. Is it that Harry is plain vanilla - safe and simple - and Draco is the forbidden and intoxicating triple rum raisin syballant chocolate delight ice cream flavor? Or is it that Ginny can't connect with Harry, now that she has his attention, yet can with Draco? On to chapter 3.
Name: Betz reviewed
1 on Mar 29, 2005 10:06 am
Yeah! It's complete now, so I can read it without waiting for new chapters. Sorry, but no more WIPs, I'm at my limit. Any more and my brain shall burst. Brilliant first chapter. Ginny has now got what she wanted and the sun doesn't seem any brighter, nor do the roses smell any sweeter. Dating Harry now seems to be an anitclimatic revelation. Danger girl needs some danger in her life...hmmm, now who could fulfil that little need? On to ch2.
Name: euridice reviewed
1 on Mar 11, 2005 10:49 am
aaaargh!!! really dificult to understand, especially for a poor italian reader who didn't know at all that this was part of a trilogy!!! ok, now i'll have to read the other two stories, i suppose...
Name: Aaralyn reviewed
12 on Mar 09, 2005 09:16 pm
Ok, something weird here is going on, and I need to know what it is!
Name: Cal Princess 2008 reviewed
12 on Mar 07, 2005 11:46 am
OMG OMG OMG !!!!! A new chappie! I've been waiting for this, and you definitely didn't dissappoint! Top-knotch work, and I can't wait to see the next chappie.
Name: rembrandt reviewed
12 on Mar 06, 2005 08:42 pm
"I arrive and I dream?" What on earth? I'm rather confused...but I'm happy to see those two together...please, update soon - I must know what happens once they step into that room!
Name: Clannadlvr reviewed
12 on Mar 06, 2005 05:52 pm
Uh oh. Let me say it again. Uh oh. Something about this situation does NOT bode well for the two of them. And the words on the door...I arrive, I dream...has so much of what they've already been through been a dream? Will they remember everything once they cross the threshold? Gah! You've done such a great job of dropping hints but withholding their meaning. I can't wait to read more!
Name: Lyss reviewed
12 on Mar 06, 2005 04:45 pm
That was simply wonderful. I've grown very fond of your writing, and you have become one of the very few fanfiction authors which I read any more. I started to grow bored with the same basic plots, horrible spelling, grammar and usage, and very dull vocabularies. Your stories are original and have vibrant language that paints vivid pictures in the mind's eye. I look forward to seeing more of this!
Lyss
Name: Dandy reviewed
12 on Mar 06, 2005 11:10 am
Oh man! Loved this chapter. Very creative, and so sweet! Can't wait for the next one! Great job!
Name: Shriya reviewed
12 on Mar 06, 2005 10:21 am
This story gets better as it continues... you just created such a wonderful mood in this chapter was contrasted so nicely with the dotty last chapter. Last chapter was just so off-kilter and dotty (especially Millicent Bulstrode!) that I was taken unawares when I read this chapter. I know this sounds odd, but I just felt like I was reading this in sepia. You know the brown print of pictures? Every image you sketched out in this chapter I seemed to see in sepia. The scratchy radio especially with the nostalgic tone, but then the room that took forever to get to, and Ginny and Draco facing Dumbledore across a desk... as well as Harry and Ginny's talk in the entryway. (I loved the slip of Harry/Tonks, nice to see he might get his own happy ending as well!) I just adored this chapter, and I can't help but feel that since they were in such a time-less tower that there's something different about where they're returning... going back in the past, maybe? Whatever it is, I'm very excited for the next chapter especially when this chapter was just so... well, it painted wonderful pictures for me.
Name: ser reviewed
12 on Mar 06, 2005 06:35 am
I was all disillusioned into thinking that now everything’s been cleared up with Draco there would be fluff galore in this chapter. But I was wrong. And that’s why I enjoy reading this so much. You constantly leave me guessing. And now I have a feeling things will get much worse before they get better. And what on earth is going on with Dumbledore??? He knows something, and he doesn't seem too overjoyed with Draco's renouncement of the death eaters. Which brings me to my second question; Has Draco truly turned his back on the Death Eaters? Ginny picked up on the way he only swore never to harm her, and I'm curious to see if it really came to it, if Draco would actually turn his back on everything he's known for his entire life. I look forward to the next chapter.