Name: Embellished reviewed
12 on Mar 06, 2005 06:24 am
I admit that I have mixed feelings about this story. On one hand, I like it a lot. The characters seem alive and interesting, and the plot is interesting. I also like the sense that it is part of something bigger. But I do find it fairly confusing at times... Maybe things will be cleared up later?
Name: widdleshins reviewed
12 on Mar 05, 2005 08:57 pm
somewhat fluffy. nice, though, but tended to drag on a bit.
Name: Aaralyn reviewed
11 on Mar 03, 2005 02:30 pm
*gasp* This is WONDERFUL! Oh PLEASE don't let anything really bad happen! At least let them be together in the end! I really love this story. You're a really good writer too! I'm impressed.
Name: Rosmerta reviewed
11 on Mar 02, 2005 07:13 pm
I'm dying! When will the next chapter be here? I'm new to fanfic, and actually didn't really enjoy many, until I read this. I'm hooked. I was totally anti-Draco, and you've completely won me over! Totally crushin' on him now!
Name: Clannadlvr reviewed
11 on Mar 01, 2005 01:17 pm
A friend recommended this story to me and I am utterly hooked! I love tales where Draco forgoes his destiny for Ginny...and you have added in just the right amount of darkness so that it doesn't dissolve into a simple romance.
Wonderful job and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: Marie reviewed
11 on Feb 22, 2005 11:48 pm
Is there going to be more???
Name: Cal Princess 2008 reviewed
11 on Feb 21, 2005 04:31 pm
OMG! OMG! I think my favorite part was when Draco slipped into bed with her - it was just so heart-wrenching! I absolutely love this story and now it's got romance! squee! I can't wait for the next chappte!
Name: rebecca aka endorwitch reviewed
2 on Feb 21, 2005 01:02 am
i started reading the short version on the DG mailing listsand decided i would just come and read it here. am this is as far as i got on the mailing list )I had saved all the emails). i cant wait to see what happens!!
Name: Dead reviewed
11 on Feb 20, 2005 09:27 pm
There's some great character portrayals in this chapter. I love how you made Millicent Bulstrode really chirpy like; it was a very different charactirization that I haven't read very much. I liked it a lot. Molly's character was written very well. There wasn't a whole lot of dialogue between Ginny and Molly, but it was very meaningful. I love how at the end Draco couldn't sleep without Ginny. It was so awww-sweet. Can't wait until the next chapter!
Name: Kinki reviewed
11 on Feb 20, 2005 08:42 pm
Yay more! I love the angst and I do like the way you have portrayed everyone - they may have a few OOC tendencies but they work in the context of the story and seem to slid in seamlessly and so aren't jarring to read.
Name: Azure Black reviewed
11 on Feb 20, 2005 07:10 am
i love this story. it really interesting twists in it. i know you said you though that some characters in this chapter were abit OoC, but i think i works well, certainly for the line your story is taking. Please update soon, it's going really well!!!
Name: ser reviewed
11 on Feb 20, 2005 05:07 am
I loved the little interaction between Molly and Ginny. I've always seen Molly as the type of women who fimrly believes she's always right no matter what, and this was shown firmly in her discussion with Ginny.
The bit with Millicent was great. She's an interesting character, and I'd love to see what else you do with her.
Wonderful bit of Draco showing his true feelings. Sweet with just a dash of angst.
Can't wait to see what will happen when Ginny wakes up.
Name: LoOuDa reviewed
11 on Feb 19, 2005 05:03 pm
Nice chapter!!!!
Name: Funnykido reviewed
11 on Feb 19, 2005 02:56 pm
More fluff! Yes! I WANT THIS CONFLICT RESOLVED! Although truth be told, I'm not even exactly sure WHAT the conflict is anymore. I mean the whole "Did Draco rape her/not?" thing, but what about the Death Eaters? So a little confused about that. .
But awesome chap as usual!
Name: emvee reviewed
11 on Feb 19, 2005 01:18 pm
ooooooo i like this soooo much! i thought your molly was great. she loves her children deeply and no matter how old or mature they become she will always treat them like children. i like your luna also. shes a difficult character to write but i like your take on her. i am enjoying this story.please do continue.
Name: madalene3666 reviewed
11 on Feb 19, 2005 12:33 pm
Oh, I do love this story. I'm desperately waiting to see how this all turns out. And I think you've written Molly quite accurately - she is a firm believer in the adage 'Mother knows best', all evidence to the contrary.
Name: Laura reviewed
10 on Feb 18, 2005 01:03 pm
This story is so great! Best one I've read yet!
Name: dandy reviewed
10 on Feb 14, 2005 04:00 pm
LOVED this chapter! Can't wait until the next one. You really have a talent for writing. Aweosme job and do continue!!!
Name: emvee reviewed
10 on Feb 08, 2005 06:19 pm
deatheaters! who would have guessed! thanks for the update. luv it. keep going!
Name: Laurels reviewed
10 on Feb 08, 2005 12:08 am
I nearly fell off my chair twice in this chapter. The first time was when Draco told Ginny he had seen it all before and not to be shy... I nearly died, I thought he was playing with her. I really should have known better. But I did nearly die when he said that.
The second time was when Ron shoved Draco up against the wall... silly everyone jumping to conclutions.... the way Harry reacted was good and bad. When he implied Ginny destroyed their chances against Voldie because she slept with Draco I wanted to slap him, but he did stop Ron from hurting Draco further and that made me want to hug him...
The way Draco said 'I love you' to Ginny made me so happy, espacially when he said he couldn't think of anyone he would rather die with. It was just so cute.
I urst out laughing when Ginny said she had sex with Draco Malfoy because she wanted too.... that was excellent!
This chapter had everything. I really enjoyed reading it! This story has been fantastic!
Name: Dead reviewed
10 on Feb 07, 2005 03:18 pm
Man, I read this all in one go..great story so far. I love the plot, the conflict, the suspense, the angst, the everything! I love the way you write and the situations the characters are put in. I feel like smacking some of those characters though! Stupid and stubborn haha. Update soon!
Name: Cal Princess 2008 reviewed
10 on Feb 07, 2005 03:03 pm
Wow! I can't wait to see what happens when Draco and Ginny see one another again - this story is really turning out to be more interesting and romantic than I thought - I can't wait for the two of them to be together! :)
Name: Funnykido reviewed
10 on Feb 07, 2005 02:23 pm
I like this chapter a lot. I'm glad there was a bit of fluff here, since the rest is a bit angsty. I love how you weave the story, everything that seems so trivial, comes up in later chapters, really nice! I'm guessing more angst coming up? Hopefully not, but I have no idea of how long we have left in this story. But I can't wait until the next chap!
Name: EB_sirius_lives_on reviewed
10 on Feb 07, 2005 02:17 pm
Heck yes. So Lucius is dead, eh? Pity. OH well, as long as Draco's still alive. Good chapter. Next please....
Name: JuliusCaesar reviewed
10 on Feb 07, 2005 10:44 am
you know, its absolutely sinful keeping us in the lurch like that! what will happen to draco?! i can't wait for the next update!