Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
6 on Jun 03, 2008 12:35 pm
There are editorial comments in this chapter, you know. A bunch of notes about hypocausts, or whatever they're called.
Name: NNC reviewed
6 on Nov 03, 2005 05:40 am
Though this story is confusing, it calls out to me to figure it out! I MUST know what happens! Please update this as soon as possible?
Name: Irrel reviewed
6 on Oct 02, 2005 02:47 pm
I don't need to tell you this story is very confusing =P I loved it, tho.
Sadly, I have the feeling you are going to leave it incomplete, you haven't updated since march! sigh, I hope you continue writting this amazing fanfic.
Name: Mary reviewed
6 on Aug 14, 2005 11:54 am
I absolutely love this story. I am a huge Ginny/Draco fan. I like the bad boy good girl thing they have going. This is the first story I have read with Ginny/Sirius stuff and since then I have been interested, but it's hard to find stories. I like the idea because it's even more bad boy than Draco. Don't worry I still like Ginny/Draco stuff though. I hope that you update soon I can't wait to find out were all of this is going to leave. The story's brilliant and you have a great writing style.
Name: SS Felton reviewed
6 on Jul 08, 2005 08:14 am
I've read the prequel to this and this story. It's great! I love your writing style. All I have to say, is keep it up, please, and make sure to continue. I can't wait for the end of the trilogy. It's too good.
Name: Esus reviewed
6 on Jul 05, 2005 01:55 am
I've read no-stop alle the story from "The Bat-Bogeys Cometh"... and I'm at a loss of word.
This story is absolutely brilliant! I love how you described your characters and the environment: you put the right amount of description, thoughts and actions. I was intrigued by the relationship between Ginny and the other characters: she is both strong and fragile... her temper makes her shine, but it is also the main reason of a lot of stupid actions.
Now, I'm really curious to see what's going to happen: finally, we've found out why Loki is so interested in her and you're starting to explain what is the misterious link between Ginny and Draco.
I was also surprised by your Morgause: she's so vibrant and living! I can feel the wheels in her mind working, her intent of making Ginny find the Lock of Rhiannon was so clear from the beginning... what I didn't understand is why they have forgotten what happened. The kiss, the travel through the portrait, Lucius dialogue with Nott (it happened before the events of TBBC, so why Draco didn't mentioned anything?)...
And may I suppose that Snape is going to bring Draco to the Order? And what's going to happen then?
And Sirius? Why he is so attracted to Ginny (I don't think it's only because she reminds him of Narcissa...) and viceversa?
Last and then I will leave you: you talked about Freud being Malfoy's librarian. Where he makes his first appearance?
Well, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Name: Chucky reviewed
6 on Mar 20, 2005 12:09 pm
Hey, you forgot to take out several notes of your beta-reader. Just wanted to let u know, apart from that it's good.