Name: Mayday reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Sep 04, 2019 04:22 pm

Another thoroughly impressive chapter. I keep hitting the chapter button hoping there is more...if only it worked that way. Would love to read more if life ever slows down enough for you and the plot bunny returns. You are a truly gifted writer.

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Name: desperate_ballad reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Oct 09, 2010 07:53 pm

Are there any more chapters to be found?

Name: ruby reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Aug 01, 2008 04:48 am

chapter three cannot come sooner!!!! :-D

Name: getch34 reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Aug 22, 2007 07:55 pm

Great story. Please keep going. The beginning of the story really helped to capture my attention. I applaud you. Only thing that I think needs a little work is the dialouge, some of it seems a little forced and predictable. I know that it always helps me to write a scene and then read over it again, and if something is not up to your standards (can you tell I'm a perfectionist lol) then you rewrite it. Usually, at least for me, it comes out sounding better. Just wanted to let you know. But really, you are a very talented writer. Keep going!

Author's Response: As a perfectionist myself, I do tend to re-read exhaustively. I'm sorry you find my dialogue lacking, however I wonder if it might be a nationality thing? I dont know if you are american/canadian or English, but the cadances of different accents may play a large part in changing the interpretation of a sentance. As a brit, I am happy with most aspects of the dialogue. there are a couple of sentances I couldn't manage to express more eloquently, however I write as I speak - the sentance you're reading? Its the way I would say it. Also, please note that it is /implied/ in your review that I have been careless and sloppy in my chapter construction and have not re-read or corrected poor sentances - this is not the case, I am prone to edit entire chapters just to correct a symbology error in the webpage coding, so I feel it a little patronising to be told that perhaps I should re-read my scenes while I am writing them... o.OrnrnBut thank you for your review.

Name: Hiddenangel reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Feb 14, 2007 06:16 am

I love this fic and this is my second time reading it.

When can we expect the next chapter?

Is Ginny pregnant?



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :-)

Ummm..... pass.... no idea.

Well you'll have to wait and see, but based on the evidence, what is your conclusion?

Name: Morgan reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Jul 29, 2006 09:46 am

You are the most wonderful person ever and I think that you should definatly update because I don't know how long I will be able to function without a new chapter. I love it!!

Name: Jax reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Mar 30, 2006 10:15 am

You have a 'role-reversal' planned? As in you plan to continue this one?!? YESSSS!!! HUZZAH!!! I can't wait! I've always liked this story - the scene with Draco opening the door in Ginny's robe... ahh. Good stuff that! Keep it up!!! =)

Name: sarah reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Feb 22, 2006 10:44 am

Aww so cute! Great fic!

Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Feb 09, 2006 05:17 pm

Ugh. I don't like that her entire family is being so harsh...not that I would have had you write it differently, it's just families...ugh!

I'm interested to know what's going on with Ginny as I have a sneaking suspicion that it isn't pregnancy that's making her so drawn and all.

Normally, I don't like to read fics until the are complete because the wonder I experience over what is going to happen is almost too much to bear...I'm, of course, being melodramatic, but that's beside the point, really. *smirks*

I do hope that Ginny isn't horridly ill with something devestating and that this doesn't turn out in some horrible death scene with Draco left with a small infant to care for...or an older child for that matter. That would be awful!

Name: Janine reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Feb 07, 2006 08:21 am

Dear LORD! Are you EVER going to update this??!!

Name: dracosnaughtyprefect reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Dec 05, 2005 09:59 pm

Loved it! Can't wait until the next chapter. Your writing style is perfect. Feels just like I'm there.

Name: AvidAuor_DM reviewed Breaching Gulfs on Apr 04, 2005 09:40 pm

Amazing, as always! It really captured the essence of Draco and Ginny. Ginny is a strong person and many authors fail to realise this makingher flighty and shallow of character while others make her out to be a bitter girsl- u have certainly struck the right balance. Good draco as well - his ability to analyse events prior to their occurance is very much an essence of Draco and his lack of action in dealing with the various blows from the Weasley's goes a long way to showing how he has changed as a person. He is no longer harsh but a quiet thinker and a lovely husband. thirdly, I loved they way you have portrayed Harry. Many authors make Harry out to be evil or conniving or a whining and snivelling bastard in these D/G fics and you have shown him to be his sensible self with quiet a bit of rationality - he might be upset but he accepts and does not seek to ruin anyone. Overall, Brilliant! Waiting on more. Soon, pz, SOON!