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ypMs 2017.3.22

So amazing. I loved how well you showed the relationship, rather than told it, you know? It's an awesome read, very bittersweet :).



bee245

I really enjoyed the journey that was Draco and Ginny in your story and I like how it ended with them starting their relationship. Sometimes it can get boring when people are in relationships, so I like how your fic was leading up to the start of theirs. I also enjoyed Ginny and her promiscuous ways - I just would have liked to learn why she didn't like being touched, or maybe you addressed it and just completely missed it, and in that case, sorry about that.

Just one small criticism, be aware of verb tense shifts, other than that I enjoyed it thoroughly, plus I finished it, which is something I don't do very often lol.

Good luck with everything!

"There was a long silence.

It stood nervously on one foot, then the other, growing red in the face and then finally dying of embarrassment. "
Awesome personification!!!! Loved that line :)

I've probably reviewed this before, but let me say that this is so wonderful! I just love your writing. It's interesting that Ginny and Draco are really just in reversed gender roles, which seems simple, but it clearly stems from her being seriously screwed up. I loved Draco in this and rooted for him the whole way; I loved Ginny, too, and am so glad he was able to help her. It's curious that you leave Ginny a mystery to us, even at the end--why is she so scared? Why promiscuous? But I like it that way. I can envision Draco getting to know her and find out her secrets as time goes on, and helping her get over them. I just love the way you ended this.

Wow, that was great. I really enjoyed it, though Insecure!Ginny isn't something I've seen before; not like this, at least.

Hurra! ! very cute, they were both so thick i wanted to kick them at times but still adorable!!! and lets not hear any more of this "i dont think i'm gong to write any more buisness!!!

Ta!

~Really great story.~

~**sigh** Well i just dont know what to think~

~This makes me HAPPY~

~I feel sorry for them. You can tell they both want more.~

~Really great first chapter.~