Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 13, 2005 06:35 am
Just finished chapters 1-3. What a fabulous read. It is emotionally evocative and full of angst, which I adore! All that sex is just a guise - the physical banter back and forth between two people who are emotionally attracted to each other but too psychologically defended to realize it. Slut? Did someone say slut? Well, that's a little too judgemental a word for me to use. We all have our issues. I think she's using the only means of effective communication she has with our infamous Slytherin. You know, speaking to him in a language he understands. Bravo for a great fic!!! I look forward to more.
[In response to the other issue about chapter 4. As a fellow author, if you've posted chapter 4, but it isn't up yet that means that it is still awaiting cabal approval. They must approve each and every post before it goes up. This can take a few hours to several days. It just depends on how busy they are. I usually put an AN's on my old chapter telling readers this and uring them to check back in a day to see if it's posted yet. I hope that helps.]
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 13, 2005 04:55 am
I love it. Love it, love it, love it.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jul 13, 2005 04:47 am
Ginny's quite loose with her affections, isn't she! I love it! I absolutely adore when women treat sex like the typical, American man does! I LOVE IT!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jul 13, 2005 04:37 am
No, that wasn't bad. It was damn hot. :)
Name: inimical reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jul 13, 2005 02:17 am
Ha ha, what a crack up! Blondie07 spelt grammar wrong. Seriously though, great story. Not too ooc, because really, every one has a naughty streak. It's quite hard to write in present tense, most people tend to avoid it. Excellent first attempt, you'll improve over time.
Name: Kendra reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 12, 2005 09:27 pm
" Recently Updated" actuallly.
Author's Response: umm i really have no idea. on my author page thing there's four chaps! maybe it just hasn't come out yet? ^_-
Name: Kendra reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 12, 2005 09:25 pm
Why is it that that you can come to this site see a story in the "Recently Added" an there's no new chapter. Like this one the "new" chapter is the same one from months ago. There's no new one. What's up with that?
Name: Q reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 09, 2005 07:07 pm
Yes! Ginny shags a Derwent and Draco finally goes insane!
I don't know. Just update soon, please.
Name: imelda reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jun 19, 2005 09:18 am
Gah! That's it? I so thought there was more. Sigh; am enjoying this one, just like all your other fics, and can't wait for an update.
Name: Nala reviewed
Chapter 3 on Apr 30, 2005 05:02 am
Is it possible it's a son (Derwents's) that Draco get's tangled with. Something to do with the dark lord?
Name: imelda reviewed
Chapter 3 on Feb 09, 2005 05:58 pm
Grr! Want more! Am curious to see what happens next...also I'd like to find out why Ginny is so promiscuous. That comment about doing what men do has me worried...that's not really a great reason to have lots of sex, now is it? I wonder where this is coming from for her.
Author's Response: I think that that's going to come up soon. At least, hopefully it will. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: imelda reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 09, 2005 05:50 pm
No, no! You haven't ruined the characters!! You've sort of taken a wild trip into the surreal...sure they would never DO this, but come on, would DG ever get together in canon? This is so far just an interesting literary experiment. Yup. *nods sanguinely*
Name: Funnykido reviewed
Chapter 3 on Feb 01, 2005 01:43 pm
AAH! Reviewers are reading your mind!!! Lol! They think this is a sad story with an unhappy ending *mua ha ha* poor little fools. Right. . . anyways.. . can't wait to see wht happens next!
Name: neni potter reviewed
Chapter 3 on Feb 01, 2005 12:49 pm
so this is a sad story with an unhappy ending?
Author's Response: hmm that would all depend. do you want it to be?
Name: neni potter reviewed
Chapter 2 on Feb 01, 2005 12:40 pm
yeah right disturbin his patrol
Name: neni potter reviewed
Chapter 1 on Feb 01, 2005 12:30 pm
i like ginny like that ... all a bad girl
Name: ashlynmeadow reviewed
Chapter 3 on Feb 01, 2005 11:16 am
Is it weird of me to hope that the Derwents have a really hot daughter who is Mary Sue of the earth and Draco gets /charmed/ by her?
Author's Response: not really *smirk* but do you think that draco's the victim here? oh no does it come across that way?
Name: monoi reviewed
Chapter 2 on Feb 01, 2005 01:46 am
Well. At least he didn't walk in on them actually shagging.
Author's Response: read the next one! *laughs evilly*
Name: Dex reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 29, 2005 08:04 am
Ohhhhh.... Evil, evil Ginny. I like it. :)
Get more out soon.
Name: Q reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 29, 2005 04:34 am
Ooh goody, a fic that has, um, Gryffindor Sex-Goddess!Ginny!! The best thing about this is you not saying "He was jealous". Too many fics do that, and I admire you for not being so straightforward. ok, that doesn't sound like a compliment, but it is.
Author's Response: oh so you mean like it's more subtle? *laughs* i was trying to refrain from that but unfortunately in the next chapter it comes out
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 28, 2005 07:33 pm
I wanted to write in response to Funnykido's review. Her reaction is interesting. Actually Ginny can be anything that the author makes her out to be. And I just wanted to point out the number of fics that show Draco as a Slytherin Sex-god but Ginny is a slut if she's slept wth two people (or more)? Sort of the whole virgin/whore complex.
Anyway I though the fic was hot and I liked sexually agressiveGinny! She reminded me of Samantha on Sex and the City. Also thought it was cool that poor Draco felt jealous. Nice twist to the usual plot.
Author's Response: yeah it's like draco's always the cool greek god thing but ginny's always the virgin. or it'd be the other way round with both of them portraying stereotypes. and i really didn't want that cos it was so overdone [obviously]. yay glad you liked ginny! :)
Name: may reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 28, 2005 04:29 pm
please update as soon as possible! can't wait for the next chapters!
Name: blondie07 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 28, 2005 02:33 pm
this chapter was awesome and i really liked how jealous draco was. of course i would be too if i was him. it was weird but i was strangely satisfied when he took all those points away. hehe
Name: blondie07 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 28, 2005 02:24 pm
I think this story has a lot of potential, and the smut was well written! The one thing is that I was a little unsure of some of your grammer. I have never corrected a writer's grammer before, and I'm not correcting yours because it's especially bad or anything, because it's not. I just felt like this story could be even better than it already is if it was fixed. I'm not sure how to really describe what I mean exactly so I'm gonna use an example from the story. One sentence, "When her mouth closes over the head of his cock and sucks, he gives a strangled yell...," I think could be improved if you changed the verb tense. For example, "When her mouth closed over the head of his cock and [she] sucked, he gave a stranged yell..." I'm not an kind of grammer genius, nor am I trying to sound all hoity toity, or be condescending in any way, but I think it would sound better the other way. I swear I liked this story, and im looking forward to reading the next chapter! It's totally up to you to change the way you write or not and I'll continue to read either way :)! (oh and please dont think im trying to say i have perfect grammer or anything like that cause i obviously dont)
Author's Response: yeah i know i know!! *dies* the thing is that when i change tense i never realise it so it always seems alright to me. but i wrote the new chapter with that in mind so hopefully it will be better?
Name: jchaser reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 28, 2005 01:01 pm
Great first two chapters. Sounds just like Draco though have to wonder if Ginny was hoping he'd find them? Can't wait for the rest. Very enjoyable writing style!