Reviews For A Trying Breath
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Chapter 4: Revelations and Consequences on Mar 09, 2006 11:37 am
Aw! Draco got jealous!
Why can't he just tell Ginny that he wants to be with her so that they can get on with being happy together?

::sighs::

Ah, amore...
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Chapter 3: To the Hospital Wing, Hogsmeade, and the Library on Mar 09, 2006 11:15 am
Wow, I didn't know Hermione had that in her!
It's a good thing Draco's cooperating with her or I just might have had to start disliking him :-)
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Chapter 2: Revelations in a Broom Closet on Mar 09, 2006 10:39 am
Oh no! Ron don't kill him!!
I think I've read this story before, but I'm not sure. I haven't reviewed it before if anything, so I'm doing so now!
Great story! Keep it up!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Chapter 1: Visitors in the Dark on Mar 09, 2006 10:18 am
This is a very strong beginning chapter! I had to agree with MsDanielRadcliffe: You have a few grammatical errors. (your is not the same as you are, you are =you're)
But I really like this story! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Wow, that's really embarrassing. Thanks! I re-edited the first chapter now.
Name: AuntAnnie reviewed Chapter 8: Deplorable Slytherins on Mar 09, 2006 08:48 am
Wow, really a cliffie, I really hope you update soon, I actually just happened on your fic, and it is honestly one of the BEST!! I have read. Please don't abandon, Please don't give up, Please finish this, it is an amazing story!!!
Name: Meg reviewed Chapter 5: Secret Agent Men and Fragrant Shampoo on Mar 08, 2006 04:14 pm
Lucius Malfoy's curse? Bloody brilliant, Ephemere, brilliant!
Name: Meg reviewed Chapter 4: Revelations and Consequences on Mar 08, 2006 03:57 pm
Oh my, that was the most glorious ending to a chapter I have ever read. I loved the switching back and forth - don't change a thing!
Name: Meg reviewed Chapter 3: To the Hospital Wing, Hogsmeade, and the Library on Mar 08, 2006 03:44 pm
Greatest fan fic line ever written: "If I catch one word of this getting out to Potter and Weasley, you'll wish your parents had another muggle." I laughed so hard I fell of my chair.
Name: Nectaris reviewed Chapter 8: Deplorable Slytherins on Mar 08, 2006 03:42 pm
Oh. My. God. Please please please please PLEASE update soon! You are just mean if you don't update soon!
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed Chapter 8: Deplorable Slytherins on Mar 08, 2006 03:29 pm
YES! Take that you bloody prat Malfoy! I may love you but you are being one big a-hole. *sniff* Good story by the way.
Name: WG reviewed Chapter 8: Deplorable Slytherins on Mar 08, 2006 03:21 pm
Man i gotta hand it to u - this has to be one of the worst nail biting cliff hangers that i have read! Fab work and please do update this soon!
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed Chapter 6: Quidditch Boots and Fairytale Romances on Mar 08, 2006 02:53 pm
Damn that toast! Who will ever have the gut to finish it!!!!
Name: Nectaris reviewed Chapter 4: Revelations and Consequences on Mar 08, 2006 01:58 pm
Nice ending for the chapter! I really like this so far! I think maybe you should be a little more careful with your scene changes, skip a couple spaces or something because it's really confusing sometimes trying to figure out why she's talking to Hermione when she was just talking to Draco. Great job though, I really like it!
Name: Marcia reviewed Chapter 7: Forbidden Fudge on Mar 07, 2006 12:09 pm
Please update. Please. Please. PLEASE!!! I just reread this for the third time and am dying to read the rest. Thank you!

Author's Response: third time! oh wow! haha trust me, and you really should trust me on this, it's on its way :)
Name: Larissa reviewed Chapter 7: Forbidden Fudge on Dec 07, 2005 10:43 am
I LOVE THIS STORY. Love, love, love, love, LOVE. I know that's a strong statement to make, but its true. I discovered it this past summer, through Mynuet's list of fic recs. I choose yours to read, for some reason that I dont recall. Perhaps I found your alias intruiging? Anyway, once I read the first few chapters, I was hooked. I finished the whole thing in about a week. The sad bit is that I saved my readings until the end of the day, so I had something to look forward to. Pathetic, I know. Anyway, I love the plot, and the way that you write is so ... it pulls you in gently, but won't let you go. I simply cannot WAIT to read the next few chapters. I feel like I've been on the edge of my seat for ages, even though its only been a few months. I am patiently (read: impatiently) awaiting an update. Lots of love, Larissa

Author's Response: *kisses* You've single-handedly made my 15-page paper and exam-ridden day completely worthwhile. "I discovered it this past summer, through Mynuet's list of fic recs." Are you serious?? I thought I had that list practically committed to memory, the number of times I've accessed it...Oh well :) Unfortunately, I won't be updating anytime before January...exams, you know. But I have plenty of plane rides to catch up on writing! Thanks for reviewing, Ephemere
Name: Dania reviewed Chapter 7: Forbidden Fudge on Nov 12, 2005 11:01 pm
This is one of my very favourite stories.I really love Draco's little love confession in this chapter.I read it for about 5 times.Please update soon
Name: Flame_kitty reviewed Chapter 6: Quidditch Boots and Fairytale Romances on Nov 12, 2005 03:01 am
I really love your story! I was especially impressed with the story within a story at the end of the last chapter. Keep updating!
Name: dracosnaughtyprefect reviewed Chapter 6: Quidditch Boots and Fairytale Romances on Nov 09, 2005 07:52 am
Very awesome! I loved this chapter. Can't wait until the next one. I'm still a little confused, but that usually happens when stories aren't finished :) I'm not worried. You are a wonderful author, so i'm in good hands.

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement! As for the confusion, there aren't too many chapters left, and I've got them mostly written out. So hopefully your confusion won't last long. :)
Name: dracosnaughtyprefect reviewed Chapter 5: Secret Agent Men and Fragrant Shampoo on Nov 08, 2005 10:10 am
Ah! I love it. I was a little confused at the begining, but I kept going, and now I'm understanding :) You've got a great writing style, and your imagiry (wow... i can't spell!) is beautiful. Outstanding job! Can't wait for the next chapter (And bravo on their length!)
Name: daisymama reviewed Chapter 6: Quidditch Boots and Fairytale Romances on Nov 08, 2005 06:59 am
I really like this story. I love the part where Draco is explaining to Ginny, and Hermione is explaining to Ron and Harry what is going on......great bit of writing there! And I have to tell you when Draco and Ginny kiss in the infirmary, that is one of the best kissing scenes I have ever read, ever! Great job!
Name: Me reviewed Chapter 6: Quidditch Boots and Fairytale Romances on Nov 07, 2005 08:18 pm
Great story.
Name: alexis reviewed Chapter 5: Secret Agent Men and Fragrant Shampoo on Jul 31, 2005 11:52 am
i like this story and want more chapters please lol
Name: Harris reviewed Chapter 2: Revelations in a Broom Closet on Jul 31, 2005 09:29 am
ginnys real name is Ginerva NOT Virginia god i hate when people do that

Author's Response: i started writing this story before that truth came out. it fixes itself in future chapters, and it's Ginevra, btw. Thank you for your review
Name: imelda reviewed Chapter 4: Revelations and Consequences on Jun 25, 2005 12:22 pm
Great chapter! Especially good was seeing Ginny's ruminations about her past relationships; I found it really interesting and believable. I am DYING to know what is going on with Draco. I am also really sorry that he punched Seamus...as if that poor boy isn't getting a raw enough deal already. But I think the way you handled the switch between great day/awful day was really clever. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Chapter 1: Visitors in the Dark on Jun 24, 2005 05:45 pm
It's good except for the very few errors in spelling and the error in the title (You take a "breath," but you try to "breathe."). I'm off to read the second chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you, but i actually meant it as a breath. as in you take a trying breath, with trying beign the adjective. it's kind of playing off the theme that breathing itself gets harder for the main characters. thanks for reviewing!
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