Heee. Considering that I'm such a shameless review whore when it comes to my own work, I'm terrible about leaving them and even worse at writing them. LOL So I'll say this: The fact that I am still reading your story after 20 Chapters means that I am enjoying the characterisations, enjoying the plot and generally enjoying reading it. (Despite your evil tendancy to build the tension and anticipation to fever-pitch!!! XD ) Yes, at times Ginny has been annoyingly flighty but I like how you use Draco's characterisation to bring the reader back to the heart of the story. I must say I am more sympathetic to Draco than Ginny but I suspect that you wrote it that way? Either way, it's working well. As for the updates, I can hardly complain with my track record can I? *ROFL* I know how it is to have finished posting what was already written and have the pressure of writing the rest - Ex Ir is a perfect case in point. Ha ha ha So all I'll say is 'Keep at it', because I know I'll still look forward to reading the chapters whenever you get around to posting them.

Lex.

What a great beginning! You've done a great job of foreshadowing many things to come as well as weaving in bits and pieces of the past. Every tightenly written, witty repartee, strong characters. I can't wait until the next chapter!

I like this story so far. Though I have some doubts right now... Did Draco force Ginny to marry him? And how long have they been dating before that quick wedding?

I LOVE IT!!!! You have to update real soon. PLEASE!!!!!!

loved the last line but why are they getting married? Oh, I'm so impatient! lol, anyway I only have two things to point out- His only sister and the youngest Weasley was engaged to be married (when I first read it I was like- whoa, Ginny's getting married to a girl and the girl's brother is really ticked... and then I read that Ron was actually the one reading it...anyway, perhaps you should change it to something like: His sister, the youngest Weasley, was engaged to be married.) --and-- Ron Weasley didn't know which was worse - the fact that he was reading about it in the paper instead of hearing it from Ginny or that she was apparently engaged to the slimy git. (it sounds like you're saying the newspaper is the slimy git Ginny's marrying. ::mentle image of Ginny kissing a newspaper:: what beautiful babies they would make ^.^ The only thing you need to do is tell who exactally the slimy git is) --- Those two things were the only things that really jumped out at me. You can go ahead and read my fic and analyze my grammar if you wish (you'll find plenty mistakes, lol) ^.^ --- Anyway, loved it- can't wait for the next chapter!!!

OMGosh, that just changed the whole thought process of how I THOUGHT that this story was going to go. "BTW, Malfoy's don't believe in divorce" nicely done. Please update again soon!! Christine

nice one. You could have left out "Unfortunately, he ruined the peace between them with his next statement", though. or simplified it a bit. ...you ARE writing the next bit, aren'tyou?

Oh - Well THAT will ruin anyone's day, hearing they can't get out of a marriage for show. Oh, well - can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Nice start, I am curious, why did they have to get married (It's probably there, but I missed it)....btw, I like their rules (no family insults, etc...funny) anyway, hope you update soon.