Name: blue_eyes reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on Mar 08, 2006 12:54 am
the story was good, wish it could have been longer though
Name: Maria reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on Sep 20, 2005 04:29 am
Good Start
Name: anonymous reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on Sep 10, 2005 12:32 pm
I actually really liked the plotline to this story, however I felt it could've been more deeply written. Nonetheless, it was still very good, and I really enjoyed it. :)
Name: Kiiraena reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on Aug 27, 2005 09:44 am
I definitely didn't know or even suspect that it was your first fic when I read it. The scene with Pansy's death was sort of confusing and stuff, but wow. You still got the message across.
Name: Aurinko reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on Aug 11, 2005 09:23 am
Hey, it was really good for a first fic! And you finished, too! Bravo. I liked that ending, I think. I liked that it was D/G in the end (happily, I mean) and that they temporarily put the issues aside to simply celebrate the joy of being alive. Poor Ginny, though, with the whole waiting bit. That's just cruel. And Draco's got a lot of explaining to do, but I'm glad that they're together at the end. :)
Name: Aurinko reviewed
Slowly Getting to His Feet on Aug 11, 2005 09:19 am
Ego and ID? Wow, really getting into the shrink bits...going to keep reading, hoping you added a A/N for your younger readers! (Interesting way to think of the Harry-Ron relationship.) And whoa...what a kiss. Again, poor Ginny. Being left in the dark isn't much better.
Name: Aurinko reviewed
The Moment She Left Him on Aug 11, 2005 09:14 am
Poor Ginny. It does look really bad for Draco, but I think I'll wait to give a verdict on that one until the next chapter. You're very good at making both sides seem wronged and rightfully upset.
Name: Airmid reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on May 29, 2005 03:45 am
I didn't realize this had been your first fan fic. It was excellent. Off to read the rest of your fics.
Name: Airmid reviewed
The Eyes of The Order on Her on May 29, 2005 03:43 am
Great chapter! I wondered if htis would happen- just not the way it did! Great job.
Name: Airmid reviewed
Slowly Getting to His Feet on May 29, 2005 03:33 am
Well...oh my! Hmm , this is getting very interesting! Loving it.
Name: Airmid reviewed
The Moment She Left Him on May 29, 2005 03:30 am
You had me hooked from the first line! Great start, I can't wait to read more. You really are an excellent writer.
Name: chuya reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on May 03, 2005 12:30 am
I love the way you write. I'd quote the sentences I found to be the most beautiful like others have done, but I'm afraid I'd have to quote whole pages at a time ^_^
Name: imelda reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on May 02, 2005 09:14 am
I *love* the moment he walks out of the room with Dumbledore, and then kisses her. It just kills me every time (because I realized I definitely have read this before). I also love the moment Ginny spots him on the battlefield. Sigh. I'm so glad this has a happy ending. The murder of Pansy scene was so vague it was a bit tough to understand, but once I did...wow. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Wow, what a review! Thanks. I actually wrote the whole story around the scene where he kisses her at 12 Grimmauld Place. Just couldn't get that one out of my head. Glad you enjoyed it.
Name: imelda reviewed
The Moment She Left Him on May 02, 2005 09:04 am
Your writing is so lovely; you have a real knack for beginning things. The first paragraph of this chapter is great, and I adore the line "it's going to be a long goddamn life." You really know how to get a feeling across. Poor Ginny.
Name: ragdollangel reviewed
The Moment She Left Him on Apr 22, 2005 01:13 am
Okay, I can't believe I haven't read this until now. *shakes head in disbelief*
This is great. I absolutely love your style of writing...
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I really appreciate your review!
Name: Mitzi reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on Apr 16, 2005 03:53 am
wow! your language in the story's just beautiful! i really like the way you crafted your words.
Name: Rae reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on Apr 15, 2005 10:20 pm
I agree, this story needs a lot more reviews than it's gotten so far. I like your style, and the last line is classic. :)
Name: enchanted18 reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on Apr 15, 2005 10:27 am
huhuhu...:'c again, i have to bring out this line in particular since it really hit me: There would be time for the hospital wing and treatment, but for now he held her close as darkness fell all around. that scene where ginny looked for draco amdist the blanket of bodies in the field reminded me of a scene in 'gone with the wind'. brilliant work!
Author's Response: Wow! A comparison with Margaret Mitchell? That's a compliment. Thanks for your reviews. I really appreciate it!
Name: enchanted18 reviewed
The Moment She Left Him on Apr 15, 2005 10:19 am
that was so sad...:'c i love this line especially: She saw that he had a choice. He saw no choice.
~*~perfect~*~
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Glass_Mermaid reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on Apr 14, 2005 04:24 pm
Why hasn't this gotten any reviews?!?! It's a good story. In particular, this line.
The fallen were taken elsewhere, to a makeshift morgue in the dungeons. Ginny did not see Percy or Charlie when they were brought in from the field. She would learn of their stories later.
She would learn their stories later... That was just a wonderful line.
Author's Response: I am so HONORED that you read my fic and liked this line in particular. I know the style of the story is a little out of the mainstream. I am a HUGE fan of yours and am in love with Before The Storm. Thanks for making my day!
Name: Embellished reviewed
As Darkness Fell All Around on Apr 14, 2005 04:23 pm
This is really powerful. I like how you chose just a few scenes from their relationship but were able to make it seem like you told more. Well done!
Author's Response: Wow! What a compliment. That is exactly what I trying to achieve. This stuff really works.