Name: bellasol67 reviewed
The Goddamn Month's Worth of Detention on May 06, 2005 03:16 pm
So far I am enjoying the story...I like how Draco is studying Ginny. Your psych lesson at the end was informative and made me smile. Nice job (the story, not so much the lesson!LOL), looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you preferred the story to the psych lesson as well!
Name: CindaEdna reviewed
The Goddamn Month's Worth of Detention on May 06, 2005 02:23 pm
While I liked the mild cliffie ending of chapter one, I think that chapter two is enough of an extension that the two should have been combined. Great job, I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Point taken. Unfortunately I felt it necessary to chop what would have made one nice long chapter into two shorters ones to fit with the remaining chapters. Thanks for the feedback.
Name: imelda reviewed
The Goddamn Month's Worth of Detention on May 06, 2005 12:08 pm
Fantastic! What a very promising beginning to this fic. I love potty-mouth fics and think there should be lots more of them, because foul-mouthed Ds and Gs are just so damn amusing. Also, I like the way you have Draco and Ginny thinking of each other--it's slightly different than it is in your everyday DG fic, because of Draco's stress syndrome and Ginny's gratitude to him (kind of replacing Harry with Draco). Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: What a wonderful review! If you like potty mouths, you will not be disappointed. Draco continues to curse his way through the remainder of the story as far as I know. Cheers!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
The Goddamn Month's Worth of Detention on May 06, 2005 10:48 am
Lol, Psych 101, my hiney. That right there was at least a 300 level, majors course description. It might not even come until medical or graduate school. Good show, though. Update soon.
Author's Response: You are a scarily perceptive reviewer, as usual. Have I just been outed? Let's put it this way, medical school was just the start, many years ago...
Name: Rae reviewed
A Fucking Pickup Game Of Quidditch, For God's Sake on May 06, 2005 03:54 am
More! A very promising beginning :)
Author's Response: I'm writing as fast as I can ...
Name: Pam reviewed
A Fucking Pickup Game Of Quidditch, For God's Sake on May 06, 2005 02:49 am
Oh very good! I can totally see that type of quidditch game taking place! I know I'd love to be a spectator of it lol. This was a really good start. I like the way you write Draco, I think he's very in character. I can't wait to see what happens next, so I hope you continue! Nice work :)
Author's Response: Thanks. It's coming along nicely. Let me know what you think of the future chapters!
Name: Cal Princess 2008 reviewed
A Fucking Pickup Game Of Quidditch, For God's Sake on May 04, 2005 06:49 pm
I'm glad she saved you from deleting this, because this has the potential to be a really interesting story! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Author's Response: I was just experimenting with a different style of writing and happened to send her the first couple of chapters as a thanks for betaing another story and to amuse her. I never really thought of it as something I would ever finish, much less post. She encouraged me to continue. She's an awesome beta!
Name: Natasha reviewed
A Fucking Pickup Game Of Quidditch, For God's Sake on May 04, 2005 05:06 pm
I like it! I want you to continue. It looks like it will be going far. UPDATE SOON!!
Author's Response: I hope to be updating frequently, at least once a week if not twice. Thanks.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
A Fucking Pickup Game Of Quidditch, For God's Sake on May 04, 2005 04:01 pm
I can't wait for the update. It's got great potential!
Name: missa reviewed
A Fucking Pickup Game Of Quidditch, For God's Sake on May 04, 2005 01:07 pm
i really really liked this... the characterization was perfect. draco's interior monologue suited his mood... and his line about her blood and his clothes was placed perfectly--it jolted the reader back into the story's reality.
good job!
Author's Response: I'm pleased that you found the characterization to your liking. That's an important one, isn't it? Thanks for the review.