Verr naiice, i laaike. Hiii faaive!
Sorry. Been watching Borat again.
Oh lordy.. what's going to happen? The whole scene of Snape dashing out suddenly and the description of him being still dishelved really got me laughing. This is great so far! cheers
Write more! I want to know what will happen next.
this is a great story. i can't wait to read what happens next.
Don't keep me waiting!!!
when are you going to finish i really like this story
You know you have a good story started, I would love for you to finish this.
Very good so far! Keep it up! Interesting storyline, though try explaining and describing things more, because it moves a little fast.