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Name: Jack Rackham reviewed Return on Jul 17, 2007 05:21 am
:( I want more!!! i really like it so far, but i need MORE!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I have a bit of a break from work coming up soon - and I definately plan on sitting down to write a few more chapters. *grins* Glad you like it.
Name: MercyAller1977 reviewed Draco Malfoy on Dec 29, 2005 09:19 am
Nice. Draco's reaction was typical Malfoy, bratty and arrogant and entirely too self-absorbed. I wonder what task he'll choose though. Too bad WWW doesn't have a branch in Hogmeade, it would have been awesome if he'd been forced to work under the Weasley twins!

Author's Response: lol
Name: Nival Vixen reviewed Return on Aug 03, 2005 01:46 pm
I like this story! Evil Lucius!! Grr... What subject is Draco going to choose? Ginny's going to choose the Music subject and the school band obviously... What instrument? Update soon! :-)

Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review. Glad you like my story. lol. I'm trying to update as soon as I can...I just need some ideas. lol. Once again thanks for the review.
Name: aliya darkfairyofslytherin reviewed Return on Jun 29, 2005 06:57 pm
hm forced blowjobs?? what is that. anywya i can see this perspective of lucius malfoy. so right now Draco wants to be a death eater but doesn't want to serve someone else. chose the wrong profession then. hm Draco is dating Pansy in this fic. but now theres Jackie in the picture....i wonder what Lucius has planned. prolly still Pansy. the plot thickens it seems. reveal it soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reveiwing. I will update soon. My chapter is with my beta reader at the moment. Once again thanks for the review. I always enjoy reviews. =)
Name: Monica_ISA reviewed Return on Jun 20, 2005 10:20 pm
As requested I have read and am now reviewing your work. I must admit that it would not be a story I would read of my volition. The story repeated itself and if you read it through, you will see that are many mistakes with regards to mixing the story around and continuity. The sentences are short and feels rushed so the story does not flow well. Otherwise, the story idea itself is good. I am glad to see that your non-consensual sex is not graphic, as is not something I enjoy, but if the story calls for it, at least yours is not too graphic. To end, I think you should continue but just think about your story flow and some of your writing style. I would love to read what come next.

Author's Response: Hey, Thanks. I'll try making my sentences longer, and making sure that they flow. Thanks for the review. I love your story.
Name: Sannikex reviewed Return on Jun 15, 2005 11:33 pm
Hello, I'm the author of Angel of Music. You asked me to take a look at your story so here I am! I really like this but I think you need more thoughts, more feelings. In the part with Lucius and Narcissa you only mentioned that "Narcissa was scared". I think there must be a lot more feelings and thoughts, you have to make us (the readers) see what you see when you wrote it. The surrounding describings are very good and it's easy to see the table, for example. Put a little more weight on the people's minds and you will make this otherwise great story splendid! This is just advis and I did not mean to offend at all. Sincerely Sannikex

Author's Response: Hey, No I like it when I get advice. When I add it to my story, the reader likes it more. I love your story. Keep up the great work on yours. Thanks for reviewing. I love reivew! lol.
Name: fallenwitch reviewed Community Service Hours on Jun 13, 2005 10:55 am
Hi ronlover, I just read your fic and wanted to send you a review. I think the premise of your story is refreshing and original. It's a intersting touch to have four different Hogwarts students' reactions to the same letter. I loved that! Your characters' responses let us know who they are immediately. You've done a great job with your well formed characters. I also like the fact that you use alot of dialogue. It's really engaging stuff. I wish I could do more of it myself. Some personal preference comments. I dislike fic's with sexual violence/nonconsensual activity and the like. I realize those types of actions may be very important to the plot and moving the story forward. I just don't read them and don't write them. Your Lucius is a truly evil character. That's great! I'm hoping that you flush out his character a bit more. Why is he so horrible to everyone? Why would he treat his wife in such a manner? What about Narcissa? Why would she put up with such horrid behavior from her husband? Why doesn't she hex him silly or just leave? I guess what I am getting at here is motivation. What's motivating your characters to act in the way that they do? I think you've got a great start w/Draco and his motivations. I enjoyed reading his thoughts. I would love to see you continue that w/the other characters (esp. Lucius and Narcissa) My last piece of constructive criticism. You might want to consider getting a beta. Your grammatical errors distract from the content and flow of your writing, which is a shame because you have so much to say! It's hard to edit your own stuff. A second set of eyes can be helpful, even w/simple stuff like punctuation. Great job! Keep up the good work! You've got my curiosity up now. I wonder what's going to happen w/that band and Ginny and Draco. Who is the girl he's dating now? Pansy? I hope not. You've got a killer plot and a long summer. Get to work! Cheers, fallenwitch

Author's Response: Thanks.
Name: firepower reviewed Return on Jun 02, 2005 12:27 pm
great new chapter! poor narcissa though. i gtg. please write more soon!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll update soon. I promise.
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Return on May 30, 2005 12:09 pm
Lucius' behavior really shows us why Draco is the way he is...Makes you wonder why he wants to follow in Dad's footsteps doesn't it?.....Biting my nails wondering how Jackie will play into the relationship with Draco and Ginny...???....Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Hey, lol. Thanks for the review. I would stop biting the finger nails. lol. Cause it may be at least a few chapters before something happens.
Name: Embellished reviewed Return on May 30, 2005 03:25 am
Hm. Evill Lucius. I wonder where that's going...

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yah, hes evil. I've always seen him as an evil person. So yah...lol.
Name: skully reviewed Return on May 29, 2005 05:19 pm
Wow...what a...um, well I really shouldn't type that in a review. I was really suprised at the scene between Lucius and Narcissa. It shocked me because it was so different from you normal writing style. I don't think it was too graphic though. Nice work. Ugh...Lucius...grr.

Author's Response: Thanks. lol. I had to add it in early. It may play an important part latter on. Thanks for the review. Did you send me the email?
Name: Embellished reviewed Draco Malfoy on May 29, 2005 01:24 pm
You do a nice job of portraying Draco as a nasty little rich boy in this chapter. One thing you might want to think about in the future is how to use repetition most effectively. You repeated the letters that Ginny had gotten in the first chapter, which seemed like a bit much. Maybe in future chapters when Draco and Ginny experience something similar, focus on their reactions to the experience rather than talking about the experience again. You definitely did a good job of showing us Draco's reaction here. Just try to write the chapter in such a way that you can have the reaction without actually reading the letter. I do like the contrast between Draco and Ginny's reactions to the new program. It helps set up their characters for the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Hey, Thanks a lot. I'll do that. Hope you update your story soon.
Name: skully reviewed Draco Malfoy on May 29, 2005 09:57 am
Okay, this is definately an original idea. I like it. One thing I noticed in the first chapter is Ginny fell asleep looking at a magazine on the couch, but woke up in a pink chair. In the second chapter I wondered why Draco dismisses the house elf when Narcissa is throwing a tea party. I think that your story is good, and I can't wait for an update. Feel free to read and tear apart my story.

Author's Response: Hey, Thanks for the tip about the couch and chair thing. Alley is only Draco's house elf. She only works for him. I'll mention that in the next chapter. In my mind I see that there are a lot of house elfs at the Malfoy Manor.
Name: firepower reviewed Community Service Hours on May 29, 2005 08:00 am
thanks for reveiwing my story! I'm glad you like it!

Author's Response: No problem.
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Draco Malfoy on May 28, 2005 05:22 pm
It is a love/hate kind of thing for me when authors leave you hanging at the end of a chapter...makes you crave more but also frustrates you...though I suppose it is the sign of a great author to leave thier readers wanting more. Very good use of imagery. looking forward to the next chapter.. Kristine

Author's Response: Hey, Thanks. lol. I won't leave you hanging for long. I sent you an email, hope you get it soon.
Name: firepower reviewed Draco Malfoy on May 28, 2005 08:40 am
OMG!!!! great story. it's aly...or alissa. i forgot what i called myself before. aly is a nickname so w/e. anyway, that was soooo great. chap 2 is funny. but now i really wanna know what the shriek was. by the way, is there a venus flytrap in the malfoy garden? it just seems like a death-eater type of thing. sorry. that was really random. lol.

Author's Response: Hey, Glad you liked my story. You'll find out what the shriek was. Have you written any stories? It wasn't random...well it was. lol. But I might use that idea. Thanks for the review.
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Community Service Hours on May 27, 2005 05:51 pm
I love reading D/G fan fic but lately it seems as the same theme is being used over and over. I like your unique theme. I look forward to reading more. Kristine

Author's Response: Hey, Glad you liked it. I thought I'd liven it up a bit. lol. Do you have any stories? I'm going to update soon. Thanks a lot for the reivew!
Name: Aly reviewed Community Service Hours on May 27, 2005 02:39 pm
ur story is soooo great!!! update it soon please!!!! Community service for Draco Malfoy: that's soooo funny. imagien the look on his face. muhahahahahaha!!! anyway, please write more. I love HP fanfics

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. But can you actually imagine Draco's face. lol!
Name: Aly reviewed Community Service Hours on May 27, 2005 02:28 pm
I'm Emma's friend and she told me about your story. It sounds interesting and I'm gonna read it rigth away! I'll tell you what I think when I finish!!!!!

Author's Response: Emma is my best friend. I wrote something in the last email she sent you. I'm at her house. I practically live here. lol. Thanks for the review.
Name: Embellished reviewed Community Service Hours on May 26, 2005 11:33 am
This is a good start. I can definitely see Ron overreacting to the idea of having to do community service. I like that Ginny and Hermione seem to have a good relationship. From the title, I assume that Ginny is going to join the band. It will be interesting to see where else you go from here. Nice job!

Author's Response: Hey, Thanks for the review. I appreciate it. I am currently writing the next chapter. lol. That was how my friend was when I told him that we had to community hours, though at my school its only 40 hours.
Name: Nuyaviel reviewed Community Service Hours on May 26, 2005 05:16 am
I read your story, and first of all - I don't know when you started writing this, but if you started in 1998, then it is LONG overdue to be updated. Because, in all honesty, the plot is quite interesting, and I'd love to see what happens next. I can see that there will be plenty of excitement ahead, as Ginny and Draco interact with each other doing community service, and even while playing/singing for the same band. Your characterization of Ginny was nice -- I can totally see her yelling at her brother. ^_^ However, something seems a bit off with Ron. He seems a little too whiny. At any rate, this is a fic I enjoyed reading, and I hope to see it continued. Keep writing! ^_^

Author's Response: Hey, Thanks for the review! lol. I just wrote this a few days ago...but what I mean is that Ginny would be in her 6th year in the year 1998. It says on Lexon.com. I just wanted to make it go more Harry Potterish. lol. Thanks once again for the review. I'll try to make Ron not so much annoying...I just had to do that for the first chapter. I am currently writing the next chapter. Glad you liked it.
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