Name: Mione23 reviewed Chapter 2: Infatuation on Jun 05, 2005 04:25 pm
Well, its good so far. Although I'm a bit confused about Harry's character. I don't get him. If you explain the Harry and Ginny in this story I would greatly appreciate it.

Author's Response: the story will explain whats going on between ginny and harry...dont worry about that. everything will be explained. =)
Name: Peffy reviewed Chapter 1: As Mother's Couldn't Do on Jun 05, 2005 05:36 am
I'm too lazy to login. I didn't really enjoy the first chapter, I'm sorry to say. There were just some things that irked me. Please, when you're pluralizing "mother", don't add an apostrophe. It's "mothers". And that's just in the chapter's title. It's the nitpicker in me, I apologize if it offends you. I'm also not fond of Draco's character. He seems just very OOC. Too... nice? Not enough of a father's boy? I guess it just bothers me. Again, I hope I haven't offended you. It's just my two cents worth.

Author's Response: oh don't worry about any offending. none taken. i said i like feedback and that is what you gave me. and for everyones sake, i will update my first chapter and see what i can do. as for draco.... he isn't really that nice... its just to his little sister... but you will find out more in later chapters. and thanks a lot Peffy for telling me those mistakes. I will take it into consideration next time. *~*~*BECCA*~*~*
Name: indigo reviewed Chapter 1: As Mother's Couldn't Do on Jun 05, 2005 05:36 am
this story looks really good so far, please update soon. :)
Name: Katie reviewed Chapter 1: As Mother's Couldn't Do on Jun 05, 2005 05:34 am
:( so sad... please write more soon, or I will glomp you! *shifty eyes*
Name: Christine reviewed Chapter 1: As Mother's Couldn't Do on Jun 04, 2005 07:15 pm
Sorry I was too lazy to sign in, but I wanted you to know that this is the beginning of a good story. :) Hope to see more soon!
Name: bigreader reviewed Chapter 1: As Mother's Couldn't Do on Jun 04, 2005 05:21 pm
Looks good. I like it when Harry is the bad guy...*doesn't like harry* I hope that either Lucius or Harry dies. I HATE it when a part of a couple dies and one of them is forced with the sorrow of losing some one they love. You're not going to do that? Are you? *panics* I really like this story. UPDATE SOON!
Name: ivy reviewed Chapter 1: As Mother's Couldn't Do on Jun 04, 2005 04:06 pm
interesting start. update, i'd like to see where this goes.
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