Reviews For Hold On Tightly
Name: Iliana_r reviewed Be Discreet on Jul 30, 2008 11:42 am
Very sweet!!!!
Name: joey101 reviewed Be Discreet on Mar 04, 2007 11:21 am
yehh! it was so good. i liked it. i'm hoping a sequel is coming up...
Name: Michelle reviewed Be Discreet on Sep 12, 2005 06:58 pm
I love this :) I've read it a million (well not quite that many xD) times, and I still love it. You're a wonderful writer. Keep up the grat work.
Name: mary reviewed Be Discreet on Jun 07, 2005 01:28 pm
wow, that was very deep. this definately needs to be continued!
Name: Jaylene reviewed Be Discreet on Jun 06, 2005 06:36 pm
I'm going to be an echo and say that yes, you should continue this story, back and forwards. I.e., why are they running together, who's on what side, what happened to the hate, and the clincher, are they going to have sex?
Name: Angela reviewed Be Discreet on Jun 06, 2005 03:01 pm
That was wonderfully done...and I too would like to see you expand on this little vignette. That is, if you're willing. Ah, and I hate to be a nag..but when shall you complete your other WIP? I know many of us await the final chapter...

Author's Response: I'm thinking about writing more on this. Originally it was a response to a small community's challenge: Write a story about something that happens if Voldemort wins the war. So I wrote that. Never turned it in, because I'm a procrastinator and I missed the deadline by a mile... and I figured I should do something with it, so I archived it here. As far as Just a Box of Chocolates? is concerned... I'm SO SO SO SO SO sorry. I got caught up in a whirlwind of things and just didn't have time to write a fantastic scene. I've been working on it for the past few days, and I'm going to deliver it soon. It'll, hopefully, be perfect. Thank you for being patient and loyal. I don't deserve it. ^_^;
Name: Funnykido reviewed Be Discreet on Jun 06, 2005 02:18 pm
I agree with the second review (You should write a story about them being on the run and how they feel in love) Except for one thing. . ARE they in love? I mean they obviously are, I'm just wondering if they've ADMITTED it yet. Because at some parts it did (him holding her, etc) but sometimes it didn't (when he slept at the other side of the bed, not touching her) So that con fused me a bit, but I get the feeling you MEANT to keep it that way, kind of aloof and not going into details. I liked it, it was short and sweet, but you could definitely make a story out of this. This first chap could even be the prologue or something. If you are going to. . . I'd LOVE to beta. Seriously. So just email me at yellowpages20@yahoo.com if you decide to and need a beta.

Author's Response: The reason he scooted over to the far side of the bed is because he doesn't want to make her uncomfortable. He's giving her some space, you could say. She's mourning Ron, and he doesn't want to invade her personal space. I am thinking about extending this, and if I need a beta, I'll definitely keep you in mind. :)
Name: Betz reviewed Be Discreet on Jun 06, 2005 11:55 am
Short and sweet. I liked it.
Name: majeam reviewed Be Discreet on Jun 06, 2005 06:17 am
i think that was cute and wonderful and you should write a story of them being on the run and falling in love it would be great.

Author's Response: I'm thinking about it. :) But I have to finish my WIP first. I've procrastinated on it far too long, and I feel terrible.
Name: Beads reviewed Be Discreet on Jun 06, 2005 12:26 am
Aww, floof. Sweet, yet sad. One of the best kinds of writings. Great job. Loved it.
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