Reviews For Unforgivable
Name: CaesiiOculi reviewed 8 on Jul 08, 2006 05:55 pm
*ominous music*
ooooooooooooooooooooooh!!!
Name: dracolover89 reviewed 8 on Apr 19, 2006 11:15 pm
oh fuck. suspense! :)
Name: Kandikanes reviewed 10 on Apr 06, 2006 12:44 pm
That was kool. Very surprising ending. Loved it!!!
Name: myownjess reviewed 03 on Feb 28, 2006 07:44 am
wow that was cool. drco that bastard... can he do it to me?
Name: Uka Shinoza reviewed 01 on Feb 18, 2006 12:18 pm
I have to say that it's a very romantic story,I also have a love life except for that he's a christian and I'm into buddism so we don't see each other that muc.I have a AIM so we chat there.I have to connect to Ginny & Draco's love.This is also my first time reading geeky Harry Potter stories.I reccomend Harry & Hermione.It'll be great and I'll also checkit out when you people are finished with it.BYE NOW!!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed 02 on Feb 02, 2006 01:53 am
Ooh, scandalous. Off to the next chapter!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed 01 on Feb 02, 2006 01:50 am
Hmm, interesting indeed. I don't know how I haven't read this fic...or if I read it, how I could forget it.
Name: angelgirl_not reviewed 03 on Dec 30, 2005 07:05 am
i don't understand that last paragraph. it makes no since
Name: angelgirl_not reviewed 03 on Dec 30, 2005 06:39 am
i don't understand that last paragraph. it makes no since
Name: ABC reviewed 10 on Aug 21, 2005 11:27 am
Your Loki stuff is getting a little tired don't you think?
Name: Draco's Slave Christina reviewed 10 on Jul 10, 2005 06:49 pm
I've been reading your stuff ever since I first stumbled on JotH and I have to say, this is by far, my favorite work from you. Its dark and sticky and it sticks to my mind like syrup sticks to the plate after you try to scrape it up with your fork. I was disturbed by the earlier concept of Ginny's rape enjoyment and her decision not to call it rape. Its a little known fact that a good number of women who are raped actually do orgasm, (which causes no end of shame) because no one explains to them that its a biological response and not an admission of desire. But ultimately I felt you weren't telling a moral tale meant to solve the worlds interpretations of rape, but just a story about two people and their responses to what happened. It was brilliant and poignant and the last chapter made me cry and I'm not sure why. You are amazingly good at what you do, Anise. sangrevetala@yahoo.com
Name: Nina reviewed 10 on Jul 05, 2005 03:27 pm
I want to see that alternate ending! But this one does clear up many things. Are you ever going to write the story in which it actually works out?
Name: penyn reviewed 10 on Jun 30, 2005 03:17 pm
curiouser and curiouser. yo've got me hooked.
Name: Mia reviewed 10 on Jun 30, 2005 08:43 am
Wow! That was just brilliant! I loved it! Yes! Myunet should post her alternate ending! Even though Ginny died, I still love how Loki plays in and the mention of QatD, OotP, and HBP. Just amazing.
Name: Jen reviewed 10 on Jun 29, 2005 11:42 am
Hmm, all right, I think I'm starting to grasp onto the plot here. Ginny, Draco, Siruis, and I can't remember who else (Marie-France?) are the only people who can free Loki from his imprisonment, right? So he's making all these little worlds, hoping that in one of them, someone will agree to free him? Or do Ginny and Draco have to fall in love or something? Because otherwise he could have tried to convince Draco to free him after he killed Ginyn in this universe. Am I sort of on the right track? JotH is one of Loki's little universe's in a glass ball right? And QatD as well? TBBC and HC are in Canonverse, and OBSaC was just a dream in that verse. But is this also one of Loki's little glass balls? Loki said he was thinking about creating a universe in which Sirius goes through the veil, but that's already happened in TBBC/HC Canonverse, so does this story take place before that? Perhaps this happened before Loki tried his luck in that verse? Now I'm confusing myself. Can you shed any light on this without giving away the plotline? Anyway, I enjoyed this story regardless of where it fits in to the big timeline. It was dark and sad, and yet you couldn't help but root for these two characters to come together in their 'not quite' search for redemption and justice. Isn't it always fun to kill off a character because you know it's just an AU? :) Nice job, I loved it.
Name: Esus reviewed 10 on Jun 22, 2005 08:19 am
That's bloody brilliant! Now, I must read your other stories because I want to see the others world Loki created. But, what he is looking for? Why he is playing with their lifes?
Draco and Ginny could possibly free him from his eternal prison?
Well, at least, about the story, you ended it in a wonderful way: everything went as I exprected and there wasn't any deus-ex-machina who twist the story at the end.
What I found funny is how Loki talked about the end of Draco's life in that dimension: he could make it as if it was something stupid and of no-importance, completely distorting the POV. Before we were sharing Draco's grief and the moment after we were looking at all this with a cynical eye. Really, great job.
About your stories, there is a first one from which I should start?
Name: Blahh reviewed 10 on Jun 22, 2005 08:13 am
Im quite confused..maybe im not connecting things..but im confused..Anywhos lovely lovely job on this story!!
Name: brit reviewed 10 on Jun 22, 2005 05:31 am
wow the way u tied all of that together was amazing, i dont even know how u tought of it. veryyyy well done
Name: xlostx0652 reviewed 9 on Jun 21, 2005 08:11 am
That is the sadest chapter I have ever read. Im crying..are you happy?..You've made me cry!..Why did she have to die?..Aww man..But anywhos good job writing it..but its really sad.
Name: Madeline Jones reviewed 9 on Jun 20, 2005 09:08 pm
Devastation -- that's the first word that came to mind, or feeling I guess. I will eagerly await the last chapter, though I can't imagine how you will resolve it. Excellent writing.
Name: cancertopia reviewed 9 on Jun 20, 2005 08:23 pm
Wow. I hate to say it, but that makes more sense than anything else that could have happened. How depressing... on a lighter note, Ginny and Draco in St. Mungo's gave me a plot bunny (insert gratuitious story pitch) It's called Puzzles. I wuv you Anise!
Name: imelda reviewed 9 on Jun 20, 2005 04:22 pm
Oh my god. Oh, how unbearable. You had to tack on that evil last line, didn't you? I thought Draco might kill himself, when he let Ginny go, but I don't know if you'll do that. I'll have to wait and see. Oh, I'm crying and it's just so awful. How did it happen? Why? Is this what's in store for us in your other fics? :-(
Name: imelda reviewed 8 on Jun 20, 2005 04:17 pm
Well. I did NOT hate that chapter. It was tough, and it was horribly depressing, for Ginny's sake, that the person she should find to make her feel those things when she wanted to should be the same as the one who forced them on her when she didn't. But for Draco's sake, well, he's still a person, too, and not a monster, and I did come to forgive him some in this chapter (funny how I don't hold Ginny accountable at all for using the Cruciatus--but I don't). I even liked him. It may sound like I have a lot of gall, saying I forgive someone for raping someone ELSE, but I do think that everyone is forgivable. Certainly Draco. A better person than me could completely forgive him...maybe someone like Ginny? It's unclear.
Name: a fan reviewed 9 on Jun 20, 2005 11:19 am
she can't be dead? no.. no. no no no. i'm in denial. PLEASE say it isn't so. she can't be. they were so beautiful together, so RIGHT together.. please. pleasee dont have it end this eay
Name: gotsnape reviewed 9 on Jun 20, 2005 08:41 am
Ok, you have been there, I am sure. You are sitting in your car and right before your eyes, a tragic auto accident unfolds. You KNOW it is coming, there is nothing that can stop it, you try HARD to look away but your eyes are fixed to the spot. When IT does occure, even while it is taking place, you keep asking yourself, "Why are you so freaking surprised?" That is how I felt while reading this last chapter. I knew what was coming from the moment Draco utter that one quote. I could have put the story down right there and saved myself a terrible sinus headache from the tear, but like with the accident, I couldn't take my eyes off the pages. You wicked, wicked witch! You captured my interest with your story, your take on the awful rape of Ginny, and it was rape; the delightful way you handled your characters and the ways each one responded to the attack. There was no way, even though I knew it was coming, to protect myself from the blow, the horrible impact and the pain. I had to go outside and wash my truck just to give my body something to do whilst my brain attempted to come to grips with what you have done. The last time I felt this about a piece of writing was "Dances with Wolves." After finishing that book, I flung it across the room, never to read it again. Like Wolves, yours is a beautifully written story. You have a talent for allowing the readers to come to feel for the characters, even after reading oodles of stories about them from hundreds of points of view. Did I just write oodles out loud. Forgive me. OMG! Like Draco asked Ginny...SOB! The last line of your tale with ring with me for the remainder of the day, if not longer. I have never seen a story wrapped up, or summed up so well with so few words. I could feel the hollow hole in his chest. Crap! Now I must go mow the lawn!!
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