Name: Mell8 reviewed
06 on Jun 15, 2005 08:35 am
Excellent story. I love your writing. Please update again soon!!!
Name: Q reviewed
06 on Jun 14, 2005 03:18 am
it gave me the most delicious shiverrss. I love it when a story does that to me.
and really? this comment is really loved and cherished?? YAY!
Name: Pam reviewed
06 on Jun 13, 2005 04:23 pm
Well written. The way you write the "relationship" between Draco and Ginny is very intriguing. I just can't get over how good this is, the whole atmosphere, their conversations and the way you write the dialogue. Nice work.
Name: imelda reviewed
06 on Jun 13, 2005 03:26 pm
I assume that the viewpoint taken by Ginny is not necessarily that of the author? Because I think it was pretty clearly rape. Sorry my reviews aren't more interesting...
Name: Bellasol67 reviewed
06 on Jun 13, 2005 01:18 pm
This fic is dark and disturbing and also intriguing, I'm curious to see where this goes.
Name: Katie reviewed
05 on Jun 13, 2005 11:26 am
O.k., this is getting a little pathetic... I'm sorry to be so honest, but.... he rapes her, she does an unforgivable course on him, and then they start talking like they were weird friends... I mean... out of the blue! It's odd..
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed
06 on Jun 13, 2005 08:31 am
Yes, a very dicey subject. Still, very well done I think. Some people might have a problem with it, but then, some people have a problem with just about anything. Anways, I love the quick updates :)
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed
06 on Jun 13, 2005 08:03 am
Sorry about the typos like the word intrigued and the back tracking with some of the sentences, am typing on my laptop with a baby sleeping on me and trying not to wake her...sorry. I swear we need a way to preview our review before we submit so we can read them and correct stupid things...lol..
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed
06 on Jun 13, 2005 07:58 am
This story is very good writing. I am untrigued at how you are protraying the story line. When you wrote of the assult you obviously knew how you wanted this story end progress and and eventually end. I say this because you wrote the scene as a violation and you have stressed that even Ginny understands that yes she was violated but must decide if it was truly rape. Rape is not just about the violation of the body, it is mainly about Control. It is about fear and power more then the sexual act. When you wrote the scene those aspects were glaringly missing. You obviously know something about psychology to have been able to write the scene the way you did as well as incorpate that knowledge in to this chapter as well. I do advise caution though as this line of story is very dicey. You could cause upset to some with this story line. Especially considering that there are woman out there that have been raped and were physically or pyschologically unable to scream or struggle to prevent the rape. And, orgasm is a natural function of the body just because a woman climax during a rape doesnt mean it is not rape. Perhaps an author's note with such comment would be appropriate including the comment that you don't condone violation by any means, just to make the point. I am greatly impressed with your writing and I will be intrigued to read more. I am enjoying the story immensly and I think that you are handling the story with great care and wisdom. If this continues I know that story will be fabulous! Sincerely, Kristine
Name: katy-Did reviewed
05 on Jun 12, 2005 05:48 pm
i adore you & all your stories (especially the trippy ones - i miss my valentine...) but it's really hard to read this since it looks like a run on paragraph
Name: jessica k malfoy reviewed
05 on Jun 12, 2005 05:47 pm
fantastic chappie. very interesting turn of events. is this part of the other stories. somehow it seems to be
Name: jessica k malfoy reviewed
04 on Jun 12, 2005 05:43 pm
i'm very hooked on this one, but not QUITE as much as QatD!!! and even though you can't apparate in hogwarts, you can portkey. dumbledore set up a portkey for the trio when harry "dreamed" about mr weasley getting bit by the snake. so you're right & if anyone tells you otherwise, refer them to book 5!
~jessakitty
Name: Audrey reviewed
05 on Jun 12, 2005 03:18 pm
So I was reading this and was like "hey this is familiar, where have I read this before?" open up my old PoF e-mails, find the story there, but different. So, I really like the changes you made in the order and I'm glad that I can now have in on my computer in a more easily read format. Keep up the writing!
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed
05 on Jun 12, 2005 11:33 am
I like this story much. I'm glad that you didn't have Ginny jumping right into Draco's arms after what he did to her. This seems much more natural, if you can call it that. Therapy buddies....anyways, can't wait to see what happens next.
Name: Ginerva reviewed
05 on Jun 12, 2005 11:04 am
This story is good, it's compelling and thought provoking. I like it! Update when you can.
Name: imelda reviewed
05 on Jun 12, 2005 09:57 am
Just letting you know I'm reading, even though I don't really have anything to say--except that I appreciate that your mind is as screwy as mine (I hope that doesn't offend you, I don't mean it to). Because I love reading your fics (though this one, so far, I've found the most troubling).
Name: qpq reviewed
05 on Jun 12, 2005 06:07 am
I wonder what happened to Ron.. Very nice change.
Name: Ginerva reviewed
04 on Jun 10, 2005 07:12 pm
Great chapter! It was well written, i was excited to read it. Will it end up that they are together in the end? AH! I can't wait for the next chapter! *squeal*
Name: Funnykido reviewed
04 on Jun 10, 2005 04:44 pm
I like how you suggest rape, though you don't come out and say it. It adds a bit to the angst, although I can't exactly name it. But I'm wondering. . you mention in the summary something about how Ginny goes and finds Draco, I'm wondering how this is going to happen, since, well since Draco raped her and he crucioed him, it wouldn't exactly lead to a nice bit of fluff would it? So I'm very excited to see how you bring this about! Good story so far!
Name: Kendra reviewed
04 on Jun 10, 2005 09:54 am
Are all your stories tied to each other. And what's the deal with Jewel of the Harem? That story seemed so mixed up? My email is ecleptic nomad@suscom.net
Name: Madeline Jones reviewed
03 on Jun 09, 2005 08:08 pm
I like how you've written this; it's very scary, but very real. I'll be looking forward to more.
Name: hpgirlsmixed reviewed
03 on Jun 09, 2005 06:46 pm
I'm with Q,I didn't really get the last paragraph.Really good story so far, Update soon.
Name: Meneloth reviewed
03 on Jun 09, 2005 05:20 pm
I really like your style pf writting. Anything you write is amazing, including this story! Please update really soon!!!
Name: Slygirl reviewed
03 on Jun 09, 2005 11:13 am
I usually don't like rape fics, but this one is somehow different, like Draco didn't enjoy doing it but it was the only time he would ever have a chance... it's odd...
But I must say I really liked it so far, it's great really!! Update it soon please!!!
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed
03 on Jun 09, 2005 09:45 am
Very dark. Poor Ginny...the body and the mind enjoy completely different things hmmm... And Draco. I agree with an early reviewer...stupid, very stupid, but not evil. I don't like rape-fics that much, but so far so good...looking forward to more fic ;)