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This is one of the most well written stories I have ever read on this site. I absolutely loved it. It is now my favorite story. The whole story was beautifully written and the end tied it all together so well. Thank you for this fic. It was truly amazing. Just the end made everything tie together so well.
Despite the fact that this story is on FIA, my favorite type of story still leaves the reader guessing until the end. What I mean is, I love stories where you read the whole chapter, knowing that Ginny is deeply involved with some man, but you don't know who that man is until the end. You wrote this perfectly and had I not known this was a D/G, I still would have been immensely satisfied with the outcome of the story. (sorry if that doesn't quite make sense).
I love how you were able to keep their emotions separate and distinct, easily delving into Ginny's psyche before jumping into Draco's thoughts and worries. I very much enjoyed reading this and appreciate any author's bravery and willingness to publicly post a story for anyone to read. Fantastic read, very well done
I really wasn't sure where this fic was going until the very end. I enjoyed this and how you were able to keep them together despite their trials.
im confused does that little note at the bottom mean that they had a son which died which explains why ginny was the way you wrote her?
Oh my goodness. It all makes sense now. I was confused at first, but it was beautifully played out in the end. Very sad, but good job fallenwitch. This was beautiful.
Part-way through the second chapter I realized that they had to be mourning for a lost child and once I understood that I found myself reading with tears in my eyes. He was five years old? That's heart-breaking. I'm crying.
was confussed at begining but was very good at end when all was explained .
This is fabulous. I think it's a really good idea to have it in two parts (though that's probably because I read it when it was finished, and therefore could appreciate the wonderfulness of its disjointed side, without being very annoyed that I didn't know what was wrong). Fabulous, well done :)
Oh... this is very well written, and fabulous like that, but why is it so sad? I don't even know why it's sad... mournful may be a better word to describe it, but it's very, very good... I'm happy Draco still loves her...
the first words out of my mouth as i read the epitaph was,
"oh, that'll kill a girl..."
=(
post-fic Psych101 classes are fun =P I figured it would be something like that, though, that they lost a child (my first thought was miscarriage, but the length of the depression wasn't quite appropriate)
anyways, another one i loved =)
Author's Response: Thanks, Bela. Always happy to entertain you. And I'm glad you enjoyed the Psych 101 class! - fallenwitch
cool i like it!
Wow!
I just lost my kid brother and I know how it feels. Though I guess, I'm adjusting, its a slow process and just when you think you can move on, the memories sneak up on you without warning...
The depiction was highly detailed and breath-taking, thank you for giving words to emotions that are speechless.
Author's Response: When someone speaks from the depths of such an experience and finds resonance and meaning in my words, it cuts to the heart of what writing is all about for me. Thank you for sharing your recent loss with me. My heart goes out to you and your family. It is truly a life (and heart) changing experience. -fallenwitch
I thought of a quote from Jane Austen's Persuasion that kind of applied to Ginny and Draco's different ways of grieving for Serpens --
"We (females) live at home, quiet, confined, and our feelings prey upon us. You are forced on exertion. You have always a profession, pursuits, business of some sort or other, to take you back into the world immediately, and continual occupation and change soon weaken impressions."
Well in the very least, your analysing of them reminded me of that passage (or a similar one that I can't find). I liked it :) It was confusing for the most part of it -- I couldn't figure out what had happened, but it all makes sense now.
Oh no no no....I loved the clinical terms! You get to read a great fic AND learn at the same time! Im nodding along and going aaahhhh I see....Quite the surprise at the end, I stared at "Serpens William Malfoy" for quite a while. Great great job.
cheers.
How exactly did Draco & Ginny's son die?
Author's Response: I am leaving that one up to each reader's dark imagination.
Even if nobody else did, I enjoyed your analysis at the end. It's interesting to see how you constructed your characters. I also understood the fic a lot better after reading it. I was confused, but that explanation helped with a lot of it.
Aw. I liked how harry came at the end. For a few moments i was speculating if james could have been ginny's. Obviously not tho. Silly me. in one word: beautiful
Really, really liked this one. Maybe my favorite, though I liked "The Letter" too. Yes, it all makes sense now. (Reading the headstone did it, and your rather clinical dissection just added to the "Hey, I actually GOT it feeling.") I liked how it all tied up so very neatly. "Serpens William" is an interesting name. Did you pick a wife for Harry, out of curiosity?
Very much a "what happened???" kind of chapter. Hoping it will get happier, but after reading "The Letter," I suppose bittersweet will do. But I do like it. It's a very tightly written little scenario--nice.
Beautiful! Well written and edgy! Thank you!
absolutely BRILLIANT...the last part was soooooo sad...aww...i get it now! haha...wonderful job
excellent, and i like the addition of the psycological info after it really helps understand the fic better and learn a little bit about life. at first i though she was anorexic, because of the loss of weight.
Author's Response: Wow, anorexia. I never thought about that one. Interesting. Thanks for the feedback about the psych notes. I never know what their impact is going to be.
this is a lovely story. Chapter two certainly explained chapter 1- but i thought chapter 1 could stand on its own as well. well written
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review, esp. your words about my beleaguered chpt. 1.