Name: ronlover reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 13, 2005 10:52 am
Hi,
I loved it! I figured it out after you told me that hint in the last chapter. But I also sort of figured it out on my own. Anyways that was great. It was well written. I cried during the last part. It was so sad, yet happy. Keep up the great work. I loved the review. I'm going to put it on my review list, hope you don't mind. My cat says hi, shes pawing and licking the screen. lol.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the story. Feel free to post my review of your story.
Name: JuliusCaesar reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 13, 2005 09:15 am
that was just lovely Fallenwitch. it really was. Your description of loss and grief was spot on, very realistic and understandable. Well done on a lovely piece of angst. loved your AN's especially.
Author's Response: JuliusCaesar - thanks again for your wonderful and lovely review. I appreciate it.
Name: mereschino reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 13, 2005 08:56 am
what a good story. and that epitaph at the end was such a good ending. I was wracking my brain as to what happened, why Ginny was so displaced, but then everything made sense. So good job, congrats.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it came together for you at the end! Thanks for the review.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 13, 2005 04:00 am
I relly like this story. For the record, I wasn't too confused by the first chapter. You definitely left some things out, but you gave enough hints that I could piece things together (I was fairly sure that Ginny's depression was because of the death of a child). You do a very good job of making the psychological issues come alive. Thanks for the story!
Author's Response: Thanks, Embellished. It's gratifying to know that you picked up the hints I left in the first chapter!
Name: Jenn reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 12, 2005 06:36 pm
Brilliant! you obviously are a human expert. you manage to make someone who is amist self distruction, and another who is helpless not seem pityable in an anoying way. neither do i want to just slap ginny-which is a common reaction i have to some fanfic/ general fic when a character goes into depression/ grieving. you make this believable, and compassionate, without making me sob my guts out over the computer. touching. revealing. beautiful. i just loved it -and i rarely review -coz i'm too lazy, but had to find the time to review this. and i liked the psyc at the end ( i like your little people-annalyzing at the ends) and i liked that the mention of the son was at the end. just loved the whole dang thing, and can't manage to make the words come out quite right to say how much!
Author's Response: Oh, I think your words came out quite nicely! I am humbled by your review and thank you for taking the time to write it.
Name: meeaz reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 12, 2005 04:53 pm
that was so wonderfully done. i kind of suspected that gin either had a miscarriage or their baby died in the first chapter, but wasn't usre and while reading the second chapter, it became clear. i love your writing style too-it's subtle in the beginning, but in the end ties everything together! great job!
xoxo, meeaz.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the review!
Name: ronlover reviewed
Ever The Intruder on Jun 12, 2005 03:28 pm
I think I get it now. I went back to the part that you told me to read...I think I understand what may have happened. But I won't say it till the next chapter comes out. Don't worry about it being not understandable. Sometimes stories just are. lol. Hope the next chapter comes soon. Can you please read and review my story? That would be wonderful. Thanks. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Great.
Name: mary reviewed
Ever The Intruder on Jun 11, 2005 03:27 pm
that was a great chapter, although a bit confusing so i cant wait for the ending. great story overall, i simply love draco and im simply curious of what happened to ginny.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Mary. I'm glad that you like the Draco I've created for this fic. I think chapter 2 will clarify things for you.
Name: ronlover reviewed
Ever The Intruder on Jun 11, 2005 08:04 am
I like it...but I sorta don't get it. But keep up the great work anyways. I'm sure that once I read read it, I will understand it. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: The update is coming very quickly to help clear up the confusion. It will also contain one of my infamous post chapter psych classes just to make sure I don't leave anyone guessing about Ginny's psychological state of mind. Thanks for the review! I appreciate it.
Name: lina reviewed
Ever The Intruder on Jun 11, 2005 05:52 am
it definitely left me wanting to know the rest of the story, as in what's going on with her!!! can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks lina.
Name: JuliusCaesar reviewed
Ever The Intruder on Jun 11, 2005 02:08 am
very interesting- i'm a bit lost but i suppose that will be cleared in chapter 2. have to say loved the style and subtlety of the writing - gentle agnst. nicely done!
Author's Response: Well, JuliusCaesar, you are not alone. I am sorry that this chapter turned into such confusion. I really should have posted the whole thing at one time, but I was still tweaking it with last minute adjustments. Hang in there. It will become clear.
Name: liz reviewed
Ever The Intruder on Jun 10, 2005 12:07 pm
Oh, God, it was one of the most beautiful fics i've ever read, it almost made me cry... The only reason it didn't... well, I really believe in their future. How could I not, with Draco loving her so much...?
Oh, I want one for myself... :)
Great work, keep up!
Author's Response: I am overwhelmed by your review.