Funnykido reviewed One-Shot
on Jul 01, 2005 12:33 pm
Yes, please continue! Except if you wanted fluff, you'd have to start with a story somewhere after this letter. Because her breaking up w/ him would just be angst. Perhaps a few years later, they meet again and get back together? Or maybe denie their feelings, etc etc etc?
The poetry was a little sketchy, it seemed you were having a bit of trouble rhyming and the like, but it conveyed the point well. Please continue with fluffy fic!
on Jun 30, 2005 03:46 pm
Nice. It would be interesting to see a story being made out of that letter. Keep up the great work.