Name: daisymama reviewed
drabble on Jul 27, 2005 04:18 am
I adore your story! You have really good dialogue and great banter. I especially enjoyed the character Alison. Maybe this story hit a personal chord (I didn't meet my father til I was 19), but I laughed out loud at several parts. Well done!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I am a big lover of dialogue. I think even the simplest and most overdone plot can be punched up with good dialogue.
Name: Napolean reviewed
sought on Jul 27, 2005 04:15 am
Hullo again! I'm absolutely loving this story, it's written so well!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Name: Napolean reviewed
eyes on Jul 27, 2005 03:51 am
This chapter was absolutely wonderful! I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
sought on Jul 27, 2005 02:22 am
I told you I'd drool over the update! Rather reminds me of the day my Father met me when I was 15. Of course, that didn't end up going very well because he didn't appreciate my spirit as much as Draco appreciates his daughter's...anyway, beside the point! It was brilliant, I love it and good show!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll admit them being all happy with one another is a bit unrealistic, but then again, it's fanfic.
Name: Ashes reviewed
drabble on Jul 26, 2005 07:33 pm
I just finished reading your whole story and I loved it! I was laughing so hard at some parts and I loved how you did Alison's personality it was a amazing! Your writing is excellent, I'm a sucker for little details and you had so much detail I was just drawn into the story!
~Ashes
Author's Response: Thank you. It's good to know this story holds up over time. This was the first pure HP story I worte.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
creation on Jul 26, 2005 05:13 pm
Ouch. That last line hurt. Good beginnings though. I'll be keeping a keen eye out for the next update and drooling over it when it comes. I love it thus far.
Author's Response: Thank you.