I love that the Slytherins are like real people -- instead of 'evil monsters'! ;) And your LUNA cracks me up -- "possible pixie anal probe?" HA HA HA!
I really enjoyed this beginning. I don't mind OOC Goyl at all -- Here's hoping you've molded all those smarmy Slytherins into something more palatable... ;)
SEXY! Holy wow. -dies-
All right, I won't mention a sequel... but I really hope you do write more, even if they are only short little ficlets. I LOVED THIS STORY. Mayjorly.
lol...lavender is such a dolt! lol...this is a good story
That was very well written. It's so nice to read something by someone who can spell and doesn't mutilate the english language/
This is a great fic.I LOVED it but I think that you might want to change the title it makes it sound like an angst fic.
Heehee! This is about the thirtieth time I'm reading this fic, because it's so much fun.
I just wanted to commend you on the two best lines spoken by minor characters in this fic, which occurred in this chapter:
"I'm just saying, Neville. Geez. I don't care if Davis is your boyfriend or not. It makes me no nevermind."
and then...
"What's all that happy horseshit?! Did you just pat my brother's bum?!"
...am absolutely DYING.
Lol!!! Love this chappie, all the ones before it, and probably all the ones after it. My fav line
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"WILL YOU SHUT IT ABOUT MY ARSE CHEEKS!" Draco screeched in Blaise's face.
Half the great hall turned and looked at them. Draco closed his eyes as if he were in great pain. Blaise just waved at everyone them leaned his head on Draco's shoulder. Draco turned and gave him a mighty shove that sent the laughing Zabini right off the end of his seat and sprawling onto the floor."
Hilarious.
U FORGOT ABOUT GINNY N DRACO!! THEY DESERVE AN ENDING!! hehehe
good story, nahh, actually GREAT story
great story
i just read it again!! thats it!! im printing it off and keeping it with me for ever and ever!!!
Ahh! I loved the whole thing! I just sat down and read it and I just love how different every couple is and they all sort of have all their own...well, kinks.And I'm really resisting going"Sequel! Sequel! You know you wanna!"Thank you so much!
omgomgomg you are a AMAZING!!! you make wonderful stories!! im rolling on the floor laughing, if i were to die from laughter it would be from your wonderful storys!!! lol
i looooooovvvvvvveeeeee them omg im gonna tell all my friends..... bye najina keep up the good work!!!
FANTASTICAL!! i loved the way u portrayed the different relationships. esp. between the boys. priceless snape moments. Lough out loud funny which is extremely rare. accolades *salutes*
still going! I love it, still :) Tracey is hilarious! I've never thought of a gay person in hogwarts (don't know why, they are wonderful and everywhere... why not the wizarding world?) This is a brilliant story
I am going to finish it, but wanted to say that this first chapter was lovely. Goyle does talk a bit more, but you set it up lovely and make it seem not ooc. Wonderful job so far, can't wait to continue.
I love love love this story. I feel like I've left a review for this story before but couldn't see it in the review list...oh well...maybe on another site. I'm a HUGE fanfiction reader...but I never read anything twice...except this story.I think i've read this about 12 times now. There is something so gorgeous about the way you have written these characters. I love your wit and your cleverness. Your Blaise is my perfect man...lol. He is actually what I like to think Sirius was when he was at school. I'm thrilled to hear you are writng a sequel. I look forward to your efforts. Thanks again for writing such a lovely, intriguing, squee-inducing, gorgeous story.
This story was absolutely hilarious! I know you said not to talk abt sequals, but really, you have some fanfiction magic right here. Plus, I think you've set up a lot more unfinished plot. Please continue! By the way, I like your version of Blaise much better than the Blaise in book 6--and I always imagined that if Hogwarts were ever to go XXX that Luna would act as she did in your story. I am stil unable to control my laughter at the scene where they are caught in the hospitol wing...
Author's Response: Thank you. Actually, I think JK's version of Blaise meshes well with how I write him. I just take him to a naughty place. And also, part of the first part of a sequel has been written, but I am quite busy doing other things and dwelling in other fandoms right now.
dang! this is freaking funny! I was actually about to skip this fic, but thankfully I changed my mind! you really have a way with writing words and I pretty much like your sort-of twisted sense of humor! I ciouldn't stop laughing especially their dialogues! keep up the good work! now i gotta go read your other fics!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you changed your mind.
I loved it. There's a subtle wit incorporated into it, and I actually just can't stop laughing. I only wish I knew more authors who could pull it off - you're a heaven-send ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you. High praise indeed. I might even be blushing. Again, thanks for reading, and thanks even more for taking the time to review.
wonderful !! a girl can really get off on your story it's just wonderful thank you for writing it!
Author's Response: Thank you. that was perhaps a bit too much information for a review though. Geez.
hun i just loved this story. every time i read it i couldnt stop laughing. the way you paired up the different couples was great. i have read all off you stories and i find myself laughing all the way through. hun keep up the good work. oneday i hope to see a sequel to this story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I wouldn't hold my breath on the sequel. I've started it, but it's so not ready for posting.
Wow...This is probably THE best story I have ever read...And that's out of a lot of stories...Very nice work! Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you. There are better stories out there though. Just keep reading. :)
I really did love this story! One of my absolute favorites. I remember reading this story a while back and enjoying it, and now I've just finished re-reading it. I think you did a fantastic job on the whole story, and I found it very entertaining. I hope you plan to do a sequel if you have time, because I'm definitely looking forward to a sequel. Cheers.
Author's Response: Thank you. It always amazes me when people say they reread my stuff.