Reviews For Secret Passages
Name: Boogum reviewed Marshmallows!! on Nov 11, 2010 01:16 pm
Lol, very cute.
Name: kellbell930 reviewed Marshmallows!! on Mar 07, 2007 01:54 am
haha, that was very cute! this would be great if you expanded it, maybe a bit more detail and description, but otherwise it was very cute. good writing!

Author's Response: Yeah I get the feeling it would be but currently I can't find the time which sucks so badly I'm in the final year of my GCSE's which has left me no time for a social life nevermind this but ah well I will fix it one day have no fear! P.S. Any tips on how to expand it? Would be much apprieciated
Name: Ananyamous reviewed Marshmallows!! on Jan 22, 2007 01:03 pm
I think this was cute, but the plot has more potential. The event with Ron and Hermione seeing them---you could have made it very chaotic or a little more thrilling or something. I hope this helped and didn't offend!

Author's Response: Yeah it did help I'm going to start editing my stories now I have more time so that they will no longer be so immature and will hopefully appeal to more people.
Name: sexysexa reviewed Marshmallows!! on Jan 19, 2007 08:19 pm
HRPUMP! I DON'T LIKE MARSHMELLOWS!

Author's Response: That may be, but don't go leaving any more rude reviews on my stories.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Marshmallows!! on Sep 20, 2006 07:33 am
~Well i just love this lil piece of fluff. So cute.~

Author's Response: Thank-you I'm glad you like it.
Name: Alli reviewed Marshmallows!! on Feb 22, 2006 07:59 am
heyas Xan lovin the story. It's brill, cheesy but brill!!! Anyway g2g love ya

Author's Response: hi alli nice 2 hear from u on here.. and yes its cheesy but whatever
Name: meeaz reviewed Marshmallows!! on Sep 02, 2005 08:21 am
aw. this was so cute. looking foward to reading some more of your stuff. xoxo, meeaz.

Author's Response: thanks as soon as my beta has done my next story will be up
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed Marshmallows!! on Sep 01, 2005 07:15 pm
Awww! This was cute; the marshmallow affinity for Draco has oodles of potential. :) Good job!

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, glad you like it.
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