Name: Caroline reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 23, 2006 11:21 am
aww! what a cute ending on this chapter. I really like your story:)
Name: corvidae reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 23, 2006 11:19 am
oh my gosh, i've been feeling absolutely sick reading about those two miscommunicators! the end is almost too much of a relief, it's as though the world got a lot brighter. but please don't tell me it's the end! we need another chapter, some closure, some draco and ginny as REAL husband and wife. more please, as soon as your little fingers can type!
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 23, 2006 10:52 am
Love the chapter/story! I really don't want this to be over, but this is the perfect place to end it! Is it over? It says this is a work in progress. Will the next chapter be like a epilouge or an continuation. Loved it! I can't wait to read more!
Name: kittykat91419 reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 23, 2006 07:27 am
*Cheers* Yay!! I was thrilled to find this on the update list here after watching it on schnoogle and not seeing any updates. I hope you'll post there soon, but I got to finish it, so all is good. Do we get an epilogue of some sort with lots of little babies?
Name: Vixenize reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 23, 2006 07:02 am
Oh my goodness. I cannot believe I just discovered this story now. It is AMAZING.
I really, really love the little one liners that you have used all throughout the story, including the one said by Bernard at the end. I love how we get to see Draco and Ginny slowly starting to fall in love with each other, yet there are many obstacles along the way and they have to step back (like the piggy back ride) because it's believable - these are 2 very different people who detested each other and their relationship isn't going to be smooth.
I loved the misunderstanding too and I really felt for them when each thought they were going to be happy together, then realized the other had different ideas. It makes you realize how so much heartache could have been avoided if people would just TALK to each other, you know?
And the characters are all great. There is not one person I didn't like (except Pansy, but that is a given). You've written them very well, from Severus Snape to Ron Weasley and even Harry Potter, who I find annoying in most D/G fics because he wants Ginny when she doesn't want him... but I love how you made him realize (even when D/G themselves couldn't see it) that they belong together and that's exactly what he told Draco.
I absolutely loved reading this story and I loved how they got back together and realized they missed each other so much and wanted to stay together. Please don't stay this is the end of the story, I really would like to read more. And hopefully you will update soon?
Again, amazing. This is definitely going on to my list of favourites! :)
Name: susan reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 23, 2006 04:15 am
awwww perfect im crying of excitement bravo brava its perfect i love it yeahhhhhhhhhh
Name: dieLoreley reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 22, 2006 09:31 pm
:D Ohhh yay! You know, you had me scared last chapter, but everything's better now :D I'm so happy and oddly, I feel like Ginny. All relieved and light-headed. Well done! :D *can't stop smiling*
Name: WG13 reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 22, 2006 06:43 pm
Loved the story!! hope there is more...
Just one Q, how come Draco isn't really sick due to the spell and the no touching Ginny clause?
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 22, 2006 05:22 pm
Yippee! I love a happy ending. Goody story. Good job.
Name: Angelique Collins reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 22, 2006 04:57 pm
that was such a great chapter... hope they get married for real now.... good work
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 22, 2006 04:48 pm
~So happy. HEHE....FINALLY~
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 22, 2006 04:41 pm
Horray! They finally admitted to one another that they love one another. Hopefully there will be an epilogue (hint, hint).... Thank you, I am glad that this story has done nothing but keep me on the edge of my seat and then I woould be upset when I was left hanging.. oh the horror! Thank you, Ilook forward to the next chapter.
Name: Dorthey Star reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 22, 2006 04:33 pm
Is this the last chapter? Please say it isn't. You know you wanna follow up with another chapter on how happy they are and stuff. I've been following this story since I discovered it on Astronomy Tower and I love it so much I don't want it to end!
Name: tudorrose1533 reviewed
Chapter Twenty on Aug 22, 2006 02:47 pm
Oh. YAY!
Wow. This was a great chapter--full of action and longing, and the ending was just too perfect...the two of them reunited, and their first kiss. (Which was beautifully written.)
I loved the Draco and Harry exchange, as well. Very true to both of their characters.
And Bernard! Yay!
Is this it, or will there be more? I hope for more. :-)