Gorgeous, hot, steamy, lovely, amazing, sweet, brilliant, adorable and magical.
A lovely update, thank you so much! I loved the whole section after the bonding spell was done, not that I didn't love the rest, just that bit was my favourite. It was great!!
xx
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked that part, as it was very fun to write :D
Hey! I wouldn't mind editing/being a beta. Let me know.
Author's Response: Really??????????? yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay, I just posted a chapter, but school ends next week and I will be back in this with full force (plus two others. geeeeeeeeez.) and I will contact you with the info on your profile here. Will that work?
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
anticipation is killing me.
Author's Response: LOL i posted :)
"wondering if it would fit" LOL!
okay, back to obsessively reading this fic.
Author's Response: oh well thank you! haha, i'm glad you're reading!
Oh My God! He drugged her!
Author's Response: *gasps* have you solved my mystery????????
Holy Macaroni and Cheese Balls! I see why you told us all to heed the rating in the author's notes. Jeez Louise. Not what I was expecting. All along, I've gotten a kinda sweet Draco vibe (even if he is inordinately possessive) and now you let the Draco from 'Lies' out in this story. Don't get me wrong, that was an amazing roller coaster as a reader, and I think 'Lies' is a fuckawesome story, but that was one storyline shift that totally rolled me flat on my derriere. Points for spontaneity and for shaking me out of my preconceptions. Whoah.
Author's Response: LOL well, i'm glad that chapter didn't scare you off. I think a few of my readers left after that o_O I guess they really weren't expecting that, but I wanted to present both characters with multi-dimensional personalities. It won't happen again, at least not to that extent, so I hope you keep reading :)
Keep writting :)
Author's Response: i did! LOL. I just posted a new chapter
I loved this! It was really sweet, I like their interaction. Especially when they're talking about the the upcoming wedding; at the wedding shop and at dinner. I can't wait for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) And I just updated. I hope you like it!
What a lovely chapter! I thought the dialog flowed beautifully and I really felt the emotions of your characters. Loved it.
Author's Response: thanks hun! I felt a bit like i was ripping readers off by not giving a really long chapter, but my writing process (when it comes to this story) feel stalled. ♥
Sorry this is really weird but I am proud that I can correct your Italian since I am not that good in class... My love would be il mio amoro because it is masculine and if you are using dear for a girl I am fairly sure it should be cara (not to sure on that one but all the things I have been tought have told me that)
Author's Response: not weird at all. i speak no Italian. i just looked it all up on babel fish!
Oh, jessica k malfoy, I reread this chapter and still loved it! I'm so glad that you're updating and that you know where this is going. ;P My favorite part is still the part where Ginny totally denies Draco sex. He's so funny and demanding about it, too.“That's when I didn't know what I was missing!”
haha. oh, draco....hopefully nice shagging scene next chapter, though, because by then, they'll be husband and wife. *sighs* good job and please update soon!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: thank you thank you! that was a fun part to write too. i was trying to torture him :D i will update soon. i hope. :D Jess
Have you tried Rowan Greenleaf's DG forum over on FF.net? We're very serious about spelling and grammar over there.
http://www.fanfiction.net/forum/rowangreenleafs_DG_Forum/54059/
Author's Response: THANK YOU! i am going there right now!
I really like this. I still think there is something else about Ginny that's a bit off, other than the pregnancy. And I'm guessing she doesn't know she's not supposed to drink a lot when she's pregnant. I feel like Draco has done something to her, but I can't tell what it would be. I can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: yes, Ginny is off, but there is a reason! it's not that she doesn't know she shouldn't be drinking, it's just that right now she's overly optimistic! thanks for the review!!
*squeeeeee* OK, now that I've gotten that out of my system *sigh* I can breathe again. I have been waiting forever for this update. Such a lovely chapter. I understand Ginny's selfish behaviour with wanting to spend her time with Draco without parental interference. It must be hard but she should remember that her parents don't judge, even if the individual in question is a Malfoy. The De Luca's are so nice, and Draco really is devoted. I'm getting seriously green with envy because I want a devoted Malfoy of my own. I notice she's drinking a lot of alcoholic beverages even with the possibility of being preggers, is that a hint to let us know the pills will work, or is that just careless teenage behaviouur on their part? Hopefully Ginny isn't preggers so that she and Draco can go back to shagging like rabbits again because that chocolate balle/limo/elevator chapter is still one of he hottest things I've read in a while. Brilliant. I love the dress that Ginny chooses, its perfect for her I think. Thank you again for posting an update, the delay has been killing me, hopefully you'll find a beta or two soon. Lovely chapter.
Author's Response: haha! thanks. Ginny is selfish right now, but there is a reason. a very good reason..... dum dum dum! (that was my suspense music.) i think we all read/write fanfic because we want a Draco (or whoever) of our own! LOL. i got to thinking about how much she's drinking and it seems excessive but then i thought about it again and i drank more at 16 than i do now. so i don't know. she's just scared, really. i'm glad you liked that dress. i spend hours googling dresses and deciding what she would get. my beta search is slow, but i am hopeful! :D
OMG! i hope ginny is pregnant. love the story so far. keep up the good work
Author's Response: LOL i can't tell!!! okay, i will tell, just not yet! thanks for the review.
Haha I'm wondering if she is actually pregnant that's what I thought before but now I'm nottoo sure. Post traumatic stress prehaps?
Author's Response: we will find out! very very soon ;-)
Haha I'm wondering if she is actually pregnant that's what I thought before but now I'm nottoo sure. Post traumatic stress prehaps?
Author's Response: LOL i'll never tell! actually i will, in an upcoming chapter. just not now ;-)
I hope Grace and Har are ok. Were they really taken by Death Eaters? Will we see them again? Is it too late for Plan B for Ginny? What kind of dress will she choose? Yes this chapter has only brought even more questions! LOL. Thank you for the great descriptives, this story has really made me feel like I'm in Italy - one of those places I still need to visit.
Author's Response: *sighs* i can't answer your questions! not without giving it all away :D although i put up a link to the dress she ended up with (not the one she wanted) in the most recent chapter! and i'm glad my descriptions are good, because i've never been to Italy!
ahhh. i'm so glad that you've started working on Brightside again. That story just stuck with me so much (actually, ALL your stories stick with me, becasue I've read them so many times), but brightside is the one that I read when I need a good cry. It's very rare for me to cry for anything, but Brightside's like one out of the three that just really gets me. Are you (hopefully) working on a different ending, where Draco doesn't end up dyingand D/G get together? *loks at author with hopeful, puppy dog eyes* I'm just glad that you're working on it again, and I'm sure that whatever you end up writing about, I'll still love it either way. :)
Author's Response: ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmyeah. it's the same story. from Ginny's point of view. so, draco does not get to live :(
yay that dracoandginnyhaveahappyending!
That makes me happy. Harry...ew. yuck. disgusting! (like you said). I have a tendency to skip to the ending before reading a story, just to make sure D/G have a happy ending, so i don't get thrown for a loop and brood for days. I'm glad they stay together in the end. And as for Brightside, it's so beautiful the way you have it right now, but darn, it made me cry so much. I just think about how Draco is this Deatheater who hasn't has much love in his life, and how he had to watch his love marry someone else. It just made my heart break for him. Hehe, maybe you could bring him back from the dead, or something. :) Anyways, please update!
Author's Response: i re-started working on brightside again. dang it. like i don't have enough to do. i need to work on my "real" novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! geh! but it's got such a delicious plot, i just can't help it!!!!!!! what Ginny went through before Oliver is very crazy. literally. *giggles like a maniac*
Bravo! Really good chapter! I can't wait to see what happens when Ginny's parents find out. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: thank you very much! i can't wait either.............. LOL
AHHHH!!! Is she pregnant or not??? There was bound to be a big chance of Ginny getting pregnant after all those *clears throat* activities....hahaha
You're killing me! I can't stand the suspense!
Spare me the torture and update soon please =)
Author's Response: i can't tell!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they did have some steam, ahem, activities though..... :D
i love it jess.., but i don't like the whole ginny is feeling like verything is okay thing.., it feels fishy.
waiting for the next chapter ;)
xoxo annelie
Author's Response: it IS very fishy! i'm glad yall know that it's fishy, and that i haven't just given draco and ginny a random personality transplant! xoxoxox
I always get so excited when I see this story updated =) Thank you so so so much for sharing! My life would be so dull without fan fiction *sigh* Wish I had better ways to show my appreciation.
Author's Response: LOL! i feel the same way. thank you D/G for taking away my life outside the computer! haha thanks for the review :D
I kind of hope that Draco and Ginny don't get married. I like Ginny's idea of waiting for a few years. And I can't really image Ginny acting as she is while she is pregnant but in a way it seems to fit their relationship. This is very interesting and I can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: *giggles* it seems like in all the reviews everyone wants something different! i can't tell you (yet) what's going to happen, BUT! ginny's actions are definitely of interest, but maybe not for the reasons you think! :-)