Reviews For Unbreakable
Name: angelface reviewed Perhaps a not so happy birthday, Mr. Malfoy on Nov 29, 2007 09:16 am
Don't stop now. What happens next? Please update soon.
Name: Night_Merr reviewed The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Aug 14, 2007 10:16 pm
Whoaa! I love it, and I really wanna know what happens next... Please update!!
Name: Dorthey Star reviewed The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 09, 2006 09:21 am
Silly Draco..doesn't he see that the girl is Ginny? That's what the chamber of secrets dream is all about :)
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 08, 2006 06:13 pm
This is very sad. Very, very, very sad. I hope they end up together or else I'm going to cry and god knows I've been doing enough of that lately...
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 07, 2006 10:38 am
I adore this story... Really I do. Do you have plans on making it like 30 chapters... or are we going to see some resolution anytime soon... AND you MUST be joking about Patil? PLEASE say it's just a bad guess for Draco... ICK! Can't wait for more! ;)
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed The One with the New Apartment on Mar 07, 2006 10:24 am
Snakes... it's all about the basilisk... yep... Elizabeth is just screwing with him... he'll get Ginny afterall! ;)
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Kippers? on Mar 07, 2006 10:18 am
OH, my heart is breaking right along with them... Too sad!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Saying Good-Bye on Mar 07, 2006 10:09 am
Okay, first of all... if it's Hermione I might just puke. Secondly... I think that it's the Elizabeth person and that this curse is all a clever ruse to see if Draco (our Draco) will be a spineless coward like his predessessor. Great story... ;)
Name: flame_kitty reviewed The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 07, 2006 06:43 am
This story sucks! and not because it's not written well, but because Draco and Ginny love each other and are meant to be together but they can't ::cries::
I was really hoping that the snakes/parsel tongue thing pointed to Ginny because she was possessed by Tom Riddle.
Oh how you torment me!
If Draco and Ginny don't get back together then you absolutely have to tell me because I will stop reading this fic now! I can't watch them date other people! It's painful!

my e-mail is kaitlynsanzo@yahoo.com
I await your next update with a hopeful heart. :-)
Name: cassie reviewed The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 07, 2006 02:23 am
awwww poor draco!!! he's suffering so much! at least ginny can freely choose a man she likes (coz she only loves draco) but draco doesn't, even if he does come to like his intended. or parvati. whatever. sigh. though i can totally understand what ginny is going through but seriously, it's easier for ginny. she has a lot of distractions, a lot of options, brought up having a good and happy family. while draco, there's nothing much in his life really but his friends, his mother, all death eater-ish activity growing up, and ginny. :( i cry a river for draco. :'(
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 07, 2006 12:30 am
Hmm, I think the dream probably had more to do with having siblings that looked alike rather than identical twins simply because I'm quite positive that Draco and Ginny will end up together in the end...because, if they don'tl...well, let's just say that fanfic readers are very vindictive...lol.

Anyhow, it's time for constructive criticism. Most, if not all, of the places where an apostrophe should appear there is instead an equals sign...something that probably should have been cleared up when you previewed the fic or had it betaed. There are several silly spelling errors, but those happen to the best of us even when the story is betaed. Also, from what I understand, disclaimers should be posted at the top of every chapter. I've been informed by several writers that they find this unnecessary and tedious, but it isn't really a question of literary merit, but a nod to the Gods, if you will. It is simply saying, "Yes, I know I don't own this, but another brilliant woman does." I'm sure that if you were in her place, your billions of dollars would soften the blow but you would probably still be slightly irked that people weren't giving you credit where credit was due.

It was a brilliant chapter, and I hope my piece of constructive criticism hasn't made you feel otherwise. I will continue reading the story because I feel it is well written and original.

Author's Response: ok, something must've happened when I uploaded the chapter because I had a disclaimer and i went through the entire chapter changing the punctuation. Oh crap, this means i have to do this again.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed The One with the New Apartment on Mar 06, 2006 11:53 pm
I love the last line. I have woken from many a dream thinking or saying that exact thing.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Kippers? on Mar 06, 2006 11:47 pm
Man, I wish I had Dreamless Sleep potion. It would be really convenient if you could just brew all the good drugs at home...lol.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Perhaps a not so happy birthday, Mr. Malfoy on Mar 06, 2006 11:41 pm
I reread this chapter (because I often forget details of stories...because I read far too much fanfictiong *blushes*) and now I've remembered how wonderfully written this whole thing is! I'm off to read the update now!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed The One with the New Apartment on Feb 24, 2006 12:24 pm
oh dear. What was taht dream about?!?
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Kippers? on Feb 23, 2006 06:53 pm
I went through a tough break-up and a death in the family about a year ago and it would have been very nice to have a dreamless sleep potion.

Author's Response: yeah, I have that wish a lot as well.
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Saying Good-Bye on Feb 23, 2006 06:36 pm
Why does this story have to be so horrible to Ginny and Draco?
It's well-written, just really really sad. Like I'm seriously on the brink of tears.

Author's Response: It'll get better soon...I hope. I never intended it to be this sad and so it'll go on an upswing soon.
Name: does it matter? reviewed The One with the New Apartment on Feb 23, 2006 01:36 pm
update update updateeeeeee this is a really good story please update really soon!!!! omg i love it
Name: dracosmysextoy reviewed The One with the New Apartment on Feb 22, 2006 10:11 pm
wow. this story is actually good! if you can only update regularly that would be awesome.

Author's Response: I also wish I could update regularly. It would be nice just to be able to sit down and write whenever I wanted to but sometimes my mind just goes blank or I see that I actually have to do my schoolwork.
Name: Slytherin Wolf reviewed The One with the New Apartment on Feb 22, 2006 03:58 pm
Draco's not going to end up with Hermione, Lavender, or Pavarti is he? *Shudders* at the thought. Excellent story, keep up the good work!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed The One with the New Apartment on Feb 22, 2006 07:00 am
Seriously, what the fuck was that?! Such a cliffie! I can't wait for the nexy installment!

Author's Response: don't worry, it's currently with my beta. But after that, I have no new chapters to update with so I'll have to start writing again. So far I've just been reworking old chapters.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Kippers? on Feb 22, 2006 06:51 am
I think I had read this chapter as well, but it is completely possible that I didn't review then. It was one of my NYR's to start reviewing more. I went back and reviewed as many of the other stories I'd read and left all new reviews for them! I realized at that point how much fanfic I read! LOL.

Anyway, this was a brilliant chapter and I'm off to read the next installment!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Saying Good-Bye on Feb 22, 2006 06:37 am
I saw that this story had been updated, and I knew I'd read part of it before...so I refreshed myself with the first two chapters (which I know I'd read previously) and here I am! I can't wait to find out how Draco realizes it's Ginny that he's supposed to marry! I also can't wait to see how he gets Ginny back...because she's going to be a stubborn one, I can feel it!
Name: lina reviewed The One with the New Apartment on Feb 22, 2006 03:54 am
squeeeee!!!!! oh i can't wait for more
Name: Mirage reviewed Kippers? on Dec 27, 2005 07:37 am
I almost cried at the end of this chapter...it's so good! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this! Wonderful work!
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