Reviews For The Vault Incident
Name: fairgirl reviewed Passing the time on Mar 13, 2006 09:21 am
One more story of yours that i totally loved, the way it is written is excellent and about the plot...well that's naughty and a vault...good idea lol
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Passing the time on Mar 07, 2006 02:20 am
And you have every reason to preen, darling. I think this is my third review for this story and I'm sure I'll leave more. I've never read a story like this, so it gets points for originality and there is good smut, so it gets points there as well. It gets more points because we share a beta (YAY for Jen!) and because you've managed to submit the story with no noticable spelling or grammatical errors (a big plus!). So, kudos to you! I love it!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Passing the time on Feb 09, 2006 04:15 pm
This is one of the most original yet still cliche fics I've ever read! I love cliche (just to clarify that I'm not insulting you or your writing!). I'm fairly certain I've reviewed before, but I just wanted to come back, read and enjoy again, and then add you to my favorites
Name: xNymphadoraX reviewed Passing the time on Jan 30, 2006 05:34 pm
I can't believe you've only gotten twelve reviews for this. It was absolutely adorable and brought me more than one fit of uncontrollable giggles! I especially loved the bit about Ginny's knickers on Lucius's annual statement. Positively brilliant job!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Passing the time on Jan 26, 2006 05:42 pm
I love it! I love the fact that Lucius catches them because the goblins find Ginny's underwear! I love it!
Name: jchaser reviewed Passing the time on Nov 30, 2005 07:01 am
Oh my...what an incredible story! Love your writing style and the plot, premise, dialogue, etc was just tremendous. Will have to head over to your live journal. Thanks for such an incredibly enjoyable one shot - though I do harbour the hope that you might change your mind in the future and expand upon it.
Name: HP Geek reviewed Passing the time on Nov 30, 2005 04:28 am
I love the way you write. Funny and Sexy!! I loved this story!! Great job!!
Name: HP Geek reviewed Passing the time on Nov 30, 2005 04:27 am
I love the way you write. Funny and Sexy!! I loved this story!! Great job!!
Name: megami_no_ushi reviewed Passing the time on Nov 29, 2005 11:52 pm
LOL I'm not sure which is worse, Authur going full detail into the subject of married life or explaining away Ginny's panties to Lucius. Full points on all scores! hot sex and LOL humour, I couldn't have asked for more! Great job and good luck finishing the rest of your D/G fics!
Name: suzymaholic reviewed Passing the time on Nov 29, 2005 07:10 pm
I liked this one a lot. Wow. I liked the plot. I really like the part with Lucius and Draco. LMFAO! ok. Great job!
Name: Faith reviewed Passing the time on Nov 29, 2005 05:23 pm
Still so good second time around! ;) But where's Pandora's Paradox part 3?? *Pokes* Just kidding! No rush ^^
Name: Mynuet reviewed Passing the time on Nov 29, 2005 03:45 pm
I do so love this story. The sex is nice and hot, but the conversation with Lucius is priceless.
Name: JuliusCaesar reviewed Passing the time on Nov 29, 2005 03:40 pm
heavens to betsy! that was hilarious. Well done!
Name: Dex reviewed Passing the time on Nov 29, 2005 02:58 pm
Hehehe... Ah. That's a stunningly good idea. Ha! Draco and Ginny fucking in a pile of money. I love the part where Lucius tells Draco about the knickers though. This is comedy gold!
Name: Adelagia reviewed Passing the time on Nov 29, 2005 01:50 pm
Oh, that was thoroughly enjoyable. Congratulations on finishing your first D/G; if only I had the same resolve. :) Well done, the humor and dialogue were just excellent.
Name: Kel reviewed Passing the time on Nov 29, 2005 01:27 pm
u should soo write a sequel but omg the scene with lucius was AWESOME haha nice fic i loved it!
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