hey, love your story, very original. just wondering tho, if there's a price on ginny's head, wouldn't it be somewhat risky for draco to take her out in public?
thanks for the great work,
ryaka

I'm beginning to realize there will be no happy ending. With that in mind this is a heart renchingly amazing story. I await it's end

Ouch. Damn, woman, but that was good. The bitter!bitter!Draco that started out was very potty-mouthed indeed, but I really loved your Christo. And some of your phrasing was briliant.

"It was as foreign as the thought of life without her."

And your longer section about the fire-haired phoenix was equally poetic. I liked them both very much, as with most of this chapter.

Your conception of a 'true pureblooded witch' was a stroke of genius, and despite her impending death, I'm certain that your fans will love the fact that she's finally going home.

Well done, indeed. Brava.

That was amazing!

:o
she's going to DIE??? why are you so cruel to them?? So many obstacles, and now THIS????? why?
Couldn't there be a mystery cure? I like the sound of a mystery cure.....

*wanders off to find one...*

Whoa. Even though the end is near for them and us. I was ecstatic reading this chapter. Though Gin is broken at this point it's good for her to know that Draco doesn't love her only for her beauty but her obvious strength. As for Christo it takes a bigger man to realize the woman that he loves belongs with another, I'm happy he did that for them both.

Great chapter.

Ack! You can't leave us hanging like this...wonderful as always and you've left me anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I can't wait for the next turn in this plot.

You made me cry. It's just so bloody sad to see a beautiful thing reduced to that kind of state. *sniffles* Good job with this one.

Okay, I actually squealed when I brought up the home page and saw that you'd updated. That clinches it, I'm a fangirl.
I'm not sure whether my tears are from heartbreak or the fact that I didn't blink once while reading the last half of this chapter. Oh, fallenwitch! I just want to grab your Draco up and give him a good cuddle. And Ginny dying... crap. I know your dark side. I feel that there's no hope for her. Bad words!

The first paragraph rocked, by the by, and I loved the theatrical metaphors, of course. :) Excellent chapter. Excellent.

This was absolutely heartbreaking. (I mean that in the best way, only something meagerly well written can even touch uponsad. This, with its poignant likeness to reality made me want to cry.) How is it that life hands you something you don't want and then snatches it away just when you've realized you can't live without it? It's the cruelest truth in life. Unfortunately for Draco and Ginny, it has presented itself in the most irrefutable way. I was so proud to see Draco pull himself together, to find the courage to go get Ginny and then prepare himself to lose her all over again. '"I am not the weak-hearted wizard you believe me to be."' I loved that line. Draco, despite his downfalls, is not a weak man and you have fleshed him out well enough to show all the contours of his personality. I'm almost dreading the next chapter, but I'm sure you'll lure me in and surprise me. You usually do.

Oh, crap! Excuse the language. Is that the END? No, it can't be. And is she going to DIE? No... pleeeease no? I shall remain in denial until the next installment.

In other news, that was lovely and heartwrenching as usual, thank you.

Quote: "A tense silence overtook the room and the two wizards, bound by the love of the same woman, sat in the pink chairs in her room ingesting Firewhiskey and staring at one another."

:( poor Draco and Ginny... AWESOME chapter though. T_T

that was beautiful. you could end it there. but i am glad you're not. i need a bit more.