Reviews For White Noise
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Chapter 7 on Mar 07, 2006 01:14 am
That always happens during the most delicious dreams. Grr.
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Chapter 7 on Feb 20, 2006 03:22 am
Oooooh, that dream wasn't about Harry! I was about smutty!Draco! I just know it!
Name: Marcia reviewed Chapter 7 on Feb 19, 2006 09:57 am
This chapter was a waste of the reader's time; there's nothing new in it and the plot is not moving forward. Just more of the same teasing Ginny with the existence of secret goings on. grrrr.......

Author's Response: Do you really think it was a waste of your time to read? You really think the plot isn't moving forward? Well, I'm sorry to hear that. There was loads of new stuff in this chapter, you would just have to read between the lines to get it all. I also felt I added a bit of backstory to Draco, which I feel the reader needs in order to understand the Draco he is now. ;) Also, the reason you feel like the plot isn't moving forward is simple: do you really think time for a widow would move along quickly? I didn't think so. I felt Ginny would feel like she was stuck in a sort of trance. After all, here her husband (who's she's loved since before starting Hogwarts) was murdered. Don't you think she'd be in shock? And the first relationship after her husband...I would think most widows would be afraid to go along with it, in the sense that they might feel like they were being disloyal to their husband. Again, I AM sorry to hear that you didn't care for this chapter but I hope you continue along with WN because things do pick up pace at what I feel is the 'right time.' Thank you for your honest opinion. :)
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Chapter 7 on Feb 19, 2006 09:50 am
Why does Draco have to be such a royal jerk?
I think I remember reading this story further along on another site. Could you possibly tell me wich one? Because I've read up to the end of the gala, and this is all back-tracking for me. Thanks!

Author's Response: It's posted to the fullest extent at Checkmated.
Name: passion reviewed Chapter 7 on Feb 18, 2006 11:29 pm
it is always the damn clocks...great chapter
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