Please, never ever use the word Pop. No one in Britain uses it and Hermione wouldn't especially. Dad is fine. Pop is non-existent.
Otherwise it's a great story :D
HOT & STEAMY just like romance is supposed to be. i want a christmas like that
Sweet!!! I loved it!!! I was great!!
i loved it sooo much.
the line " I'll be there to support you," was adorable. good work!
That was pretty good smut. I'm pleased.
Author's Response: Thanks! Much appreciated. ^^ Rhina
Hahaha! I love manipulative!Hermione! It's fabulous!
The only thing I would mention is that you've obviously paid a bit of attention to English vernacular, so instead of saying "fine" in regards to Draco, Ginny would say "fit" (or something of the like) instead.
Off to the next installment!
Author's Response: I have to say that I appreciate your help. I know some English slang, but clearly not enough. *g* And personally manipulative Hermione was my favorite piece. I like taking her out of the normal role for her and giving her something unusual to do. Thanks for reading and reviewing it all. ^^ Rhina
Ha! I figured that Hermione would just charm him naked and tied up in Saran Wrap, but she's actually handling this with a bit of subtlty. Who knew!? LOL! Alright, I'm off to the next chapter!
Ha! I knew I remembered this story! I think this is the last chapter I read...but, I'll say again that it was fabulous! Off to the next installment!
Ooh, good set up for the story. I'm enthralled. Hell, I'd put on a green dress (really not my color) and paint the town red if Draco (or Tom Felton for that matter) showed up on my doorstep.
I'm very fond of this. The only thing that bugs me is that they're both so gorgeous. I have a problem with that two. In my head they are both beyond that, but sometimes it begins to sound a little too much like the perfect romance, and that's not very realistic. Just make sure you make them seem a little ugly sometimes (not that their partner needs to think they are. Love is blind - literally). That will help it seem more realistic. Unless, of course, that isn't what you're going for.
Also, they did get together pretty fast, but (if I remember correctly) they were together in school so that would make sense. Just make sure to realize that they didn't get together for the first time in one day. I don't see either of them as shallow enough to shag someone just because they look shaggable.
Together...yes, in all the most glorious ways! A most satisfying end to a wonderful fic. Thank you for a most enjoyable ride. -fallenwitch
Author's Response: I am really glad that you enjoyed and read the whole thing. Thanks so much! ^^ Rhina
It was wonderful! Brilliant! And while I adore it, it would probably be good advice to change the category it's in... it is MOST certainly not NOT NAUGHTY! ;)
Author's Response: *laugh* Thanks for that. It's all fixed now! Glad you enjoyed it. ^^ Rhina
Aw! This was one of the best fics I've ever written!
If I was to give it an award, best written would definitely be one of them.
You are so on my fav. author's list.
Aw! They really have a bunch to work out if she fainted at the sight of him!
Author's Response: Maybe not so much to work through as her being thoroughly unprepared to see him. *g* No one expects Hermione to be the sneaky one. Glad you enjoyed the fic enough to read it all! Hope you enjoy the end. ^^ Rhina
He wasn't considering it and he knows it! He knows he wants to go!
Yay! Draco cares for her!
Again, your style of writing captivates me!
Where did you learn to write so well?
I absolutely love your style of writing. It tells the story in a very eloquent way and it really makes me want to read more, which I am about to do!
That was quite an end to the story! I loved the sparring and jockeying for position. It did a nice job of building the tension throughout the chapter, which made the smut so much more satisfying. Thanks for the story!
Author's Response: I'm a firm believer in the fact that they would constantly be vying to best the other - whether in the halls of school, on the Quidditch Pitch or in bed. The trial to dominate never ends! ^^ Rhina
I love it! I think my favourite line was, "I think its against the law somewhere for Malfoys not to be sarcastic" TOO TRUE! ;) Can't wait for more! ;)
waaaaaaaaah. that last one is pure evil. Evil. i want moreeeee!!! :D
Author's Response:*evil cackles* Not too often I get to be evil as a writer - it's such fun! I'm working on the next part right now. Thanks for reading!
^^ Rhina
Well that's always a good reaction! I'm sure Draco's thrilled with that! :P
Author's Response:Considering his ego has now been fed, I should say so, but you will have to wait and see his reaction. Thanks for reading.
^^ Rhina
Obsessive compulsive as I am, I'm going to do a little beta sidetrack here. The following did not make sense. I'm not quite sure what you were trying to say, but it should be reworded.
Finally, the cameraman, who must have been named Creever (or something like that, what did I really care?), said he was done. Then something rather cozy went on between him and the Greasel (maybe she was getting it from more than one source, but who would realistically want to shag the bucktoothed bint?) and I did make sure to let her know I wanted to leave and leave now. Don't ask how. Some things a Malfoy never admits to.
By the way, I really like your characterization of Malfoy. He's wonderful.
Author's Response:Thanks for advice. I'm glad you are enjoy Draco as he's such fun to write.
-Rhina
It was so much fun to read Ginny's disbelief in this chapter, knowing what we already knew! I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Author's Response:The faint is the part that surprised me when I started to write where she saw him. It wasn't what I intended but suddenly it just turned out that way!
Thanks for the compliment! I'll write as fast as I can.
Darn! Ok, youve got to update really soon, i hate cliff hangers. and youve got me!
Author's Response:I hate them too and consider them the evilest of evil but ... but... BLAME GINNY! *g* She made me do it!
I'll keep writing! ^^ Rhina