Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Chapter 12 - Collapse of the Ivory Tower on Mar 03, 2007 05:43 pm
Thank you for this long awaited and much anticipated chapter. I could not have been more thrilled to see it!
Excuse me but WTF? This chapter has just unhinged me. Yes, Draco's death and resurrection by love and magic and the exploding Horcrux seem to have been too much for my delicate constitution. My head hurts.
The Horcrux threw me off. I was not expecting that and did not see it coming - at all. I guess I suck at ferreting out your foreshadowing. Maybe if I got out my microscope, I would stand a better chance. *smirks* I still feel at a loss to pull together all of the other clues you have dropped along the way and am hoping your final chapter gives me a bit of closure there. No, not left hanging just unsure about the significance what happened here.
Name: seegrim reviewed
Chapter 11 - North on Feb 17, 2007 08:38 pm
What an incredible chapter. Each one gets better and better, and the ending of this one is incredible. Thanks for the good read!
Name: seegrim reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Feb 17, 2007 08:28 pm
So Draco was somehow ...feeding... off of Bellatrix? Interesting.
Name: seegrim reviewed
Chapter 9 - The Guardian on Feb 17, 2007 08:24 pm
Wow. Probably a stupid review-but seriously, that's what I thought as I finished reading this chapter. Your Draco's just so tormented-the poor thing. Makes me want to crawl into the story and hug him.
Name: seegrim reviewed
Chapter 7 - Reckless on Feb 17, 2007 07:49 pm
Oh gosh, I really enjoyed this chapter! Thanks so much, I just love the plot of this story.
Name: kitten_1234 reviewed
Chapter 11 - North on Jan 22, 2007 12:22 am
Please update soon, this is great! I like the illustrations too. I can't wait to find out the truth behind the links to Alice and the constellations.
Name: Ice_Dragon reviewed
Chapter 11 - North on Jan 13, 2007 01:56 pm
write some more i like to much.
Name: MrsRupertGrint reviewed
Chapter 11 - North on Jan 02, 2007 02:12 pm
aaagh! what is this cliffhanger nonsense!?! it should be outlawed... good chapter, i can't wait to see what happens
Name: seegrim reviewed
Chapter 11 - North on Dec 29, 2006 06:01 pm
Wow! Oh my gosh that was so awesome! I know it must be annoying hearing this when you just updated, but I cannot wait to read more! This was great!
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter 11 - North on Dec 29, 2006 01:32 pm
Aaargh! You can't leave it there! Nooo! I certainly hope that you will update this soon, or I will surely go insane.
Author's Response: Well, I hope you liked the new chapter instead! I swear though - ask fallenwitch - I had not intended three months to lapse before the following chapter came out! I was writing it in December and dang, suddenly it was March!
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Chapter 11 - North on Dec 28, 2006 04:13 pm
Oh good lord woman, what next? Am I suppose to understand this gibbly gook about everything being what it isn't? Argh, this fic hurts my brain and my heart, but I love it!
What about this magic between Draco and Ginny? Will she feel his ill-timed, unwanted flight toward the "dark peace of a a lasting oblivion" ? *shudders* Isn't that the bond that will save him in the end? Will Narcissa help him figure that out? Why is she so powerful to the Order? What powers does she have? Will she put 6 and 5 together and realize it equals 2? Will you post another chapter before I lose my mind?
All snarkiness aside, it was a gorgeous, evocative chapter that left me confused, on the edge of my seat and wanting more. Thank you so much for posting this! I can't believe there's only one more chapter. One more chapter for Draco to be revived and for Ginny to come to his rescue and for the two to sail off into the land of happily and snarkily ever afters.
Author's Response: No - nothing is suppose to make sense anymore! Or ever! (Hello - Alice in Wonderland to the extreme!) And well, now you know she felt it - knew that something had happened to him! You know - in math, there's a theory called consequence, in which 1+1=0 and I had an excellent non-DG idea for it before I even began reading DG but it never really came to fruitation. Hmm, maybe I should write that instead of this.
Btw, my usual email account isn't working - I'm sending to that "other" (gmail) account that you don't use. I probably should have MEMORIZED your email by now but alas, I haven't.
Name: Riddikulusly reviewed
Chapter 11 - North on Dec 28, 2006 07:15 am
OMG!! I can't believe this happened!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Draco really isn't dead.......excellent chapter, I loved the way you portrayedh is emotions and his feelings. Brilliant story, please keep writing and update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I do leave awful cliffhangers don't I? ;)
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed
Chapter 11 - North on Dec 27, 2006 10:21 pm
WTF? Lost? Death? DagNammit!
Author's Response: Yes, I seem to be getting that reaction from readers but as you know, I wouldn't kill him! Or at least, I didn't. ;)
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 25, 2006 02:25 pm
I'm more intrigued by this story than ever, but also extremely confused. I am fully confident, however, that it will all come together in the end. I can't wait to see what will happen. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Haha, well, hopefully I can pull it all together in the end. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: mo reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 24, 2006 12:51 am
STILL LOVING IT, write more soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you've stuck with it!
Name: Persephone33 reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 23, 2006 04:02 pm
Well.
That was unexpected. Bella is pure, unadulterated E-VIL. Worse than Voldemort, I think.
So she did something to him, gave him something with that kiss, right? Ick. I would not presume to guess.
But I'm hoping for a happily ever after. Or at least a 'no one that I love dies' ever after. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I was creeped out by Bella when I wrote this! But what the plot demands must be fulfilled... Thanks for reviewing!
Name: DanRadcliffesgrrl reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 22, 2006 12:12 pm
Wow. I'm surprised at what happened. I think it was good. I have no predictions but I do hope that Draco took enough energy from Bellatrix that she will die. I'm hoping but I'm not sure you would take her out this story just yet. I like how you incorperated Alice in Wonderland, too. Hope you update soon! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for a thorough review! I didn't really expect anyone to guess the strange workings of my mind but it's nice to get feedback to check if I'm leading people down the wrong road! As to death...well, next chapter!
Name: ablaze reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 22, 2006 09:50 am
OHHH I CANT WAIIT! I adore this story ;; brilliantly written! Keep us posted, wont you?
Author's Response: Haha, of course!
Name: die Loreley reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 22, 2006 12:50 am
Loved it! Keep on writing, please! (p.s. Bella makes me wanna puke too!)
Author's Response: Yeah, I was disturbed writing that part! I was like...uh, should I do it, should I not...but in the end, I had to for the sake of the story.
Name: babigurlchels reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 10:59 pm
I really like this story... I would like to see what happens next soon!
=)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! The next chapter is coming along...
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 06:29 pm
This is more than just a read as I had seen it before. Reading this is more of a study now and not a boring one. The complexity of the thought in the characters is at first seemingly simple but if you read into it more you understand alot and at the same time nothing because I dont have the full knowledge of their thoughts... I think that Draco is a balance of dark power and light power he needs both to be well I think that Ginny makes him feel good because she is light where his aunt was dark. He takes from Ginny and has now taken from his aunt. I dont think Draco can handle it at this point he needs but like Ginny said their doing everything they can for him but is it enough?
Author's Response: Ah, a very thorough analysis but don't worry, I won't make it too hard at the end! Hopefully everything will be explained. In writing the next part, I've been going back over the story again to make sure I get all the threads back together! Haha, it's gotten to complicated for me even!
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 04:53 pm
OMG, Draco's a Dementor! He's just given Bella the kiss! Wait, that doesn't have anything to do with Alice in Wonderland, does it?
Well, you have just forced me to break my month long promise not to read any fanfic until NaNoWriMo was over. Who cares? It was a fabulous, glorious chapter. Two more chapters? Is it possible? Is Draco an Alice-like character, confused and pushed around and in the end the one who emerges from it all after turning the world on its head? And Dumbledore? Is he the King who pardons everyone? Isn't he the one who told Draco he had a choice - he could use his powers to heal or not as he saw fit? That he could be whoever he wanted to be? Obviously, I have no freaking idea of what is going on but will doggedly hang on until the end.
Thank you for updating one of my favourite fics! How noble was that? Draco falling on the sword to save Ginny's life? Did he just save his own by being willing to give up his life for hers? Same bat time. Same bat channel... I'll be here!
Author's Response: Haha, that's the funniest comment I've had in a long time. Gosh, Alice in Wonderland is disturbing enough without any *kissing* involved!
Name: sillysun reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 02:17 pm
I just read through everything you've got so far and wanted to say how much I like it. Will definitely look forward to more - you have a nice touch.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you like it!
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 11:51 am
oooh
I just started reading this and it is vair good...
well written, and the like. the plot thing is vair exciting ;)
can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Oh thanks so much for reviewing! Haha, great choice in fandom name
Name: Audrey reviewed
Chapter 10 - The Black Queen on Nov 21, 2006 10:55 am
OMG! YAY!! You've updated :D I'm am sooo happy, wonderful chapter..the plot is thickening and I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please keep on writing and update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm *finally* getting around to the next chapter. Hopefully, it'll be out soon!