i hate but love the deatheators as you can have so much fun with them as charactors please add more xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Murderous Cliffhangers are evil, EVIL.
Great job so far, I'd love to see you return to this.
im loving it how blaize acts and it sounds believable to there charactors please write soon
Ooooh, very nice. Keep writing, PLEASE!
this is really vair fabby. is there more?
hey, please continue this fic! it is really intriguing and well written. great job!
Keep going, I like it.
Very dark so far. I'm fascinated to read where you plan to take this.
a smashing chapter, although I would have liked it a bit longer.
I understand how hard it can be to write however, and your cliff hanger is indeed a good one ^_^
I'll be waiting for your next update!
I would be lying if I said I didn't like where this is going. I hope to see a realistic portrayal of Draco... none of this fluffy Mr. Nice Guy, right?
I really like the plot of this story but the story itself seems dis-jointed and fragmented.
It may just be because of the fast pace of this first chapter, but I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you like the plot so far! :) I can understand your thoughts on the plot seeming dis-jointed and fragmented, I think it become a bit more smooth in the future. (or at least I hope so)
Ooh. Very interesting. Please update. More.
Good flow- so sad that Luna died though.
Please update, like I said again.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :) I'll try to update soon, and I'm glad you liked it.
ok, so far i am hooked. i assumeyou have a good angle, i cant wait to see what comes next. like are the boys going to take advantage of her?
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! I hope I end up having an angle that's to your liking, it's a little bit out of the ordinary. :)