Name: Hopeless reviewed
Harmless on Jan 08, 2008 03:55 am
all right! the two are started to talk, this is looking good!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Harmless on Aug 01, 2006 01:06 pm
~I love the pace of this story but i find it very choppy.~
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Harmless on Feb 27, 2006 03:15 pm
It's really good. The chapters are short, but the story feels like it's moving on at a good pace. Can't wait for the next update! ;) Cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Name: Jewels reviewed
Harmless on Feb 27, 2006 08:48 am
I really like the way this story is shaping up, although i agree with the other reviewer about longer chapters. Even though you seem to be adding them quite quickly, there's only a certain amount of reading a site member can do and it would just be alot simpler to read. I love the way Ginny and Draco aren't friends straight away. It annoys me when people do that. :) thanks for the great story so far, and keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Harmless on Feb 26, 2006 04:19 pm
I like the writing style. I like the plot. I like the D/G interaction. I love what they are both doing in their respective rooms - "Nothing". Thanks for posting here! -fallenwitch
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Name: Btchybrunette reviewed
Harmless on Feb 26, 2006 03:24 pm
Good interaction. I am thrilled to see they haven't immediately begun as friends. I want to read more
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Nectaris reviewed
Harmless on Feb 26, 2006 02:44 pm
I like this. It's intriguing and different.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Harmless on Feb 26, 2006 01:10 pm
This fic is moving fast in the way of Order business but very slow in the way of Draco and Ginny's relationship.
Does Ginny still have feelings for Harry?
Also I think your chapters should be longer, it makes it easier to understand what's going on especially if your readers are reading on an update to update basis.
I read tons of stories on D&G.com so it's hard for me to keep all of them straight, and if you updated with longer chapters it would be much easier to fall back into your story's plot.
Great beginning though!
Author's Response: As chapters proceed, you'll see there is more character development than plot. It somehow takes a twist. Ginny surely still has feelings for Harry - we'll see about that, later. Later chapters will grow in length and detail - til then - Thanks for the review!