Name: Mrs Alfred reviewed
The Bachelorette on Aug 26, 2006 02:15 pm
"Boards were flying about and nails sailed through the air after them. Amy was squirming with delight at all the action going on around her." If you are going to incorporate this at least add another sentence where he wraps a protection spell around her. Or mention how all the wood, and nails are magically and safely flown around the construction site. Otherwise this is callous and cringe-worthy.
Author's Response: If Draco had used a protection charm I would have mentioned it. There is nothing safe about a construction site and that is why Lisa was slightly worried about Draco taking her there. Feel free to cringe if you like.
Name: Kisou reviewed
The Bachelorette on May 30, 2006 09:56 am
You called Lisa's baby Amy and then once you sliped up and called her Amber. It was right after Draco asked how the Potter Project was going.
Author's Response: The Amy/Amber thing is intentional, you’ll understand it soon. Chapter 12 explains it a bit more. Thanks for the review!
Name: Experience My Dreams reviewed
The Bachelorette on Apr 04, 2006 08:53 pm
Great So Far Can't Wait For More!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Updates coming soon!