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Aah! This story just *cannot* end here! I feel so invested in Draco's plight. Poor guy really can't catch a break, can he?
The tension between Ginny and Draco was well expressed. "Stop looking at me in that tone of voice." is a prime example. *g* You can just sense that they are both at their wit's end.
I wonder whether Draco will go after Ginny to apologise and explain his abrupt behaviour. Or maybe he'll decide to retain a slither of his 'Malfoy pride' as he calls it and return to having tense silence between them. Will they both still be in the cottage when the baby is born? How will it be delivered? Will the child look like it's father? So many possibilities...
I really hope that you continue this story, as it has great promise. Oh, and happy new year! :)
Oh my goodness. Totally not what I was expecting. I don't know quite what to say. *rushes off to read the next chapter*. *rushes back for a sec* Just to say that the Ginny/Draco argument was totally spot on. Draco's total confusion at Ginny's actions were realistic as I was as confused as he. Ginny's righteous indignation is a hard thing to write, I think, but you definitely managed it.
Even when I think I can't love this Draco more, I read the last part of this chapter and *squee* as he clearly loves Ginny so very much, even if he curses everyone and everything that caused their circumstances to be what they are.
Draco's characterisation is brilliant. His inner voice berating himself hits just the right balance of being self-critical without becoming whinging. Lines like:"The bloody stuff was obviously contagious and perilous to his health." and such are very Draco.
~...and he was absolutely devastated. ~
Poor Draco! You've so masterfully conveyed how adrift Draco feels now that he has lost his purpose, his drive in life to return to Ginny after the war. I got so excited when he saw Ginny at first, but had a niggling doubt that all would go smoothly, unfortunately it seems like that first instinct was right. For some reason, though, I feel like Ginny must've had *some* reason for being pregnant... maybe she thought Draco was dead? Then she met someone and is now pregnant by him? I shall read on and hope there is a good enough reason..
Wow. Draco's desperation to hold on to a memory of Ginny is so heartfelt.
The style of the writing in this chapter is very effective; Draco's monologue of his thoughts on his relationship are not from when he is sitting alone, but actually him trying to sort through his thoughts while Ginny is pleading with him.
The last line is heartbreaking :'(
I always love your Dracos but I think you've abandoned the fic, which is really upsetting cos I wanted to know who's the father!! Haha!!! Oh well. Great job so far though!!!
Interesting story, can't wait to see more of it.
you really should continue it.
please, for me?
Okay, this fic is totally NOT crashing and burning. I, for one, and eagerly awaiting another chapter. The angst is ripping my gut to pieces (that paired with the angst in Along Came a Wizard). I can't wait for the endings to come out happy after all of the gut-wrenching that has been going on.
So, don't think your fic is crashing and burning. It's really well written and I can't wait for another installment.
Is this story going to get an ending? It's great so far
Great job, can't wait to see what happens next! And who's the father!?!
Here's hoping that Draco suffered from amnesia as well *Grins*
Kinda feel for that poor guy- having the baby along isn't exactly going to help things if the baby isn't his.
I hope it doesn't crash and burn!
i dont think its crashed... but where is it going?
I absolutely love this story. I like the twist with Ginny being pregnant but not knowing who the father is etc. I can't wait until we find out what happened to Ginny while Draco was away and the sexual tension between the two is amazing.
I think your story is wonderfull, please keep it going!
That was fantastic! I really enjoyed it! I can't wait until you have the time to update again!
See, I had a feeling that it was going to be either an amnesia thing or a Draco-casting-memory-charms-on-himself thing. I can't wait to see how it comes out!
A couple of little things:
"All he knew was when everything when to hell in a handbasket, he was the one who ended up being fucked, royally screwed up the arse."
I think you meant to write "went" instead of "when" here (the second time it is used).
Also, in previous chapters you capitalized "veil" and here you don't. You are using it in the same manner. I'm not sure whether it is supposed to be capitalized or not, but I just thought I'd give you a heads up for consistency.
Other than that, it was fantastic. The thing about not reading fanfic for awhile -- all your favorite stories are updated once you have the time to return to all of it! I was so excited to see this one updated I couldn't contain my glee!
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out those errors and inconsistencies. According to the HP Lexicon, veil is not capitalized - I had to check on that! They are both fixed now! I am notorious for reading right through things like that (and much worse!). However, I am thrilled to finally have a beta to help me!!! Yeah, Marcia!!! Thanks for your review, MrsDanielRadcliffe!
this is such a good story right now i love how draco and ginny are separated and when they have a chance to be together, she's pregent and has amnesia...great twist i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Well i don't know about other ppl but i like the story
Absolutely loving this one, so there shall be no crash n burn for this one, I'd be devastated. There's nothing quite like Draco POV story and the circumstances in this one while a bit soap operay are fantastic, so you have to continue until we at least resolve the whole baby daddy thing...please with a cherry on top?
You really should keep going on this. I love your stories, the plot is always so well developed and you can never guarantee that you know what is going to happen. That kind of story writing keeps you on the edge of your seat.
Also, is Draco going to get good news anytime soon?
O dear... what a total mess. Have to say that i don't feel totally sympathetic towards Draco. Sure, he is miserable; but what about Ginny?
Poor thing... to be pregnant AND have amnesia AND to top it off not to know who the father of her kid is....
Dear, I love this story! I don't sense it crashing and burning any time soon, so don't worry! You still have me! Keep up the good work!
Bon chance! Sky