Name: dracosmysextoy reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 16, 2006 09:18 pm
oh. my. god. i was starting to lose interest with your story because it's just so sad (but i can't do it. haha) but then everything got better and i'm like at the edge of my seat right now. i'm still holding on to my theory that ginny got raped because that way it wouldn't be her fault that she's pregnant. hmm.. i wonder who the father is? obviously she forgot everything because of her stupid amnesia and right now all i want to know is that who the child belongs to. i mean for one second, i thought there was a possibility that it was draco's but then it's a big no. i also like ginny's feisty attitude in this story and hwo she can manipulate our wonderful drakie.. thanks for updating such a wonderful story.
Name: Mj reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 16, 2006 07:23 pm
Did she lose her memory when she was knocked unconscious? Great chapter, update soon!
Name: Embellished reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 16, 2006 05:56 pm
Oh dear. This is not what I expected. Of course I should know better than to expect anything with your stories. You always throw in something that drives me up the wall and nearly around the bend. And knowing you, we won't learn the answers for a LONG time. Of course I will still eagerly read each chapter you post, hoping against hope for a tiny little clue... So please don't take too long to update. Or if you do take a long time, please put lots of information into your next chapter. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Oh, my. Well, I think your review is one of my all time favorites, especially this part, "You always throw in something that drives me up the wall and nearly around the bend. And knowing you, we won't learn the answers for a LONG time." I fell over backward laughing with a blushing red face! The red face was for the amnesia - which I know is the part that is driving you up the wall. It's a bit clichéd and one of the things I initially felt uncomfortable about - plot wise. However, as I thought about it the second time around, I said, "what the heck?". Thanks for your review. It made my day. -fallenwitch
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 16, 2006 05:42 pm
I love your stories! Your Draco is lovely - snarky but caring goodness. This is a most unexpected twist and I'm dying to know who the father of her child is. So exiting!
Author's Response: Thanks, wcoast_girl! I'm glad you approve of this Draco. I like him a lot as well. -fallenwitch
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 16, 2006 04:52 pm
She doesn't remember? ANYTHING?! Oh man... This could get interesting... Can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: Nope, nothing since before the War! -fallenwitch
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 16, 2006 04:21 pm
It's Fab! YAY an update! ;) And I am just as confused as Ginny is -- I'm hoping it's some sort of Time-Standing still thing that the Order placed around her to keep her safe... but it probably isn't... it's probably Scarhead doing the Polyjuice potion thing... or worse... LUCIUS! YUCK! Oh well -- I trust you to explain it all later -- It will be a happy D/G story right? I loved how he still refered to her as 'his' pregnant fallen witch. And yeah-- I tend to call Harry Scarhead -- especaially if he has the possibility to tear my OTP apart! ;) Cheers! ;)
Author's Response: Polyjuice potion? Yuck! Lucius? Yuck! Icky, icky, sneaky little ideas. Great! Love the way your mind is working. Thanks for the wonderful review! -fallenwitch
Name: Nakita reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 16, 2006 04:01 pm
I read this story the first time and am happy its back. Maybe this time we'll find out what happens. I am very curious at this point. More soon please
Author's Response: Thanks, Nakita. Glad you're back and still curious. I'm amazed at the number of readers who remember it because it was such a disaster the first time around! -fallenwitch
Name: jessica reviewed
You're Nutters on Apr 16, 2006 03:37 pm
oh, this is very interesting!! were all those kids she was with before hers? i wonder who's it could be, or is there still a possibility it could be his??? please update soon, this story is very very good!
Author's Response: No! Those kids at the camp containing the headquarters of the Order belong to the members of the Order. They left them there for safekeeping during the War because it is the safest place right now. Ginny and other folks are there caring for them while their parents fight. Sorry for the confusion! Thanks for your review. -fallenwitch
Name: Mj reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 07:58 pm
A great story. I absoutely love it. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Wow. That's wonderful. The next update will be tomorrow! -fallenwitch
Name: dracosnaughtyprefect reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 07:00 pm
hm.. wonder who's baby it is. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Inquiring minds want to know... Thanks for your review! -fallenwitch
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 06:41 pm
It's all so tragically beautiful and extremely well-written. Quite poetic, actually. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please let Ginny wake up! She needs to explain the child she's carrying!
Author's Response: Thanks. Ginny does have a lot of explaining to do, that's for sure! Glad you're enjoying this one. -fallenwitch
Name: Scanty Slytherin reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 06:07 pm
aaww.. draco seems so sweet in this chapter, so endearing.
I'm still kind of lost as to when the story is taking place.
I almost can;t wait until the battle between harry and voldemort. that should be an interesting chapter.lol.
ginny doesnt have harry's baby does she? That would prolly be the ultimate blow to draco. *shiver* That would be scary.
Please keep going! It's awesome!
-Joanne
Author's Response: Well, he still loves her inspite of everything. He just can't help himself. This story was supposed to start at the end of Draco's seventh year and so this chapter would be about two and a half years after that. However, the timing is one of the plot HOLES I spoke about. The HBP blew through my plot. Will Draco even be at Hogwarts his seventh year? So I decided to ignore that part and hope readers would let me go with the premise that Draco and Ginny had a preWar relationship - period. Hope that helps. Thanks again for your reviews! - fallenwitch
Name: Scanty Slytherin reviewed
His Newly Realized Hell on Apr 15, 2006 03:09 pm
wow. Thats....sad? lol. draco is, I quote, "lower than a snake's belly in a wagon race." I think you have successfully managed to drag Draco to the bottom. Soo... i guess the only way to go is up huh? I think you need a touch more dialogue and some more specifics. Everything is a bit vague and the story seems a bit slow. I still like it tho hahaa. Please keep updating!! It's really interesting. I wanna know whats gonna happen and whats already happened... lol.
Author's Response: You're right. Dialogue is coming in Chapter 4, and we will start to pull away from the close up view we've had through Draco's head to the real world. Just an experimental start, you know, something different. Maybe I'll skip it next fic around. Thanks for your thoughts! -fallenwitch
Name: shadieladie reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 03:00 pm
I Said FIX it!! NOT MAKE IT WORSE ARGGGG !!! She needs to wake up and say she is caring Ron's kid for Hr because she couldn't bear kids or something like that. So he will forgive her and life can go on.
Author's Response: Oh. Sorry. I'll keep working on it. (Actually I laughed so hard when I read your review that I thought I was going to fall right off my chair!) Thanks for your review and your outrage. I appreciate them both. -fallenwitch
Name: chuya reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 12:24 pm
Thank you. Thank you!
I loved this story so much when you first published it and I am so glad you've decided to give it life once more. I'm also overjoyed at the changes made to chapter 3. Poor Draco.
"he pulled the fallen witch into his arms" 'fallen witch' hehe.
Author's Response: You're welcome! And thank you for being one of the two people reading it way back when! Let me know what you think of this time around. Did you know that you are the first person to comment on the "fallen witch" phenomenon, even though I've been putting it in since Quidditch and snuck it in my latest story, Along Came A Wizard as well? Congratulations, now there are two of us in on that secret! -fallenwitch
Name: tuulia reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 11:41 am
yay, so far its cool. keep going!
Author's Response: Will do! -fallenwitch
Name: Embellished reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 10:15 am
I can't really remember much of the first version of this story, though I am pretty sure I read it at the time. But I am glad you decided to resurrect it. This is quite intense! I can't wait to find out the explanations and what will come next.
Author's Response: Hi Embellished, thanks for stopping buy. I always appreciate your thoughts. We'll see how this one goes. -fallenwitch
Name: Jessica reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 10:12 am
i really hope you keep this story going. it's very well written and the plot is wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll try! -fallenwitch
Name: iloveharrypotter reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 08:55 am
I'm going on desperate threads here.
DON'T MAKE IT HARRY'S.
Author's Response: Okay. I hear you, but I honestly don't know what that girl has been up to, you know? -fallenwitch
Name: starry_laa reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 08:36 am
I am just itching to know who the father is! Poor Draco! You really conveyed the pain he feels well. Will we also be seeing things from Ginny's POV too? I've noticed most of your fics are from Draco's POV (definitely not a bad thing, but it'll be nice to see things from Ginny's POV too. Maybe her style of thoughts will be different from Draco's. This fic is definitely off on a good start, but if you do feel it's going to crash and burn, you could manipulate Ginny's character, to get things from a different perspective. Anyway, hope it doesn't crash and burn! Take care.
Author's Response: Hmmm... I don't know about that one. I really suck at writing from Ginny's POV, but I'll give serious thought to giving it a shot in this one. Nothing is crashing or burning yet so I'll keep my fingers crossed. Thanks so much for your thoughtful review! -fallenwitch
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
The Rescue on Apr 15, 2006 08:36 am
Wow! You have such amazing ways with words. I've loved all your stories... like Along Came a Wizard (which I am waiting patiently for an update) but even as much as I loved them... none of them have been written in this way -- your words are beautiful, the feelings and emotions are deep and brooding and I feel them easily when I read... This chapter was fabulous. You really can feel his heart break -- knowing everything that is important to him is lost.... Just amazing. Now, I'm just hoping it's Ginny carry a surrogate baby for Tonks or something... she was raped (horrible thought...) or that she did in fact have a time turner.... Hmmmm... PLEASE PLEASE don't make it Scarhead's baby... I think that would kill Draco!
Author's Response: **falls over in a dead faint from the compliments** Thanks so much for the kind and generous words, jandjsalmon! And I loved the way you didn't even bother calling him Harry, just went straight for the name we all think of him as - "Scarhead"!!! I agree, that would probably kill Draco. Thanks for your wonderful review. I loved every word of it! -fallenwitch
Name: reader reviewed
Breaking His Goddamn Heart on Apr 15, 2006 08:06 am
I love this story and can't wait for the next installment. I also hope you update "Along Came a Wizard" soon, I love that story also and you left us on a cliffie.
Author's Response: So glad to hear you approve of this one! Along Came A Wizard is in a bit of a holding pattern right now. I needed a break. As soon as I can, I'll get back to it. Thought I'd work on some of these other unfinished fics for a bit first! -fallenwitch
Name: dracosmysextoy reviewed
His Newly Realized Hell on Apr 14, 2006 09:47 pm
you are one of my favorite authors. i love all your work and i think that you do a great job in writing d/g fics.
poor draco. i noticed that in you seem to break draco's heart in your stories and i don't want to you to do that to him. i mean come on, why did ginny have to get pregnant? ooh... did she get raped? or is it harry's? hmmm.. i can't wait to see what's gonna happen next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's a wonderful treat to hear that someone out there likes what I am writing. Your comment about breaking Draco's heart is an interesting one. I had the same thought as I reworked this fic. However, in my own defense, I have written many other stories in which I don't break Draco's heart. Quidditch, As Darkness Fell All Around, and Lost to Him. Okay, if I don't break his heart or cause some sort of romantic trouble, what fun is there in it? Besides, I always make him Slytherin tough. He complains and whines and hurts like hell, but he never breaks! Thanks for your thoughtful review. -fallenwitch
Name: Marcia reviewed
His Newly Realized Hell on Apr 14, 2006 08:10 pm
Beautiful chapter! Poor Draco. Wahhhhhhhh........
Btw, I'd be happy to beta for you if you still need one. Not just this story; anything you'd like help with.
xo!
Marcia
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Marcia! I can't tell you the number of times I wish I had a beta I could email to help bail me out of written trouble! I'll email you and we'll chat. - fallenwitch
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
His Newly Realized Hell on Apr 14, 2006 05:21 pm
AHGHGH! Once again... beautiful chapter... but very torturing as well... WOW!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to see that you weren't put off by the level of angst injected into this chapter. -fallenwitch