Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 21, 2009 12:24 am
this story has so much potential, and it's just the way i like it. i know it's been three years, but please consider updating it soon!
Name: darkloveangel reviewed Chapter 1 on Jun 24, 2009 09:09 pm
another chapter? i am really liking, well written and a interesting story line.
so Please!! more more more!
Name: vixenfairy27 reviewed Chapter 1 on May 10, 2006 10:09 am
This has so much potential. I can't wait to see how Draco reacts to Ginny's little escapade.

I hope we can see why Draco returned to the Dark Lords presence. I think this would be very interesting.

See you next chapter.
Name: Meg reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 26, 2006 06:57 pm
Thank you for fixing your fomatting. My eyes appreciate it! Okay, you've got my attention now. My interest is piqued by your plot. I find the idea of marital strain as a result of all that it took to get this Weasley and Malfoy together wholly realistic and cannot wait to see where you take this!
Name: Kisou reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 22, 2006 09:44 am
Can you space this out a little bit more, it's really difficult to read. Put a couple spaces in between the disclaimer and whatnot at the begining and the story. And make it more than one paragraph. Remember, gramatically, each time a new person speaks, you need a paragraph, so you'd need quite a few.

It's got real potential, but it's hard to get through even a chapter as short as that, because of the concentration it takes to read a block like that.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your comments, I corrected the format, so sorry!!
Name: shadieladie reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 22, 2006 03:17 am
I like the story but the formatting is really off and makes reading the story heard.

Author's Response: Thanks, I corrected the format!
Name: lizzyop reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 21, 2006 11:02 pm
Fab idea, quite good, but please do something about the formatting!

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments, I've already corrected the format!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 21, 2006 08:55 pm
ASide from the horrible giant paragrpah -- I enjoyed the beginning... so with a few adjustments, I can't wait to read the next update! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments!
Name: A Concern Reader reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 21, 2006 08:43 pm
Wow, how did this one get by the Cabal? My dear, your story is displayed as one big, unreadable paragraph. You need to go back and put in html tags or fix it in some other way so those of us so inclined may read the damn thing. Thanks so much!!

Author's Response: Sorry! I corrected the format!!
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