Name: SunShine7 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jun 18, 2006 07:37 pm
I loved it!! I hope that you keep up with the story! I can't wait for an update!!!! Thank you for a funny and cute story:o)
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review. I hope to have the next chap up soon.
Name: saucy reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jun 18, 2006 06:01 pm
Very saucy, indeed.
Author's Response: I love that description. Thank you.
Name: Lorelai. reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jun 18, 2006 03:55 pm
Hey...I just wanted to say that I liked this chapter better than your first one. I agree with some of the other reviewers that it's unrealistic. I think that there are lots of situations that an author can put the characters into that are un-canon, and they can act OOC, such as in your fic, but you can still make them believable, if you know what I mean. In my opinion that makes a huge difference in fics like this. I just felt that with a little more work it could have improved is all, both background story and characters. I still liked your fic though...sometimes sweet Draco can be pretty cool. Plus you write well, and can write dialogue well too, which I think can sometimes be tricky. Anyways, I look forward to the next chapter...update soon! Oh, and I really liked Draco's words when Ginny was trying to sneak out-"Don't run off. If you're gone in the morning, I won‘t believe any of this was real."- very sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I know it's off canon. Sometimes it's just fun to play with the characters.
Name: Scanty Slytherin reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jun 18, 2006 01:33 pm
Aww. That was a very cute chapter. Very squishy. *squishes you like a ... squishy thing* And I love the last sentence. I definitely lol-ed when I read that. Please keep going!! Update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you. Cute can be good for the soul sometimes.
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jun 18, 2006 07:26 am
Maybe he should send Potter a thank you card telling him in detail how much of an idiot he is :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm sure Harry would love to read that card.
Name: Angie reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jun 18, 2006 05:19 am
More! More! MORE!! Please *looks at you with puppy dog eyes*
I love it! and how they seem to get along good
Author's Response: Thank you. There will be more, once I get the next part beta read. (Damn commas!)
Name: Brittny reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jun 18, 2006 03:31 am
I love this story! Awww, Draco is so sweet. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review.
Name: kewljules reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jun 18, 2006 02:11 am
This is snarky perfection. Please tell me it's not done. I want more!!
Author's Response: There will be about fifteen chapters. Please keep reading and reviewing.
Name: Phaedra7veils reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jun 17, 2006 09:24 pm
I enjoy your sweet Ginny and Draco. Lovely story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I like Draco to be sweet every once in a while.
Name: rae_grace reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 17, 2006 03:47 am
Can'r wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Name: * reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 16, 2006 11:50 pm
lol that was great i cant wait to see what will happend next! A powerful ginny is a sexy ginny :)
Author's Response: I do like women that can kick butt. Thanks for the review.
Name: suzymaholic reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 16, 2006 08:22 pm
Absolutely great. I laughed out loud a couple of times, good stuff.
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review.
Name: KinGoddess reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 16, 2006 11:42 am
Wicked funny... Update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll update asap.
Name: Scanty Slytherin reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 16, 2006 09:02 am
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Short and sweet! HAHA! That was funny. XD
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review.
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 15, 2006 08:32 pm
Hahahaha! God thats great Ginny asking Draco if she could just use him for sex that is.
Author's Response: Thanks, I thought it was a fun idea.
Name: Nice reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 15, 2006 07:25 pm
lol. it was cute and funny. really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you. I love it when I make people laugh.
Name: adorame reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 15, 2006 06:29 pm
This was cute!!I Loved how she lost her train of thought after being kissed be Draco.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Name: Kisou reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 15, 2006 06:16 pm
This was fun and amusing, but not exactly what I find as realistic. I do remember Blaise saying in book four "I wouldn't touch a blood traitor like her no matter what she looked like", referring to Ginny. One would think Draco's feelings would be very much the same, probably stronger. So, that's kind of giving me a problem.
But, while I was reading that I did kind of come up with a bit of a rebuttal to that: if Ginny and Harry had been dating for two years, it's the seventh book. And let's make the assumption that, as Draco is still living and able to come back to Hogwarts, he has in some way taken up Dumbledore's offer (even though Dumbledore is dead) and gotten protection from the order, denouncing his father. Let's assume, as Blaise is still talking to him, that he either wasn't affiliated with the Dark Lord, or he has, too, denounced him. And, as a result of both that and growing up (Do you remember the change between kids in middle school and high school?) they've become more adjusted accepting people. It doesn't really matter if anyone else knows Draco's story, but the readers should have some idea if you want them to buy his actions.
Anyway, my point is that, even if this is, at first glance, not quite plausible in cannon, I think you can make it so, it's just going to take a little back story. Mine was just a spur of the moment rationalization of Draco's actions in this chapter. As for Ginny, I think she's well done here. She's always had a little more backbone than most. And she's certainly the one to do that. (Do you remember what she did when Ron got mad for her snogging Dean?)
Oh, and one more note: I can't see Hermione aiding Ginny. She is more reasonable that Harry or Ron, but she backs them up, as a general rule. Are we to assume that she, unknown to us, has developed a strong enough relationship with Ginny that she'd help her hurt Ginny? I mean, Harry was in the wrong, but would Hermione really give Ginny tomatoes? I don't know. Maybe she would. But it's a distinct characteristic that I wouldn't have given Hermione, so you need to make sure to keep that kind of think consistent if you want it to hold up.
Good luck. I hope you keep writing. I'll watch this story to see what happens to it.
Author's Response: Wow, you really gave my story a lot of thought. I do tend to go off of canon. I just think the characters are so interesting, and I love the setting of Hogwarts. Maybe I'll come up with some author's notes to help people with my pov. Thanks for taking the time to write such a detailed review.
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 15, 2006 04:37 pm
God, I needed that. I laughed and hooted and hollered my way through that glorious chapter. And that kiss, good lord, I'll have a dozen of those please! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I like to make people laugh. Thinking about those kisses can be lots of fun too.
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 15, 2006 04:30 pm
Loved this the first time I read it on HPFF and reading it again, I love it even more. Great job, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am reviewing the story as I post it here, so there may be minor differences.
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 15, 2006 04:03 pm
Aw! A little unbelievable, but still a very good fic. I especially liked when Draco pulled Ginny back to him :-)
Great fic-let!
Author's Response: Thank you. I like a little happy fantasy every now and again.