Name: Nameless reviewed
Unspoken Pleasures on Mar 02, 2008 08:43 am
Nice poem.
Name: detlefren reviewed
Unspoken Pleasures on Aug 22, 2007 10:19 am
I really liked that! Thanks!
Name: CCC reviewed
Unspoken Pleasures on Jun 22, 2006 06:29 pm
It's late at night, and I'm having trouble wrapping my brain around this. I like the questioning/yearning at the beginning. It gives you the sense that they are doing something they know is wrong, but they aren't willing to stop. Did I get it?
Author's Response: Well, I think you're on the right track, but nothing has really been initiated yet--she's just watching him, waiting for something to happen. But you were close! And you're right about: they know it's wrong, but they don't want to stop.