Name: ChosenOne reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Aug 23, 2021 09:55 pm
I know this is a classic, but no one at the agency balks at a fake last name? Even if it is one back in the family tree? That seems like something clients in the CONTRACTED MARRIAGE business people would complain about. Also--Ginny had placed a framed picture of her family in her room and then precedes to pull a fully separate one out to study/lament over? Yikes or maybe bad beta reading.
Name: chocolate_snow reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Sep 10, 2008 02:07 am
..sigh..........i do so love the setting.....your descriptions are awesome!!!
Name: tinamarie reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Mar 12, 2008 01:33 pm
OMG this is written beautifully I can't wait to read on!!!
Name: Agne reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Jul 07, 2007 12:24 pm
Great story, even though I'm only on the second chapter. I'll be sure reading it all, though! Also I'm rather excited about you mentioning Lithuania, even if it's so briefly, because I'm from there. Just a little quibble, Lithuanian names are nothing like that :)
Author's Response: I'm happy you're liking the story :) What name would be Lithuania? i.e. what, in your opinion, could be the name of a beautiful and elegant, if vapid, young woman from Lithuania seeking to marry? I'll switch it to whatever you suggest in my rewrite.
Name: mysticmemories reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on May 27, 2007 05:18 am
THere's a lot more detail in this version than the MNFF one. I like this one bttr, of course..i'm gonna read on!
PS-loooooooooooooooove ur story
Name: Mackenzie reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Sep 12, 2006 11:05 am
A superb start to a story! cant wait to read on ;-)Innovative plot so far!
Author's Response: geez, thanks :) Hope you enjoy the following chapters :D
Name: stormcloud1972 reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Aug 25, 2006 07:57 am
Three cheers for getting my Alma Mater in a D/G fic! Never thought that I would see that. I loved the chapter and the building anticipation. I just don't know how Ginny is managing to stay sane between "happily" living with Draco and being the cause of all his problems.
Author's Response: thank you! if I may ask, who is your Alma Mater? I'm glad you're enjoying the build-up... I wasn't sure if this is taking too long, but in any case, that's the only way I'll be able to place all I want in there. Maybe Ginny was simply used to growing up in an insane family?
Author's Response: PS. It appears you are a Perfect Imagination beta. Know anyone who might agree to go over this fic's rewrite? Last time I went through PI, I lost three weeks and no one was available (though since then, Naycit became PI beta, but I don't want to bother her with the same thing over and over again) Thanks!
Name: Mollie reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Jul 13, 2006 05:35 pm
That was really good, though I am slightly confused. I will continue and I hope that the future chapters will have answers.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am, likewise, confused: what confused you? I'd be glad to try to explain myself, and, of course, make sure that all becomes clear either in this chapter or the next. If the confusion I caused is involuntary, then it has to be taken care of!
Name: youmuggle reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Jul 09, 2006 10:45 am
flipping amazing. update soon!
Name: Blanchefleur reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Jun 30, 2006 10:21 pm
I like your story it has potential , i hope you continue with it. It has been really interesting!
Name: Marcia reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Jun 30, 2006 10:05 pm
Well done! Do continue! You've set it up to be a fun read. Thank you.
Name: WG reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Jun 30, 2006 04:19 pm
Fab start... can't wait for more.
Name: Phaedra reviewed
1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Jun 30, 2006 02:40 pm
Oh, very mysterious. Presuming Ginny was the strange woman at the cemetery, it would be interesting to know why she chooses Draco. The Katias were very strange, especially the ones with wands popping out of their bellies. Are they Matryoshka dolls?
Author's Response: You'll figure out soon enough why she chose Draco >:] yes, the Katias are Matryoshka dolls. I would have given more detail as to their wooden-y appearance, but was afraid of boring readers. I'm glad you picked it up though :D