Reviews For Hesperides' Apple
Name: fanfictionfreak reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 03:52 pm
oops i wasnt signed in when i did the other review. i was the one that asked what ur name meant. anyway, this story is amazing. i REALLY want a happy ending but i dont really care cuz ur an amazing writer and always surprise me and stuff. so yea. k gud luck!

Author's Response: My name... my real name? or "ogygiasylph"? the second one is a reference to the former: Calypso was a nymph in the Odyssey, and she ruled over the island of Ogygia. A sylph is a spirit of the airs. Together it sounded weird but fun, and I liked it. I hope the ending will be happy. Honnestly I have no idea yet... Thanks for the review!
Name: heya reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 03:49 pm
hey i was just wonderin...what does ur name mean?
Name: That Iz I reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 03:47 pm
Well now...That was a great chapter. Except, I hope to hear Draco's story. The story of how he came to kill the Weasley's. Otherwise, I'm very very pleased.
Thanxxx
Name: CCC reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 02:17 pm
I so want a happy ending, but I just don't know if it is possible. I'll check back to see.
Name: Mollie reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 01:47 pm
Wow, that is a lot of anger! I hope that they can reconcile their differences and get back together, happily, anyway.
Name: ellie reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 01:15 pm
:o
dios mio
well a lot happened there, didnt it?
scary.
Name: lonelyicequeen reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 12:40 pm
finally he unveiling of ginny that was really good keep up the amazing work
Name: Shadow Rise reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 12:26 pm
Oh I love the way this story is written. Perfect characterization of Draco! Cold, calculating, burning with rage...
Name: 0630938 reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 12:02 pm
ohhh shiit trouble


Author's Response: indeed... (dum dum dum duuuummmm)
Name: Elf reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 12:01 pm
This chapter was wonderful! I feel so bad for them. *cough* Will they get a happy ending? *hopes so* ...

Author's Response: Thank you :) I dunno yet about the happy ending, though I can promise you they still have a number of troubles ahead!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 11:30 am
Loved it....can't wait to see how this goes. Good Luck and take your time. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks also for the "good luck"--I'll be needing it!
Name: spider reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 11:15 am
Wow.


Draco's anger in the scene where he finally finds out who "Ginevra Vassil" is was perfectly written. Despite knowing that you're such a sensational writer, I'd wondered if it might come across as cheesy or something.

Needless to say - it wasn't. It was perfect. When Draco decided to shoot a million questions at her, I actually started to feel a little befuddled myself - I can just imagine how Ginny felt. And he caught her spot on. And the knife he threw at her head...!. Suspenseful things like that are what make me love this story so much.

Now that Draco's found out, I don't know how to feel. I felt horrible for him knowing that he was in the dark, and I feel horrible knowing that he knows the truth. And now it's like Ginny's some sort of captive in the Manor; how will she ever be able to look at Narcissa in the face again?

And what will Draco "do with her" when she has the baby? And I wonder if Draco will allow her to use owls, since she'll want to owl Hermione and let her know that she's been caught.

Ah, I've got so many questions now! And I'm so excited for the next chapter; it's okay that it'll be a few weeks. I need to get work done, and having another chapter of this story would definitely put work on the back burner.

Fantastic chapter.

Author's Response: I'm delighted you liked it. I wasn't sure of how to depict this scene, but in the end I think that's the kind of thing both Draco and Ginny would do in such a situation. You're very right about the tension this is going to add: Ginny is now a prisoner of her own home, in a way. The next chapter will make it clearer as to what he meant by keeping up appearances--not that it will be very surprising. Thanks a lot for your review!!
Name: Tessie Tura reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 11:08 am
Holy Sh*t. Holy Sh*t. HOLY Sh*t!

Author's Response: hum... in a good way I hope? 0:)
Name: anonymous reviewed 18. Truth be told on Oct 14, 2006 11:02 am
that was fabulous!!!!!!! its so sad that they both still think they hate each other! i can't believe Draco wants to keep up the charade..but then maybe they will learn they love each other? and i also really can't believe he would threaten THEIR baby. that was an awesome chapter! thanks. can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: maybe they do hate each other. in fact, i'm transfering this story to www.dracoandginnyshouldneverbetogether.com. JK! hum yeah they'll figure it out soon, but this scene is somewhat of a setback in their realization process. Draco knows a lot about keeping up appearances--he isn't a Malfoy for no reason-- and he does need an heir, after all. (Or maybe it's just his subconscious kicking in...)
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