Name: twiddlekinks reviewed
A Little Home-Brewed Assistance on Sep 17, 2006 04:04 pm
This was a perfectly wonderful chapter. Fantastic job! :)
Name: spider reviewed
A Little Home-Brewed Assistance on Sep 17, 2006 03:05 pm
Ah, but I love long chapters, and especially since it came from this story, it was a treat.
Pierce is one manipulative man...I would never have thought that he would have sunk to the low of using a sort of love potion. He's hardly got any scruples at all!
It's insane because I think that of all of the Slytherins we've met, he's one of the most dangerous kinds. He doesn't seem at all capable of a single cunning thought, but look at him! Plotting left and right, dosing students with potions, consorting with Death Eaters.
I don't know whether to applaud his cleverness or curse him for meddling in something that won't end well at all.
Anyway, thanks for the (lengthy) chapter!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you see Pierce that way! That's EXACTLY how I've been trying to portray him, so I'm really excited that you got that haha.
Name: imelda reviewed
A Little Home-Brewed Assistance on Sep 17, 2006 02:52 pm
Wahoo!! What an amazing chapter! It was very unusual, as I've never heard of anyone using a potion like that to get D and G together. To be honest, I don't know if I find it entirely plausible for the wizarding world, but the effects certainly were fantastic.
It was actually a treat to see how Draco, a fairly in-character Draco, might respond to an equally in-character Ginny without their prejudices. And I think it just speaks to how well the two work together as a couple. Pretty much everything you've been hinting at from Draco's POV in this fic was made clear in this chapter, which is why I enjoyed it so much!
Of course, now I'm dying of curiosity to see how Draco reacts when the potion wears off. What sorts of feelings will linger? Will he figure out that he was poisoned? Will he be mad at himself, or at Ginny?
Ginny was intriguing in this chapter, too, as she seemed seriously disturbed by her vision of Draco. I'm also looking forward to hearing more from her about that.
What a great chapter, and please update as soon as possible!!!
Name: bobkatz reviewed
A Little Home-Brewed Assistance on Sep 17, 2006 02:45 pm
I really liked that chapter, I can't wait to find out what Draco's reaction is once the potions worn off.