Name: Mollie reviewed
Fire and Ice on Jun 19, 2007 01:08 am
Oh, that isn't happy. Well written, though I enjoyed it!!!
Name: dark_prophecy reviewed
Fire and Ice on Jul 25, 2006 08:35 am
Wow, I understand the symbolism and all, but that had to have come from a brilliant mind to come up with it. I give you a very deserved hand.
Author's Response: Thank you! This is really my first time writting symbolism out side of class so I am really really happy that it worked out! Thank you sooo much for the review!
Name: taleweaver reviewed
Fire and Ice on Jul 22, 2006 05:20 am
Your imagery is really nice! You captured the battle of opposite wills very matter-of-factly. I'll be looking forward to more beautiful poetry from you. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I kept changing it around before I posted it, so I am glad that it turned out well! I am so going to continue writing and hope to put out another poem shortly.
Name: Phaedra7veils reviewed
Fire and Ice on Jul 21, 2006 05:32 pm
This is quite a lovely poem. The ending is a bit morbid for me. I kept hoping that it was "Le Petit Mort" that Fire and Ice died of, but even so, there is a nice interplay of quenching and melting, crushing and dousing. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I kept changing it around before I posted it, so I am glad that it turned out well! I am glad that the quenching-melting, crushing-dousing worked out well. I am happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks again!