Name: slygal reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jul 02, 2007 04:51 pm
You are very good at putting feelings into words! I love music and the analogy is beautiful. You put it together fantasticaly and it isnt over the top fluff either as I had thought it would be from your a/n. Very nice indeed!
Name: guest reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 27, 2006 01:57 pm
Aaah, that was sweet. I love the end where she thinks "he is her music" right after he says that she's his instrument. I think I might have preffered the story in more of a novel like style, but the mysteriousness (is that even a word)of how you write this is interesting. Good Job!
Name: passion reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 27, 2006 05:45 am
Wow..that was beautiful...wonderfully written...you captured the emotions so well...and explained them in such intense pleasure...lovely story...fantastic job!! Loved it!
Name: Mynuet reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 26, 2006 05:37 pm
Oooh! I'd loved this when I first read it, eons ago, but I could never find it again. Thanks for posting it here. :D
Name: Funnykido reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 26, 2006 05:24 pm
I really liked this story. I play an instrument myself, so I could really appreciate it.
And I loved how you took the time to show Ginny's POV during her first year, instead of just looking back at it, like most people do. I don't think I've ever read an account of Ginny's first year from her POV that's been at good as yours was. And I also thought that the quotes you used throughout the story fit perfectly, too. Where are those quotes from, by the way? Because they're beautiful, and if it's from a song I am definitely downloading it!
But overall, it was a very beautiful piece, and I really enjoyed it!
Name: lina reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 26, 2006 04:58 pm
such a lovely story. The cello is one of my favorite instruments and probably the sexiest. Someday, I hope to add it to my repertoir. kudos to you. I particularly liked the bold interjections. very poetic.