Reviews For The Enemy of Souls
Name: kellbell930 reviewed Chapter Five on Feb 15, 2007 09:54 pm
hmmm very interesting...cant wait to see what happens with the baby! this is 8 months after the last chapter right? cant wait for more! update soon!

Author's Response: Hmm let's see... it's about five months after the last chapter; Carina was about three months pregnant in the last chapter. Thanks for reading, next chapter should be up soon!
Name: kellbell930 reviewed Chapter Four on Feb 15, 2007 05:32 am
Aww! That was a great story. I cant wait until Ginny actually finds Draco's baby...and what she does next! Update soon! Love it!
Name: ronlover reviewed Chapter Four on Feb 13, 2007 08:13 am
Love it! PLEASE Update soon. Must read more. :)
Name: BloobySue reviewed Chapter Three on Nov 26, 2006 03:17 pm
How did the few days turn in to a few months? I really liked this story, I was hoping there would be more.

Author's Response: First of all, I am so so sorry that I haven't updated in about five months! I should've at least posted an note to let you know I was still here, and that I haven't abandoned this fic. I really have no excuse except that I really just stopped writing when I started my first semester at college, because things were just crazy and took some adjusting to.

But, the good news is, I've resumed writing this fic. I won't make an more promises about how soon I'll update, because things are still a little hectic. But I can promise that I will never abandon this fic.


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Name: BloobySue reviewed Chapter Three on Oct 30, 2006 05:58 pm
Why did you stop writing this? It was genius! Brilliant! This is the story that got me obsessed with D/G!!! Please continue, I lurve this story, YAY!
Name: Xela reviewed Chapter Three on Oct 23, 2006 03:51 pm
i love this story! You write very well. Please update soon!
Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed Chapter Three on Sep 06, 2006 09:18 pm
Really good story. You use just the right amount of description to set the scene. The dialogue is conversational and moves the story along. I can't wait to find out what happens next. And where is the elusive Mr. Potter? Is Daphne Greengrass still with him? Very interesting.
Name: WG13 reviewed Chapter Three on Sep 06, 2006 04:45 am
Wow that was some chapter... i hope Ginny's nephew is ok... that poor kid...

What about the rest of the women that Ginny was with... including her Mum? i mean, i know things are in a mess and all, but how come no one has come to check up on her yet?

Regarding Narcissa, poor woman... how awful for something like that to happen to her... or for that matter, to anyone else as well...

On a different note, all the best for college... hope u have a wonderful time...
Name: BloobySue reviewed Chapter Three on Sep 05, 2006 01:35 pm
HOLY CRAP THIS ROCKS!
Name: Kisou reviewed Chapter Three on Sep 04, 2006 09:59 pm
Wow. That certainly put me on edge. I'm all worried about James now, and I barley know who he is. Though I'm still most intrigued by Draco, which seems, to me at least, to be the point. Good job, keep it up.
Name: Black Alnair reviewed Chapter Three on Sep 04, 2006 07:34 pm
I really like this story so far. The other characters are well done even when they are not important to the plot. I can't wait to see how this unfolds.
Name: Black Alnair reviewed Prologue on Sep 04, 2006 06:15 pm
I am sufficiently intrigued. Ready to read the next part!
Name: spider reviewed Chapter Three on Sep 04, 2006 04:27 pm
I wonder if this is his way of trying to protect the baby. Does Draco think that if people find out that Carina's pregnant with his child that they'll come after her, or it in the future. It's honorable of him in a weird way - she can lie for now if she chooses, but I don't think it would be right to do it indefinitely...

I hope James is all right. And what happened to Narcissa is awful, and somewhat ironic. Draco made fun of spell damaged people once, and now look at what's happened to his mother.

I'm glad you've found time to update so quickly, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hmm, what are Draco's motives? Always a mystery. :) I know, it really depresses me that I had to do that to Narcissa, because especially after HBP, I really find her enjoyable to write! Thanks so much for your comments!
Name: BloobySue reviewed Chapter Two on Sep 04, 2006 02:28 pm
I have to say, this is one of the BEST fan fictions I've ever read, fan fictions in general, not just HP. I am so waiting for you to continue, I absolutely love it. Anticipating the next installment, ~Shae(BloobySue)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it.
Name: Embellished reviewed Chapter Two on Sep 02, 2006 08:39 am
I just had the chance to start reading your story, and it seems like a really good start. I'm definitely interested to see where all of the story lines go, and how they will interact with each other. Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yes, all the different storylines will intertwine eventually, and surprise, surprise, it all has to do with Draco and Ginny ;)
Name: spider reviewed Chapter Two on Sep 01, 2006 08:38 am
Oh no, everything is so tangled up. Ginny's still hung up over Blaise (I really wonder what happened to him; it seems so tragic), no one knows where Harry is, Ron's been attacked, and Draco got a woman - who doesn't want to marry him, who is spying on him - pregnant.

Ah. Let's see how they get out of this.

Good luck with everything, in terms of going off to college, I mean. I have a lot of friends who are just starting off on that this year as well, and they've got orientations and things to do.

Nice chapter.

Author's Response: Oh, yes, everyone is in a right mess, that's for sure! And thanks very much; my first day moving in was pretty terrible, but so far I'm enjoying college life!
Name: Kisou reviewed Prologue on Aug 31, 2006 10:47 pm
I had a hard time telling the difference between the fic and the AN at the first. You might want to put a bar either at the top of your fic or the bottom of the AN as well as a few more spaces for clarity.

Other than that, this seems good. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks about that; I noticed it too and fixed it. Thanks for reading!
Name: lakailah reviewed Chapter One on Aug 30, 2006 03:19 pm
Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Updates should be quick.
Name: ronlover reviewed Chapter One on Aug 30, 2006 11:46 am
UPDATE SOON!!!! Please! This is a really good start.

Author's Response: Thanks! Updates should be quick, since it's mostly already written, an there are just a few parts I have to revise. In the meantime, you can check my lj for cookies and update information.

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Name: Vetta Daughter reviewed Chapter One on Aug 29, 2006 05:52 am
I read this before on schnoogle, dark arts or something. I like this story so please change little.

Author's Response: Don't worry, not much is changed, especially the main storyline between Draco and Ginny. That's all the same. The only difference is some things in these first few chapters, the stuff with Hermione and the runes. Thanks for reading!
Name: WG13 reviewed Prologue on Aug 28, 2006 04:11 pm
Great start... love the fact that Harry isn't some deranged, love sick ass... as for bringing in Daphne Greengrass, fab move... her character is hardly used at all.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I quite like Harry, so I try to stay true to his character as much as possible. I love to use Daphne; unfortunately, her character isn't in this fic or the sequel much, but I love to develop her character. I see her as this small little blonde girl with a lot of sass!
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